Jenna Terese

@christianna-hellwig @faith_blum @myclipboardismyviolin

I have taken note of all your suggestions. 😉 But, sadly, I will be out of the house all day today. I don’t know if I’ll be able to make the changes before the deadline, but we’ll see! But if one of you would like to try and make the changes yourself, be my guest!

@myclipboardismyviolin

Hmm, I see…Christianna thought that it fit better with the story prompt, since that was supposed to be the focus. But I don’t know! I guess I can recover the old story if need be. @faith_blum, are you allowed to give input on this?

@catwing

Lol I guess there’s no chance of getting more reading time, huh? 😛

I’m gonna be leaving now. 🙁 Bye! Happy writing!

@catwing

That sounds interesting. I added it to my Goodreads shelf. 🙂

Ah, her name is Hannah? Then this must be a good book. 😉

Yeah, I’ve found that the older I get, the less time I have to read.

@catwing

I’ve heard about Healer’s Bane, but If This Were a Story doesn’t sound familiar. What’s it about?

I just finished Jupiter Storm, which is so. good. I love the Jupiter Winds duology. And I’m currently reading A Thousand Perfect Notes, which is proving to live up to all the raving reviews. 🙂

@catwing

🙂

I’m so excited about the Book Festival! I bought quite a few books last year that were firsts in series, so I hope to get the sequels this year. 🙂

😀 *squeals* I can’t wait! Every time I think about meeting KP and SE people I get so excited!

Read any good books lately?

@catwing Awesome! 😀 It’ll be so cool to see it at RM! Are you planning on buying books there? Any authors you’re super excited about seeing?

@catwing Yay! 😀 How are you doing? How’s your costume coming?

@dekreel @ariel-ashira

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing @valtmy @kendra-lynne @dekreeal @snapper. @theresa-play @alia

I’m writing now for a bit.

@bookcrazygirl Thanks! 😀

@christianna-hellwig Me too! 😀

@christianna-hellwig Yes! Thank you! 😀 All your suggestions made sense, so I made the changes. Thank you for fixing those little typos. I’m going to go ahead and delete the first story…

@christianna-hellwig @myclipboardismyviolin

Well, I rewrote the story in the same document. I think the sun is more of the focus now, and it’s about two pages shorter than the first story. What do you think?

@myclipboardismyviolin

Thanks. 🙂

Yes, it was. I will work on making it more the center of the story like @christianna-hellwig suggested.

So, I think I’ve finished the rough draft of it. Just need people to take a look at it so we can edit this. 🙂

@myclipboardismyviolin

Well, I have something in the document now. 🙂 I didn’t use the examples you gave me, but you got my brain going, so thank you!

@faith_blum Do you want to tag everyone so that they can take a look at what I have so far in the document?

@catwing

😀

Mmmmmmmm…I don’t think so. I didn’t last time. It’s not really my thing, but I have a lot of fun looking at everyone else’s costumes. I don’t know, maybe I’ll think about it a bit more and consider it. 😉

You can do it!

@myclipboardismyviolin

This definitely helped my brain get going! I’m going to do a bit more brainstorming and see what I can come up with. Thank you! 😀

@catwing AH IT’S GETTING SO CLOSE!!!

As you know, I am going. 😉 I can’t wait to see your catwing costume! 😀