Sorry it has been so long since I was around. My calculus and German classes have been much more difficult than I expected. I should be able to write on Sunday afternoon though.

@anne-the-noob14

If you wan to write Dharin’s reaction to the new situation in the castle, that might help me have a better idea of what Vrahe would be…[Read more]

Good luck on the Dual Credit. I’ve got AP classes starting on Tuesday and college Calculus starting a week from now. We’ll see how much I’m gone. Most likely going to be much slower.

I believe it is your turn to enter your thoughts on what is going on with Teagan, Vrahe, and Isaac. Good luck.

How far back do you need us to go back on the rundown?

Having just revealed the name that he would be operating under, Vrahe waited to see what his new companions’ reactions would be. What would his brother’s alias mean to them?

“Cool!….What’s an Ermordung?” the less d…[Read more]

Turns out we stopped on our trip at a place with wifi, so I can type up a brief response to your questions.

1. His hair is currently black.

2. He loves learning whatever he can, so he has read the works of most major philosophers.  He does spout off philosophical sayings at times, most of them have to do with death and pain…[Read more]

Sorry if I got your characters wrong, I’m not really sure how they would act in situations like this. I’m also sorry for how bad the writing is. I didn’t have much time to write and wasn’t sure about how to introduce Vrahe. I also look forward to seeing Isaac’s reaction to Vrahe’s alias. It is quite the co…[Read more]

That berserker! He just lost his aura! I didn’t know that was possible! These are some very strange people. I’m going to have to watch my back around them. 

Soon, the fight ended with the complete annihilation of the hostile wolf pack. Willing the flames licking…[Read more]

What a coincidence that two Falcons fans are both on here. How do you think the dirty birds are going to do this year?

Sorry about the 40 wolves. Completely arbitrary (and in hindsight probably excessive) number. I have not had a character like Vrahe has not had a character like Teagan in his past, so I was looking forward to interactions with him.

BTW, feel free to reduce the number of wolves. I just wanted to make it feel like a challenge, and…[Read more]

Vrahe woke to his alarm blaring a familiar song.

Enter Sandman by Metallica. Today will be a good day. I love it when I wake up to a classic. 

Mentally dismissing the alarm through his implant, Vrahe sat up and looked around his room.…[Read more]

I am going to have Vrahe join Teagan and Isaac to start off.

Thanks for the welcome back. The combination of his full name (Vrahe Milodat Rodina) is a blend of words in different languages that mean “The assassin who loves his family.” I chose those words because I feel like that describes Vrahe’s demeanor the most accurately.

As to why I follow Jesus Christ, I have grown up in a Christian…[Read more]

Yes, if you want to kill off Connor, I am okay with that. I don’t know what Connor’s reaction will be, and I will definitely have him fight back if you try to kill him in a battle situation. However, I think it is okay for him to go out in a violent way, he probably deserves it.

Name: Vrahe Rodina

Age: 37 years old

Birthday: February 29, 2284

Height: 6’3″

Weight: 195 pounds

Hair Color: Naturally jet black, but usually dyed to a less distinctive color such as a…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart     Did you bring in your manipulative character? That could get a little strange, because part of Connor’s telepathic po…[Read more]

Connor comes from a future of our world. (The use of ‘a’ instead of ‘the’ is purposeful, there are multiple dimensions and times in the story.) He is short, 5’7, with a wiry build. He has black hair and dark brown…[Read more]

I really like the idea of Dharin. I am thinking about bringing in one of two characters. I will either bring in one of my female characters who hates it when people hit on her, and normally shows her dislike of it by maiming the man giving her too much attention. The other option is a guy that has a somewhat flirty personality…[Read more]

Basically there is a super hero who’s power makes it so that when he dies he will restart the day. The super hero, however, is not allowed to change anything that they do. They simply have to hope that the people around them will notice irregularities and realize what happened, thus changing…[Read more]

I also really enjoy the “Father Brown” mysteries by G.K. Chesterton. I would definitely recommend them.

@steward-of-the-pen @ariella-newheart @elisha-starq…[Read more]

Velnias is a Nephilim like Theseus, and at one point was a friend and mentor of Theseus. In his natural form, Velnias is not a…[Read more]

I would be happy to help out some, but I am kind of busy, so my help would be sporadic. I do love the idea of bringing back short story wars.

Another thing that I recently started with some friends of mine that I think would be cool is a progressive story. Basically somebody starts off a story, and then other people help to continue…[Read more]

So sorry that I have been gone so long. My life has been crazy recently. I had mid-terms (high-school), basketball tournaments, Thanksgiving vacation without internet access. *rips out hair over memory*

Anyways, I am back for now.

I love what y’all have done so f…[Read more]

What genre of movie do you like? Do you like to be different, or would you rather blend in? What do you envision yourself doing at this party?

I am going to switch up a couple of aspects of the fight between Racleva and Theseus so that it better matches his training. Just for future reference, do you want Racleva to be more of a redemption arc character or is she a hard-core villain? (Those are my own made up terms, if y’all know the correct ones they would be very…[Read more]

Good job. The touch with Theseus being surprised was perfect, that was exactly how he would act as he is quite awkward around girls unless he knows them well. There are a couple of things that I realized I didn’t put in my earlier description of him that are probably important. He is incredibly independent, so after he gets over…[Read more]

Alright, thanks! I had envisioned the map room with a long hallway coming out of heading towards the back of the castle with doors off of both side of it. The reason I originally thought this was because I was imagining the green door as the front of the castle. I am personally fine with envisioning it either…[Read more]

Thanks for the tip! I have always struggled with punctuation in general, and your explanation has made the most sense so far. I will make sure to correct it in the future. Sorry that I got the layout wrong, I am told that I change the look of settings in my mind a lot when they are described to me. A drawing or an in-depth…[Read more]

Theseus Robinson awoke from his slumber to the crack of thunder. As he clawed his way from the depths of sleep he realized that something was not r…[Read more]