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Emberynus The Dragonslayer

  • (cheesy grin.) This is fun… Okay, I might change a few things up, but hopefully nothing too drastic. Gonna try to follow suite….

     

    (The Aemirok is a creature of myf – legendary, mythic fantasy creature from my character’s world – that I had previously introduced. It is pretty much a massive flying wolf. As tall as an elephant but slim as a…[Read more]

  • Valencia:

    “Your turn, Valencia!”  My stomach drops as I stare up the cliff.

    “I can’t.”

    “What do you mean you can’t?  You haven’t even tried it yet!”

    “I’m not strong enough.”  My voice fades to a barely audible murmur as a part of me dies inside.  I didn’t want Kit – or anyone for that matter – to know how weak I really am.

    “That’s alr…[Read more]

  • 😁 What a marvelous situation I have walked in on!

     

    Jade snapped her head from side to side. This was too familiar. Then she saw the threat: bugs of all things, but at least they weren’t Protectors, the Benevolents’ minions.

    “Up there,” said Alaric, gesturing toward a doorway up high on the wall. “Come on.”

    Jade assessed the room for other op…[Read more]

  • (Notes from the writer)

    Well, a lot has happened. I discovered that instead of having a calm, collected personality, Sherlock has anger issues and might actually be a sociopath. Instead, Arsene has a tamer persona in comparison to his brother.

    Anyways, rules about the mirrors

    1. When a mirror room is reach, you may create a mirror. However,…[Read more]

  • The blind man was trying to get the strange substance out of one of his feet. Nithel’s feet still burned from all the sharp dust in them, but the man had a large sliver. Like a piece of metal. And he was bleeding quite a bit.

    “Ya’know what. I’m just gonna go with the one nearest me.” He said and stretched out his leg, more blood leaked from th…[Read more]

  • Avin

    The girl didn’t say anything for a moment, and Avin wondered if he’d frightened her. Then she began talking. Slowly at first, but faster as her words sketched her home and family. Suddenly she stopped. He could see her grin sheepishly in the darkness.  “Sorry, I can go on and on when I start talking. It runs in the family.” she sa…[Read more]

  • Alaric

    Before either of them could say anything else, someone in a white coat hurried up. Another person he couldn’t place. Nobody here looked like they did in Reantare.

    “I heard you shouting, but I didn’t catch a name.”

    Alaric winced. I was shouting alright. At your friend.

    “Alaric. Prince of Reantare but Jade tells me that doesn’t matter…[Read more]

  • Okay, so I was writing a story for the contest and got some critiques and made some changes and I’m hoping to know whether they helped or hurt the story. XD

    The story is called From Earth You Came (4255-ish words), but I’m considering changing it to Burnt Sky/Red Sky/The Sky Burns Red or something like that. If you’d like please tell me which one…[Read more]

  • @rose-colored-fancy just hearing “I like sci fi and I like that idea” is actually a great encouragement for what I’m trying to figure out lol. Thanks so much!

  • Calliope

    Lorcan looked back at Ophelia, who had turned even pinker than her top. I couldn’t help a smile.

    “Aren’t you being a wee bit harsh on her?”

    “She has more than enough people to flatter her, I won’t be one of them,” I said.

    Lorcan didn’t seem appeased by that answer, but that was just because he hadn’t seen the little social butte…[Read more]

  • Ophelia

    I left my fake smile right where it was. What else could I do? I barely knew Cal. We had never been introduced, I’d only heard of her secondhand, though Athena, who had been less than flattering in her description.

    I would just give her the benefit of the doubt. Perhaps she hadn’t meant to hurt me.

    I just wanted to leave. Cal was…[Read more]

  • @irishcelticredflowercrown

    “None of your business birdbrain. And if you don’t meet me saying, you look like a friendless emo who has a parrot as a best friend.” She smirked.

    LOLLLL!!! That’s HILARIOUS I actually laughed out loud XD

  • @rose-colored-fancy

    asdfghjkl that made me think of that one audio XD that perfectly applies to Cal LOLL!!!

    (“A girl doesn’t dye her hair that color unless she has psychological problems.” “My hair color has nothing to do with my psychological problems!!!”)

    Oooh you just gave me an idea😂😂

     

    Lorcan

    Lorcan had a good feeling that Cal and the o…[Read more]

  • @inkhorn

    Enydd is being ridiculously stubborn with me, revealing she has a different side to her but refusing to show it to me. Because of her refusal to cooperate, her narrative may seem out of character at times.

    LOLL, don’t you love when they get like that XD Well, it’s usually a sign of development!

    @emily-waldorf

    That bit you wrote for…[Read more]

  • @toljamedia

    So, I don’t have much/any advice on the publishing front, but I just had to pop in and comment!

    I want to be able to talk about God like its 1880s Kansas, but with the sense of yearning and progress that space provides. I have an agricultural research planet run by an interstellar version of NASA. The rest of the plot is just dealing…

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  • @calidris

    sorry, didn’t see your post until after I posted mine. I had my two in the back of the room previously, so I decided to pick up where I had left off… hope it works. I can have Abirami interact with you in my next post… after people’s reactions… I’m gonna have Abirami try to corral everyone out of the room… =)

  • Ku

    (essence is the “magical system” of my fantasy world. It’s based off of Plato’s true forms, if knows what that is. =) )

     

    Pitch blackness.

    “No.” No way could I be alone.

    I stretched out my essence, seeking for some living creature. Surely, I would find one. Even as a street urchin, I was never really alone. Every square inch of earth hous…[Read more]

  • @jared-williams Kit and Valencia are free if you’d like to start an interaction between them and Ku/Abirami!

  • Valencia:

    The last of the street lights flicker on, scattering the inky shadows on the damp sidewalk.  The sickly yellow glow flashes across Kit’s keys as they twirl around his finger, flickering in and out of his hand to the beat of some inaudible tune.  My chest tightens as the keys slip just beneath his fingertips.  Just five minutes be…[Read more]

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