@ariella-newheart
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Buddy J. replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart… though Livi and I are enjoying quite a debate… please don’t hesitate to step back in and interrupt us. *smiles* I greatly look forward to whatever you have to say. And if it comes down too it, Livi and I can even take our debate elsewhere, as it holds lesser precedence to true writing discussion.
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart – Thank you! Yes, the throne room (and the whole empire in general) is very depressing. It’s necessary for some of the evil emperor’s most important plans (which will not be divulged just yet. ;)) Lol, yes, Racleva will be busy…funnily enough, there’s a scene similar to this in her story where she gives away her position by…[Read more]
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Christlover replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne-the-noob14
Alright, thanks! I had envisioned the map room with a long hallway coming out of heading towards the back of the castle with doors off of both side of it. The reason I originally thought this was because I was imagining the green door as the front of the castle. I am personally fine with envisioning it either…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
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Buddy J. replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne_the_noob14… I would not throw a coffee bean at you. But thank you for those. *nods*
@ariella-newheart… Cool! I REALLY look forward to reading it. I am currently putting my mind into limited third mode, as opposed to omniscient… and it’s cool.
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Christlover replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne-the-noob14
Thanks for the tip! I have always struggled with punctuation in general, and your explanation has made the most sense so far. I will make sure to correct it in the future. Sorry that I got the layout wrong, I am told that I change the look of settings in my mind a lot when they are described to me. A drawing or an in-depth…[Read more]
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Buddy J. replied to the topic A Street Team? Is that what they're called? in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Hola! Thanks! And no worries. I haven’t been able to think about starting an FB page in quite a while. I mean, I got sick shortly after starting this topic. And things haven’t gotten back in line, 100 %. BUT! I’m here… I’m back.
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@christlover Oh… I like Theseus! And I love that you have him attack Racleva! That’s gonna be awesome!! *snickers evilly*
I don’t think you left out anything… He seems very fleshed out and all.
To follow up Ariella’s comment about his personality type, what I did to figure out Lucas’ type (ISTJ-A) is I took the Myers Briggs personality test…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@elisha-starquill Ooh… I like Racleva’s character so far! (Is it ra-CLEE-va?) And is she a wolf or a person? Or in-between? The way you describe her, she could be either.. This is gonna get interesting quite soon I see 😛 Lucas has zero magic in his world. The only difference is he lives in the mid-1800s, as opposed to present day. So I’m n…[Read more]
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Dashuri Halad posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart I saw that you were looking for beta-readers. I would be happy to do some beta-reading for you. Your novel looks very interesting.
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Oh, that would be awesome! I actually haven’t had any guys beta-read this book yet, so I’d love to hear your thoughts.
Here’s the link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lzSmMZq02D1qUEzI9vGK8YnZ8InSIs0RkbVCz58g0dA/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you so much!
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart No, they don’t
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Christlover replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Is there a limit to how many characters a single author can bring in? There are a couple of characters that I don’t have developed well enough to bring them in right now, but I do want to bring them in eventually. Can I bring one in now and some others in later?
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Sageinthemeadow replied to the topic Anyone doing Inktober? in the forum Art Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@deeprun Thanks! That’s become my new go-to form of scribble. ;p
@catwing I will persevere! Thank you! Also, I’m curious about the skeleton horse too. >.>
Your “Swing” was very clever!! *thumbs up* xD
@ariella-newheart Thank you! And your dragon is awesome, by the way. 🙂
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart – Cool idea! This is looking so fun. I’m going to bring in Racleva, one of my antagonists, because I need to get to know her better and it’d be cool to have a bad guy. A little bit about her…
Racleva Khimelin is a hardened fourteen-year old with fire powers who’s faced more struggles in her short life than most by the time they…[Read more]
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 8 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 – I think you can still submit! The deadline says Sunday night.
@ariella-newheart – Thanks for those tips! Lol, I would’ve chosen a silky interior lining, so good thing you warned me. 😛
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart *nods* I don’t think I have a JoAnn’s anywhere near me…
Oh whoops… I forgot about the word war.. I wrote stuff though!! Can I still submit my word count or is it too late??
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart Hopefully I didn’t mess up Caedon’s personality too badly… 😛
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yours is awesome! I love Caedon’s reason for choosing the plain door. It almost made me cry. I get sentimental over the smallest things sometimes 🙂
*nods* I thought so. Yes!! That’d be awesome! I may write that in mine in a second.. We’ll see how far I get.
Yay! I’m glad you like it! Yeah, my original one had the hall…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yep, they’re all wolves. 🙂 I just can’t decide which one.
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Hopefully that works… 











