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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Literally me every single second of my writing life. XD
Unbelievable confidence or overwhelming self-doubt? How about both!? XD
*Joins in maniacal cackling while sharpening a knife*
We’re terrible XD
*shakes head understandingly* They really should know better. My characters should know better! Niarok isn’t even the worst of i…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Aydin
“Leaghadh,” Rúan corrected with a quirk of his lips. “It is hard to pronounce if you are not raised with the Kindran language. It took me while to master it.”
Certainly it was. I had no idea where to begin on it and spelling it would be an entire seperate nightmare.
He sheathed his sword, thank goodness.
“And yes, it is supposed t…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Ruan’s story is so tangible and it makes me want to give him a big hug lol.
He’d probably kill me, but that’s okay. I would die for a good cause. XD
(Ahw, I’m glad you feel that way!)
(Of course, Rúan probably doesn’t, and you’re probably right, but it still makes me happy 😊)(Rúan: *is slightly terrified that his Mama Authoress would just le…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
I don’t know if this means I’m not original enough to think of anything else or that I completely nailed natural character development on that plot XD It could be either. It could be both.
Literally me every single second of my writing life. XD
*More manicial cackling*
*Joins in maniacal cackling while sharpening a knife*
*Nods in sympathy* Ayd…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is absolutely hilarious!!!! Glad to be of assistance. XD
I don’t know if this means I’m not original enough to think of anything else or that I completely nailed natural character development on that plot XD It could be either. It could be both.
*climbs into bunker* I’m ready! Let’s do this!!!
*More man…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
LOL, I absolutely LOVE how this ‘plot’ is accidentally transforming into the exact plot I have planned for Aydin in the third book. The character development is so similar it’s actually hilarious at this point. I’m practically using it as a character arc first draft XD
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA this is absolutely hilarious!!!! Glad to…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Ooooh I like this plan! Just be warned that Niarok will probably find some epic way to make Ayden not find himself worthless, and if he doesn’t, I’m going to be disappointed in my character development… Jk lol I get so in Niarok’s head that when he can’t fix something it makes me feel guilty…
LOL, I absolutely LOVE how this…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
So, I propose, Niarok can offer, Aydin will probably accept, but he’s still very much stuck in the “I have to do everything right or I’m worthless,” attitude so it’ll probably… backfire XD BUT we get the fun of the characters interacting! What do you think?
Ooooh I like this plan! Just be warned that Niarok will probably fi…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
I don’t know Rúan that well yet, sorry 🙂 If someone does something out of character it’s a rule you can go back and rewrite if you want.
(Ohhh, okay — thank you for letting me know)
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Energy pulsed through Rúan’s left arm in heartbeat flow, stirring the fire in his soul. He closed his eyes to briefly succumb to the sword’s ever-…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
AAAHHHHHH SO TRUEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That’s how I feel about weapons…
EXACTLY!! That was mostly me venting because our HEMA training is cancelled for at least a month and I miss it so much 😭😭
Okay, so here’s just a thought, and we totally don’t have to do this, but I’m thinking it would be cool if once N…
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
I missed fighting. I hated killing but fighting was glorious, even if it was just a friendly round of practice. The rush when the swords clashed and the thrill of finally besting your opponent, I even missed the way my muscles protested and the weight of the sword dragging at me.
AAAHHHHHH SO…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
thats a great one!
I may choose to answer your second question before the first.
Many Christian authors and readers will rush to say “no!”
I would agree with them, but I shall give more of a theory and a solid logical argument, and not just sentiment.From a biblical standpoint, I see no place for cussing in Christian lifestyle, let…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
(Just saying, shrugging is not too in-character for Rúan )
I don’t know Rúan that well yet, sorry 🙂 If someone does something out of character it’s a rule you can go back and rewrite if you want.
(Ah, don’t worry, Rúan’s almost always got a sword)
I thought so. 😉 Aydin only has a knife for now because of plot reasons…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
I have a whole list of “worldview questions” that would make great debate topics, but here are a couple interesting ones:
How does/should one decide what is acceptable to read or watch?
Is cussing acceptable and/or beneficial in fiction?
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Now he looked dubious, but then shrugged, as if he didn’t care either way. Drat. I’d been hoping I could dodge that question.
(Just saying, shrugging is not too in-character for Rúan 🙂)
I’m just assuming he has a sword XD I have no idea XD
(Ah, don’t worry, Rúan’s almost always got a sword)
(Author’s note: Tribeless basically means outlawed.…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Yeah…
Well, I think he’s less believable, less likeable, and less of a character. So, all around generally worse? LOL. You said something dangerous back there, though; someday I might take you up on your wish to read Quin’s canon story…when I get it done, lol. I’m only 16K into it so far, but, yeah. Have you started…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
“I have two daughters, a son, and the last time I saw my wife, we were expecting another.” Nithel said. Four children…how long had he been married? Alessio was trying to do the math because it was easier to process than his feelings. “My elder daughter is about your age.”
Mathematical gesticulations froze his mind.
Nithel said it like Alessio…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Aydin
Thank goodness Niarok hadn’t seen me flinch when he clapped me on the shoulder. I hated being touched and more specifically, I hated being touched unexpectedly. I had turned away almost instantly, but he had been too tired to notice. At least I didn’t have to explain.
I also knew I had made a severe mistake by bringing up that story to s…[Read more]
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Laura K. Abeid replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Right beneath the box where you’re typing, on the far left, there’s a little check box that says “Notify me of follow-up replies via email” You can check that to read all the posts in your email, or if you don’t want the emails flooding your inbox, you can go to the far top of the page, in the right corner, (above where you…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Ohh … that’s why I’m never getting any notifications from this … how do you turn them on?
Right beneath the box where you’re typing, on the far left, there’s a little check box that says “Notify me of follow-up replies via email” You can check that to read all the posts in your email, or if you don’t want the emails flooding your in…[Read more]
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