Cassandra Hamm

Hey guys, I’ve just finished going through the draft again. The ending is slightly different, and a bit about the bracelet has been moved to the beginning, so if you want to check it out and see what you think?

@bama-rose @cassandraia @eden-anderson @noahlitle @germaine-han

@bama-rose I think what I’m using are em dashes, and I’m using them…[Read more]

@cassandraia

YES!! So true! Learning to trust God and surrender fear is a life long journey…one that cannot be accomplished in a matter of days or weeks.

If you are passionate about what you are writing, I think people can tell and when there is life and fire to one’s writing, it can bring  both conviction and inspiration. GO YOU! Can’t…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb @noahlitle @cassandraia @eden-anderson @germaine-han

Does anybody know where to put en dashes, em dashes and hyphens? And does it matter? I’m having trouble understanding it when I research it….

Hey guys, I’m sorry I didn’t get too much done today, but I’m hoping to go over the whole thing a second time and tighten up the wording in the next couple of days. If there’s any place you were confused, you think we could put in more/less information, or anything, please go ahead and comment, and even use the suggesting tool to directly edit the…[Read more]

@bama-rose Thanks! I don’t really know the culture either, but I’m doing my best since I follow figure skating and know a bit of what they do.

And I’ll think about them glancing at each other. My reasons for not including anything like that (yet) are that since we’re trying to make it non-cliche, hopefully the peace that Min has after being…[Read more]

@cassandraia Go for it!

@r-m-archer

Ooh, that makes so much more sense, but yeah, I agree with @cassandraia that maybe it should be made a little bit more obvious…?

@cassandraia

Oh, yes, depression. It’s a hard topic and it makes me so sad that people are unwilling to admit that it exists in the church. I’ve heard that real christian’s don’t have depression theory before…it makes me sad and angry, because even though I’ve never really had to deal with it, I’ve had anxiety issues and people can tend to say…[Read more]

@cassandraia

Thank you again for all your work on my story. 😘 I’m sorry if it seems like I’m ignoring your comments, they are helpful!

@cassandraia

I got the impression Tae-Ki gave it back through Coach Kang as a sign of working toward repairing their friendship, he just wasn’t quite to the point of reconciling one-on-one yet. Tae-Ki took back the bracelet he’d given Min, after their schism, and basically revoked the friendship, and then returned it. At least that’s what I got…[Read more]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12GYU8Kcy0Iv6D6ZFs2E39JjkKOFFFIPC8alipiZfx5s/edit

Here’s Draft 1! Obviously it’s still a long way from being coherent, but I just want to show this to you all and see what you think.

1. Does the setting/background make sense? Have I appeared to stereotype any culture?
2. Is the conflict between the characters…

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@eden-anderson Thank you! I agree with Noah not agreeing with you about you not being helpful (aka you were helpful)… haha 🙂

@noahlitle *nods* Okay. I don’t think I would be happy doing consistent flashbacks, but I’ll try to do it enough so that the audience can see the parallels between that conversation and this one. I’ll do it with italics…[Read more]

@cassandraia

Definitely. The best outreach I got was through DMs, and those were really nice. (Except I forgot to check them when I ducked out of the community and left people hanging for weeks or months at a time…) One-on-one or small group conversations are way easier for me than big posts, lol. Especially since there are no nested replies,…[Read more]

@cassandraia

Yeah! 😀 I tend to be on here way more. I actually avoided the Ydub community for a long time, starting just shortly after joining in August, because there were so many people and it was super overwhelming for me. With the Fellowships, though, it’s been a little bit easier. And concrete goals to work toward with the Mystery Hat…[Read more]