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  • Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago

    @calidris

    Ah ok, that makes sense

    Very well…*laughs wickedly*

     

    Saevus was exploding with fury. Never had ANYONE shamed him in such a way as this. Stoking the flames that enveloped him to an intense blaze, he roared and released a shock wave that blasted everyone back a even rendered the table into pieces. Drawing his sword, Saevus began chanting in an eerie language. As the other slowly got up and stared at Saevus, He only increased the speed of his chanting. After a few minutes, his spell finally took affect. And within seconds, the others realized what Saevus was up to.

    Saevus was trying to force the Lord Castle to reveal himself in person.

    And at first, it didn’t seem to work. Lord Castle made no signs of showing up, and Saevus just seemed to be making a fool of himself. But soon, the very walls of the castle began to shake. Soon the whole castle was shaking, and no one was able to keep to their feet…except Saevus. And pretty soon, the air in front of Savus began to shimmer. Soon the very air seemed to be vibrating, and then a form began to appear. Soon a very regal-looking Castle lord stood before Saevus. Only after he had fully appeared due Saevus stop chanting, with a deathly silence falling on the room.

    “Well, Saevus,” Lord Castle boomed, “Thou hast called me, and I hast come. What dost thou wantest with me?”

    ”Your head!” Saevus roared. “You had no right to this to me!”

    ”Then you shall find yourself even more humbled,” Lord Castle replied. “Than yiu just were. I am Lord Castle, and no upstart from Malterra will stop me.”

    ”We’ll see about that!” Saevus roared, drawing his sword. He then launched a vicious attack on him.

    Drawing his own sword, Lord Castle blocked Saevus’ attack and soon countered with his own. Saevus crosscut, parried, and then brought a vertical slice down from above. Blocking it, Lord Castle then stabbed at Saevus. Saevus dodges it and counters with his own attack.

    This coninued for a few minutes, when suddenly-

     

    tehe cliff hanger. I’ll let someone else take it from there.

    (wonders if making the castle show itself in human form was a good idea)

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