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Adnyole replied to the topic HELP! Plot thoughts & Hard Topics in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
@calidris Yoh! You just hit the nail on the head! Yeah, this is the type of advice I am looking for. I have literally been wrestling with those types of questions about the character… I definitely have the purpose in mind to show a story of restoration and redemption, definitely not out for willy-nilly here. The context is intended to be one of…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I use mostly watercolors but also acrylics. I have oils…but I might be a little terrified of using them 😂. I haven’t done a single oil painting. What do you use?
Yes! The willingness to discuss and debate has been wonderful, and that it’s all from a place of faith makes it even better.
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Also, I didn’t know you’re an artist too!
She illustrates my book😀
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
You’re welcome!
…soft brat?
Idk, Basil is just…very Basil XD
😂 that’s actually a really good description XD
Also, I didn’t know you’re an artist too! Are you a digital or traditional painter?
I’m a traditional painter. Computers and I don’t get along very well (I even prefer to write with pen and paper, especially first drafts).…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Great idea! Lol I have a feeling Saevus will get to show his full potential here, hehe…
Yeah, the summoning thing…random, spur of the moment idea that worked perfectly.
I think a reward if you win, and a punishment if you lose, is a great idea! What shall the reward be… *tries to think of somet…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I was thinking it might be the only way to get some of our…more rational and level headed characters involved XD
Ah, ok. Yeah, I could totally see Yarrow settling down in a chair to watch the show😂
But as far as the reward goes…maybe the castle grants them a small wish? Like, it gives them something small they really really wan…
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@calidris You are very welcome! 😁
Scripture illuminates scripture.
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@lady-grace sooo…if they lose, does EVERYONE have to partake in the challenge, or just the people who attacked him?
Also we have to think of a suitable punishment XD
Hm, I think those who partake in the challenge. No reason to punish those who don’t. And if they didn’t help but the others win, they just don’t get a reward.…[Read more]
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@lady-grace see, I was thinking it might be the only way to get some of our…more rational and level headed characters involved XD
Ooh that could be a cool punishment…
But as far as the reward goes…maybe the castle grants them a small wish? Like, gives them something small they really really want?
It would have to be small though because…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Hi @calidris,
I think too often we miss the central issue of what Peter was saying:
He is pointing to the importance of having a beautiful soul and not just superficial and showing dress and outward adornments.
Some people may be coiffed to the nines, have a sharply cut and tailored suit, golden cuff links, a $200 haircut, clean shaven, with…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Like, if they beat him they get a reward, but if they lose…then they have to undergo another heart wrenching challenge!
That would be cruel… I like it😂
“Wait you can do that!?!?” Ehud gasped staring at the summoned Lord Castle. He grabbed a chair, ready to hurl it. “I call dibs!!!”
😂😂
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Ah ok, that makes sense
Very well…*laughs wickedly*
Saevus was exploding with fury. Never had ANYONE shamed him in such a way as this. Stoking the flames that enveloped him to an intense blaze, he roared and released a shock wave that blasted everyone back a even rendered the table into pieces. Drawing his sword, Saevus began ch…[Read more]
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Kristina replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Introduce Yourself 4 years ago
@calidris Thanks! Your WIP sounds cool!
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I’ve never actually seen it! Is it good?
I, personally, loved the movie. 😀 I actually hated it for a while because it gave me nightmares when I was little XD
Incidentally, I actually introduced Kit because I wanted to explore that kind of dynamic in my own story! And then he demanded a love interest, and then he demanded pink hai…
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Ehud’s story is so sad! 😭 And his reaction to Ku’s regret is so lovable and yet sad.
Nice painting of Basil! It really gets the attitude I sense from your writing about him. I want to finish a painting of Jade so I can share it before she leaves the Castle.
That’s a cool story about you and Rose. I’ve definit…[Read more]
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Kristina replied to the topic Hey! in the forum Introduce Yourself 4 years ago
Thanks, @calidris! Here’s the blurb for the one I’m currently working on. It’s a dystopian/romantic suspense entitled Darkness Draws Near.
Life’s worth fighting for …
When Mellie Rivers opens her home to a young mom, she knows there’s risk involved—both from the government and her own inadequacies.
Friedrich Wolf is content to work as a mission…[Read more]
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Emily replied to the topic Using Archetypes in the forum Characters 4 years ago
Thanks for your reply @calidris !
The character serves as a rescuer who brings children to the hospital. He brings the MC there and the leaves to bring others. My worry is that since he is the second character introduced it makes him look like a major character.
I have not decided whether he has a part in the climax but I know he will reappear…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
*hands Ehud a box of napkins*
Idk…probably??
Poor kid.
yeah, Basil’s interesting to me because his concept is dark and kind of disturbing, but he isn’t self aware enough to realize it XD He certainly lacks awareness, but even if someone were to point it out to him he couldn’t care less. I think that’s on…
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I’m going to have to side with what @lady-grace said. Enydd would hate me forever if I let her die in here. XD
ENYDD: You were actually considering it! And after I’ve been so cooperative too!
ME: Irrelevant.
ENYDD: Irrelevant?! I swear that I-
ME: And into the book you go!
That post was hilarious! (also rather sad…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I don’t have much say here since I’m not pulling a character right now, but my opinion is no. Even the castle isn’t allowed to kill people 🤷♀️
That was both sad and funny. Good job👏
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@everyone
I’m going to pull Enydd out. She’s grown a lot here, and I don’t think I’ll uncover more about here. (Not to mention that she’d probably have a nervous breakdown at the beginning of the fight. XD)
I feel for this new character of yours. XD
Your Character: Where exactly am-
Castle: Deepest regret! Go!
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