Eitan

@hannahrenner‘s characters:

@kimlikesart‘s characters

@ragnarok‘s characters:

You’re absolutely right!!!

Those characters sound cool!!! I can’t wait to *meet* them!!

Ok! So…lemmie dig up the character bios for everyone else’s characters and give you a quick rundown of what’s happening so they can burst in!

Sorry, I meant Kyle’s very introverted. 🤦‍♀️

This is my biggest downfall in writing. Worldbuilding is such a pain for me. This will definitely be useful in the future.

Thank you so much for the input! It’s ironic that you mentioned Terry Pratchett as reading one of his books was part of the inspiration for this story. I’ll be sure to look into the link you gave me!

I’ve also updated some of the worldbuilding from when I made my last post, mostly by adding to some of the cultural aspects of each region.

Leana winced as he kicked, backing up, and shaking out one of her hands… But three of her fingers still hurt, from bending back when he kicked them.

“What do you care what I do!? Just-get away from me!” Nathair growled, floundering in his corner, as if he wanted to escape, but eventually wrapped his arms around himself. “Leave me alone, you’r…[Read more]

Hey @bookdragon, I think this is one of the most useful discussion threads I’ve ever seen posted on the forum, lol. It’s a really tough and really practical question. I’ve been thinking about it for over a week.

I don’t know that I agree that the obvious solution is to remove the ridiculousness since, like you said, that’s kind of the entire…[Read more]

Hi, my name is Sarafini. This looks like the place to introduce characters for the castle. Am I right?

If so, here we go

1st WIP (Sci-fi): The Paradise Lie trilogy (name is in the works)

Summary: 3 teens are sent to a land everyone wants to go to but when a scheme is uncovered the 3 introverts have to jump into action to save the rest of the…[Read more]

Nathair buried himself deeper in his corner, glowering down until he could hear a girl skipping to him. He glared up at her as she dropped in front of him, sparkly eyed. Leana? What did she want? He wanted to kick her before she started making fun of him.

Red flickered in her chest, hungrily, like bait. Then she started…crying. Nathair stared i…[Read more]

Leana, in the corner with Nathair, pulled back just enough to look at Nathair’s face, tears still in her eyes. “You don’t have to stay a snake.”

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Ohel glowered when Alessio tried to shield him from these people and cover his words. If those words were disrespectful, yeah, I meant them. Ohel was about to shove Alessio away but the boy already…[Read more]

“Who are you? What are you?” Demanded a boy and Alessio paled, darting a glance at him as if to say ‘do you want to die!?’ That was…Ohel…wow he looked…different as a kid…

“He meant no disrespect!” Alessio squeaked, thrusting an arm in front of Ohel as if to shield him. Yeeting out the window was looking better and better by the second. He had…[Read more]

Heyyy Sara!!!! @sarafini

Ok we’re doing a sort of roleplay with our characters to test-run them before we set them loose on our WIPs, it’s a little bit overwhelming and complicated at first but really easy once you get the gist of it!

So Step One: Set up a character bio. We’ve got a separate topic area for talking out roleplay stuff and plotting…[Read more]