@lady-grace hehe thanks!

Alright, here’s Basil’s formal re-introduction to the castle!  For those of you who knew him before, he’s changed a bit and really developed (but don’t worry he’s still a socially awkward brat XD)

Basil:

– Tall, (6’3″), super pale white skin, thick black curls.  He’s got a very uncanny, almost disproportionate frame – you’d notice it and feel <…[Read more]

@ethan-leonard

I don’t have much say here since I’m not pulling a character right now, but my opinion is no. Even the castle isn’t allowed to kill people 🤷‍♀️

@calidris

That was both sad and funny. Good job👏

Reintroducing an old character!

Content warnings: there’s some lab scenes – nothing super graphic, but my poor boi is basically a living experiment so take that as you will 🙁

Kit:

“Subject 1711 – divulge your deepest regrets.”

“No.”

I turn to my right to see a tall figure fiddling with his restraints.  Pitch black curls bounce around his…[Read more]

I have a question for those pulling characters out of the castle.

Do you mind if I have Saevus kill them on his rampage he’s about to go on?

Also, I’m gonna drop in Saevus’s top general, General Durun Sollers, right after the rampage of Saevus.

It’s ok, he wasn’t offended, this wasn’t the first time he died.

Nathair awoke in another room much like the room for the first mirror, not a drop of blood on him, and that was a first. Well, it wasn’t a first it was just very rare. Especially when he blacked out.

Dying was awkward, dying was never not awkward. It required a lot more explana…[Read more]

@everyone

I’m going to pull Enydd out. She’s grown a lot here, and I don’t think I’ll uncover more about here. (Not to mention that she’d probably have a nervous breakdown at the beginning of the fight. XD)

@calidris

I feel for this new character of yours. XD

Your Character: Where exactly am-

Castle: Deepest regret! Go!

@jared-williams

I’ve done mine🙂

Is Lorcan still in the castle? I forget who is writer is…

Thanks a bunch for the advice! It really helped me to know that other writers have worked through the same problem I’m having! (And that it worked for you when you shifted the perspectives of your MC) Payton is the first get-under-your-skin, can-be-kind-of-annoying-at-times character that I’ve written – I think that’s why I like him XD He does get…[Read more]

*Peeks up from coffee* Oh, right! Yeah I’ll get Ehud, I think he’s the last one! XDD

@calidris

Sounds great!

And I think that Ehud hasn’t gone yet, has he?

@jared-williams @e-n-leonard I have one more character to do (this is going to double as his re-introduction to the castle), but after that I’m ready to move on!

I’m going to try to finish his tonight!

@jared-williams

I’m done with my characters’ regrets. After they’ve finished any interaction with Avin, I’m going to pull them out during the beginning of Saevus’s battle and plop Mara into the middle of it (she’ll love that).

You’re welcome!

@emily-waldorf

@irishcelticredflowercrown

@e-n-leonard

@calidris

@this-is-not-an-alien

@inkhorn

@ethan-leonard

@lady-grace

Anyone else want to participate in the regret sequence? Last call, I think…. ? We can draw it to a close soon…. if there isn’t any objections? … So we can move onto Saevus attacking the castle. (hehe…. and…[Read more]

Hello!  I actually had a similar experience in the last few months – I made a side character who stole the spotlight, and I ended up refocusing the entire story and making him and his love interest the new MCs.  It was honestly a great decision, and it really helped to simplify the story and make it more personal (I’ve had similar experiences as t…[Read more]

Np! Yeah see I have the advantage here coz half the castle’s writers are my siblings so I can just ask them lol XDD

*Me, who just read Saevus’ worst regret in the other Castle.*

Oooooh