@beth20
Active 1 year, 7 months ago-
Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria chapter one in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Did you read the revised chapter one? I feel like the first chapter is REALLY important…but I can’t seem to make it…perfect lol!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Ohhh….! Yeah, makes sense…I’ll look into trying to fix that!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Wow!! I figured out how to quote people!!! XD
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Okay!
Thanks! I’ll try to post chapter four today!
Okay, I’ll try to find those…
Yeah…I’ll try to change their reactions to more of unbelieving.
Not exactly sure what that means…could you elaborate?
Yeah…your right! I should change that lol!!
Thanks for the critique!! π
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Beth replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Question: Would you rather save the one you love most from dying, or a thousand youβve never met?
Jered: A thousand people I’ve never met. I’m not very close to anyone. But I think it would be selfish to save only one person.
Marrill: How would that be selfish. I would save the one I love most!!
Jaylin: A thousand people. I d…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Thanks!
So yeah… Throden will do more stuff or whatever lol, in the next chapter. And Jered and Karen, already kinda thought it was magic in chapter two, bc they couldn’t find Tim. And then the letter from their dad reinforced that thought.
I’ll try to be faster with posting chapter four lol!!
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
oops @kristianne-hassman
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Beth replied to the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
@eitan @purpleturtle @claire-h @kristiana-hasseman @olivia @katja-r @kimlikesart @melodyjoy @shiningscribe
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Beth started the topic Ninjanaria Chapter Three: Ninjanaria π in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Chapter Tree: Ninjanaria
Tim’s eyes flashed around the room. Where am I?
He could remember sinking, losing all sense of direction, then all of a sudden emerging intoβ¦ somewhere. He didnβt remember much.
There was a window looking out over a vast lake, a dresser stood on his left and a bookshelf, full of old leather-bound books to his rig…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
Haha yeah, I think it’d be realistic if they searched for a kitchen…and I think she did!
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago
Yes, I did! We still haven’t gotten ours though… π
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago
Haha yeah, I did see that! SO excited!
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Beth Darlene's profile was updated 6 years, 4 months ago
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago
@mayajoelle
That’s odd. If I tagged you it should have notified
you …
Yeah, my favorite books by N.D. Wilson would be the Ashtown Burials! I love those!
And my fav for Rosemary Sutcliff (not sure if I’m spelling her name right..) would be, Outcast and The Lantern Bearers! I haven’t read all of her stuff though.
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Beth replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
I’ll make sure to read this lol!
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Beth Darlene joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 6 years, 4 months ago
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 4 months ago
Um I don’t think so…
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Beth replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
@dakoda
Ohhh sorry lol!
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Beth replied to the topic The Carnivorous Duck in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
Haha!
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Beth replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 6 years, 4 months ago
Jered: Die young to save another I would think!
Marrill: Yeah…I would love to be heroic and save people but I think I’d want to do it without dying…
New Question: Would your character rather eat just meat for a month or just fruit? Yeah, that’s a stupid question I know lol! I couldn’t think of anything else lol!!
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