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Mr.Trip Williams

  • Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

    @jared-williams

    Your take on Enydd was pretty accurate. Most people see her as as a happy-go-lucky, naïve person because of her constant laughing/smiling and awe for the world.

    Also, thank you! You have revealed to me a quirk of Enydd’s! She rambles when she’s in shock. XD

    I’ll post her POV tomorrow.

     

     

  • Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

    @jared-williams

    Figure one short one might be okay here? … Hope I can borrow Enydd for this scene… Can you borrow other people’s characters for conversations? hope I do her character justice… please let me know if I do something wrong.

    You’re welcome to borrow Enydd! I’d love to see your take on her!

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

    @emily-waldorf

    @jared-williams

    @calidris ‘ other character is called Saskia! She’s also a genetically enhanced supersoldier, though not as much altered as Basil. Skia is 5’3″, with brown skin and chin-length curly black hair, and dark eyes.

    Also, one correction, Basil isn’t germophobic, though he came across that way at the beginning XD He’s…[Read more]

  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

    @emily-waldorf

    ooh you were so close XD so Lorcan actually has short wavyish black hair heehee, and its sort of an undercut style. He also has gorgeous dark eyes that reminds you of a starry night when you look at them😊 I think i posted a drawing of him somewhere, ill see if I can find it XD

    As for Daire, he has ginger hair tied in a very short…[Read more]

  • @jared-williams

    Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
    That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.
    I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!

    Mr.Trip Willi…[Read more]

  • @jared-williams

    I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!

    They were in the castle before I was, so I don’t know. But I’ll give you the lowdown of all the characters, and the authors can help clarify/correct what I say as they choose

    <span style=”text-decoration: underline;”>Currently Active Characters:</span>

    Isella–my own; you know…[Read more]

  • @emily-waldorf

    That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.

    What page are Klein and Lorcan’s descriptions… I would love to know who is…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

    @jared-williams

    (huff… perhaps it was the urls… is there a limit to one url per post or something?)

    Yep, there is, I forgot to mention that 😅

    Oops… didn’t realize should only have one character in at a time… hehe. Let me fix that.

    You can have two in at a time! Though, some people have had three in at a time for short periods of time. The rules…[Read more]

  • Isella

    There was a roar that sent new thunderings through her brain. She blinked long. the water had helped, and so had the sleep, but she still felt weak and a little ill, and she was cold.

    She looked in the direction of the noise.

    There were two figures about as small as a child, and one the size of a man, but they looked nothing like the…[Read more]

  • @jared-williams

    (weeping massive crocodile tears of sorrow.) Sniff. Sniff. I wrote like an hour worth of cool stuff, and it’s all gone. I got logged out some reason. (tear drop).

    Oh noooo!!!! It’s happened to all of us, we call it the SE gremlins who eat the posts XD It’s horrible, especially when you spent a long time on it!

    Maybe next time you…

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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago

    @jared-williams

    First character… OCD, perhaps a bit of asbergers…? Cynical to the heart. Seeking either revenge or a big score that ha complicated interworking that has her posing as someone else? And she has a hired mercenary fellow who is helping her? My guess, is the she has a plot to steal from a money ship that is set inside a convoy of shi…

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  • @jared-williams

    Aw, man! That is so depressing! :'( I’ve had similar things happen. SE secretly hates us and often tries to destroy our posts. Maybe next time you could try copying it every so often as you write, so if it disappears you can paste it back in and keep going. (SE is foiled and it’s such a wonderful feeling of revenge–ahem,…[Read more]

  • @storysmith

    Hi Joshua,

    So the Kragvora are both humanoid and…

    Are they part insect as well with a carapace or is the formation of some other substance like a tortoiseshell or some reptilian spine/scales.

    Where does their mental collective reside?  At they Borg-like and assimilate their knowledge in some remote collective brain that they…[Read more]

  • @mamaauthoress

    *blinks* I need to figure out how to word things better

    You’re not alone in that sentiment. I find myself butchering sentences quite often. xD

    @jared-williams

    An intriguing world. I might check out sometime, but I should warn you, my…how should I say it, beliefs about supernatural content are rather…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago

    @jared-williams

    All of that is really close to what I was thinking! You did a great job of showing it!

    @everyone

    I have two more characters from the Pirate novel, who are still unnamed, but I know their roles and backgrounds, and their dynamic is really interesting. I’ll see if I can write up something for them later 😀

  • @jared-williams

    I like your characters. I thought I’d written up a response last night about it, but now I see it’s gone (sad face.) And I don’t remember what I wrote…

    Oh well… here’s second impressions. =)

    Oof, I feel that. Oh well, it happens sometimes. 😅

    My first thought was there something about Coryn that makes her an oddity? I had a feeli…

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  • @jared-williams
    @storysmith

    These are very intriguing sets of creatures.

    I have others in my WIP, but the Moonsprite/Gorgon/Jengu is the most bizarre one, I have imagined.

    I have three dragons in my story as well: A Dust Dragon, which tunnels underground and avoids daylight.   A Leviathan that takes its description from Job 41, Isaiah 27:1.  AN…[Read more]

  • @jared-williams

    A very interesting antagonist! He is obviously very torn about having to sacrifice the things he cares for to get the things he desire to carry out his plan. Do you have a short synopsis I could read of your WIP’s world?

    @mamaauthoress

    You did a great job showing Coryn’s mental and heart twisting pain. I could feel it, and it…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago

    @jared-williams

    Looks like Noah got to it first, but I just had to say – I Love your characters! Awesome job!

    Aww, thank you! I really appreciate that!

    Your antagonist is fascinating! Let me see what I can figure out.

    He’s planning to kill someone who used to be an apprentice of his. However, I think he’s still somewhat attached, as evidenced b…[Read more]

  • Hi Jared

    @jared-williams

    Yes, there is some similarity, but I think it is more akin to the Narnian concept, rather than Dekker’s Circle series (Black, Red, White & Green and the subsequent Beyond the Circle duology).  Dekker’s extraction is a dystopian future.  Mine is more like the concept of the mystical Wood between the Worlds in Lewis’s T…[Read more]

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