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Mischievous Thwapling replied to the topic Short Story: In a Mother’s Arms in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
AWWWW!! That was so sweet! The poem at the beginning was a very beautiful and nice touch. The mother/daughter relationship… Awww…
I believe it would be best punctuation wise to cut the comma, replace it with a period, then make the h in He lowercase. Like this: “I’ve got to go,” he said into the phone. (I bolded the c…[Read more]
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Mischievous Thwapling joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
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Inklingflame started the topic Short Story: In a Mother’s Arms in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
@mischievous-thwapling  (🤞I Hope this works)
Hey Everybody!
I wrote this story for my Mother’s birthday.  I would LOVE and critiques, criticisms, comments, or snide remarks (I know I messed up the alliteration;) you have. 😁  I have a poem introducing (for lack of a better word) my story, because…well why not! 😆 Anyway, here is the story:…[Read more] -
Inklingflame joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
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Birdman0926 replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
Hey Livi,
Nice to meet you. I’m Mason but my nickname is Birdman (hence my username). Happy early birthday! That’s cool that you’ve tried composing. I do play the piano and I tried to teach myself violin but I found out that I’m a miserable self learner/teacher. I love The Hobbit and LOTR! Such great stories and enjoyable reads. Thanks for taking…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 7 months ago
@sam-m Thank you! 🙂
Hey there! A bit of a late welcome, but better late than never, I suppose 🙂 Your book sounds awesome!
And nice to meet you! I’m Livi. I’m a week away from turning 16, and I also enjoy writing (surprise, surprise XD). I love music, and I’ve tried to compose a few songs (none of them went anywhere, but it was a…[Read more]
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Ari Austin joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Sci-Fi Theme Idea in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@daeus-lamb Thanks for the recommendation! I’ll check it out!
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Sci-Fi Theme Idea in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@r-m-archer I read a book that kinda had this theme. Synapse. Christian guy. It had more to do with the problem of suffering and didn’t go super in depth on AI, but it could be worth reading for inspiration.
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R.M. Archer started the topic Sci-Fi Theme Idea in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Something I’ve come across a lot of in media recently is AI and the question of whether or not human-like AI counts as “human” or “a person.” It’s something that’s been really thought-provoking for me as I consider it through a biblical worldview, and I’d love to see books or other media written by Christians that explores that theme.
There’s…[Read more]
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The timing of this is kinda funny because just last night I got a story idea that involved a highly advanced AI that acted like a human. This debate also intrigues me, and I’m thinking about weaving that into my new story idea (when/if I ever get around to a new idea XD ).
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Ooh! Well, allow me to encourage you to go for it. ;D
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Birdman0926 replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Hi everyone,
I just joined recently but thought I’d jump right in and introduce myself and my book I’m currently working on. I’m 18 and I enjoy writing (of course), composing music- especially ‘book soundtracks’. I love coming up with new, out of the box plots and ideas for stories as well. I play tennis and enjoy gardening. Right then- my book.…[Read more]
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Sarahfi replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
@sam-m Thanks!
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Sam M replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Your story idea is awesome! I would love to read something like that!
Superpowers and time travel are two of my favorite things! Good luck with your story, it sounds super cool!
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Sam M replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
Your story idea is awesome! I would love to read something like that!
Superpowers and time travel are two of my favorite things! Good luck with your story, it sounds super cool!
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Fehrmaiden joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 8 months ago
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joshuareidwriter joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
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joshuareidwriter posted an update in the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
Hello everyone. My name is Joshua and recently, I embarked on writing historical fiction short stories centered on African-American history. I can’t wait to begin discussing this endeavor with you.
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joshuareidwriter joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 9 months ago
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Thanks! I’ve never liked/been good at grammar:) It’s going to be the death of me someday! I definitely need grammar help 😂 I usually don’t get upset when I get critiques, so no worries here. I’d rather you say something then keep it to yourself anyway;)
Same here!!
Yay, I’m so glad! Thank you SO much for letting me read it! It was wonderful.