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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago

    @denali-christianson

    AAAHHHHHH SO TRUEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That’s how I feel about weapons…

    EXACTLY!! That was mostly me venting because our HEMA training is cancelled for at least a month and I miss it so much 😭😭

    Okay, so here’s just a thought, and we totally don’t have to do this, but I’m thinking it would be cool if once Niarok finds out abut Ayden’s hand, he tries to train him to fight left-handed? It might be a stretch, and I can imagine Ayden would feel more humiliated than grateful, but it would be interesting to see how Niarok is with training someone to fight. I’ve never had him train someone before… XD

    It’s a cool thought! I’m actually planning to have that happen later in the third book.

    The only issue is that he needs to go through a ton of character development before he can manage it…

    So, I propose, Niarok can offer, Aydin will probably accept, but he’s still very much stuck in the “I have to do everything right or I’m worthless,” attitude so it’ll probably… backfire XD BUT we get the fun of the characters interacting! What do you think?

    I was planning to have the Castle announce that there are in fact three assassins, not one, so that’s how Aydin and Niarok find out about each other, because Aydin isn’t going to say anything about it ever XD That’s going to be cool…

    And I’m planning to have the others find out about Aydin’s hand somewhere during the moral compass challenge.

    As you can see, I’ve planned out a ton of backstory reveal stuff XD

    And I just realized, I think Yila is left-handed…

    And I forgot all about her asthma, which should have been killing her when it was so cold.

    Oops…

    Guys, let’s pretend Yila was wheezing the whole snow-storm, kk? XD

    LOL, I once forgot an entire dog for a shocking period of time, you’re fine XD

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