ConsciousDreamer

Can I just say guys, that that was brilliant. *flails* You all worked really hard, and ended up writing a really cool story. It was also a really hard sort of task because ‘prose’ is so broad. But whatever the result, you guys did a stellar job! *applause* I’ve turned it in now, so we just have to wait and…[Read more]

Okay Parimis!

I’ve spent most of today tackling our entry, and have added a lot more character voice. That’s made the prose stronger, but to be honest, ‘unique’ is a rather cryptic phrase. However, we need to cut down a few words. So, cutting back is appreciated!

Once again, here is the…[Read more]

STELLAR WORK PARIMIS!!!!!

(Yes, I’m tagging you all cos I really will get confused with all of the scrolling and hunting for what different people have said. :P)

PROSE: Haha, Shakespeare is probably not an ideal thing to be weaving in. Doesn’t fit allllll that well. However, in general, we will need to be working on making the prose really…[Read more]

So I wrote a poem last night, and I was hoping for some feedback about it. I write a lot of poetry late at night when I have trouble falling asleep, and lately I’ve been messing around with a sweet and simple feel portraying things a young child would go through or do throughout their day.

I like to sing to my Grandma,

She likes to hear my…

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@consciousdreamer Oh neat! I’ll have to look into that. 🙂

@consciousdreamer I’ve never heard of her before but I’ll have to look that book up!

@consciousdreamer For whatever reason, SE deleted your post. I got the email though, and your poem is beautiful!

@consciousdreamer Wow that’s pretty great. 🙂

What kind of poems do you like to write?

And by the way everyone, while I was out of town this past week I read While We Were Very Young, a collection of poetry by the man who wrote Winnie the Pooh Bear. And it’s so simple and lovely, I can’t wait to be my own copy. <3

Okay, sorry that I’ve been kinda chaotic and sporadic and stuff lately guys, but things have kinda been blegh and yeah. Anyways. I am here now and hopefully can make some suggestions.

BASICALLY, what @ariella-newheart summarised is what we are going with.

I really enjoy the ideas that are being thrown around, and my one concern is that we do…[Read more]

@consciousdreamer I would love to read it 😀

@consciousdreamer

“Uncle Fred is Dead.”

Perfect.

xD

@consciousdreamer Those are AMAZING. I really want to read the first one. And I totally get being stuck on two different stories; I’m going through the same problem right now as well 😂

Okay, all of this sounds absolutely stellar. Like, really guys. Good job. I’m impressed.

NOTE: @steward-of-the-pen is close, there is a 2500 word limit. Jane only has so much time to go through all of them.

*sits back to think*

1. Plotline sounds brilliant, unique, and generally awesome.
2. The character sounds stellar.
3. The resulting c…

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