Linyang Zhang

Wow, I’ll have to go to one sometime! *googles*

Well, for one, she didn’t use proper grammar, but more like the grammar a five year old would use. But still readable, though. Like, instead of ‘ran’, she would use ‘run’. And very spontaneous like a five year old. If you observe a group of those kids for a day it’s kinda tiring because they’re so full of energy.

Hmm….I think that with Kindle is that she believes that she’s not a good enough leader, therefore causing her to not be the best that she can, therefore failing to reach their overall goals in the story.

Hmmm….small children….I remember back when I was in elamentary school, I would read these chapter books told from a five year old’s point of view. very engaging voice, too.

Wow, I kept on getting emails all afternoon for this topic, but when I clicked on the link, there was nothing. XD

I need to work on incorporating inner monologue into my writing, so maybe I’ll step back this time.

*peers out of the Void*

I like your intro a lot. And if that’s your real face on your picture, I like your beard.

I’ve never been to a writing conference before. What’s it like?

-School

-Continue Book 4

-Read books

-Practice piano, record and upload video

-Advertise

Welcome guys! Hope you have fun here.

Hmm. Interesting. For my different protagonists, I usually focus on one and forget about the other. I’ll have to work on that.

-finish transcribing Windy Letter and record it

-write letter to pen pal

-read books

-edit book one by revising

@morreafirebird Well, he’s doing all of the wrong things, like murdering his brother and other people for power so that he can reform the world. He thinks that doing that will make his mother proud of him. The second part, not the first.

Hmmm…

Rainan wants to earn his mother’s love, and is willing to do anything to earn it. Back when he was a small child, he contracted an outrageously high fever in midwinter, and his father left to go look for medicine and was never seen again, which is why his mother doesn’t love him as much as his younger brother, or at least acts that way.…[Read more]

-Finish editing and submit my short story before Thursday

-Homework

-Ballet

Hi guys, welcome to the group! I can’t wait to get to know you all! Feel free to post in the threads that look like they’ve been long dead. We would all love to hear your input.

I feel like that there can and there can’t.

Like, there could be so much conflict that’s it’s impossible for the character to deal with it all, but I feel like that reaching that point would be hard.

But then you could just keep on adding suffering and pain, suffering and pain…

I think that you shouldn’t go overboard on the internal conflict.…[Read more]

-Edit short story and enter it

-Beta read

-Transcribe Windy Letter

I totally like the title.

@morreafirebird This is really late…but I just wanted to mention that I simply love Jayfeather.

@samuel @josiah Thank you guys both. So…I think I’ll go with having overarching character arcs, separate plot but part of the same plot, and have separate themes….Thank you!