93@ImperatorPenguin

The blind man was trying to get the strange substance out of one of his feet. Nithel’s feet still burned from all the sharp dust in them, but the man had a large sliver. Like a piece of metal. And he was bleeding quite a bit.

“Ya’know what. I’m just gonna go with the one nearest me.” He said and stretched out his leg, more blood leaked from th…[Read more]

Avin

The girl didn’t say anything for a moment, and Avin wondered if he’d frightened her. Then she began talking. Slowly at first, but faster as her words sketched her home and family. Suddenly she stopped. He could see her grin sheepishly in the darkness.  “Sorry, I can go on and on when I start talking. It runs in the family.” she sa…[Read more]

Alaric

Before either of them could say anything else, someone in a white coat hurried up. Another person he couldn’t place. Nobody here looked like they did in Reantare.

“I heard you shouting, but I didn’t catch a name.”

Alaric winced. I was shouting alright. At your friend.

“Alaric. Prince of Reantare but Jade tells me that doesn’t matter…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy just hearing “I like sci fi and I like that idea” is actually a great encouragement for what I’m trying to figure out lol. Thanks so much!

Calliope

Lorcan looked back at Ophelia, who had turned even pinker than her top. I couldn’t help a smile.

“Aren’t you being a wee bit harsh on her?”

“She has more than enough people to flatter her, I won’t be one of them,” I said.

Lorcan didn’t seem appeased by that answer, but that was just because he hadn’t seen the little social butte…[Read more]

Ophelia

I left my fake smile right where it was. What else could I do? I barely knew Cal. We had never been introduced, I’d only heard of her secondhand, though Athena, who had been less than flattering in her description.

I would just give her the benefit of the doubt. Perhaps she hadn’t meant to hurt me.

I just wanted to leave. Cal was…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

“None of your business birdbrain. And if you don’t meet me saying, you look like a friendless emo who has a parrot as a best friend.” She smirked.

LOLLLL!!! That’s HILARIOUS I actually laughed out loud XD

@rose-colored-fancy

asdfghjkl that made me think of that one audio XD that perfectly applies to Cal LOLL!!!

(“A girl doesn’t dye her hair that color unless she has psychological problems.” “My hair color has nothing to do with my psychological problems!!!”)

Oooh you just gave me an idea😂😂

Lorcan

Lorcan had a good feeling that Cal and the o…[Read more]

@inkhorn

Enydd is being ridiculously stubborn with me, revealing she has a different side to her but refusing to show it to me. Because of her refusal to cooperate, her narrative may seem out of character at times.

LOLL, don’t you love when they get like that XD Well, it’s usually a sign of development!

@emily-waldorf

That bit you wrote for…[Read more]

@toljamedia

So, I don’t have much/any advice on the publishing front, but I just had to pop in and comment!

I want to be able to talk about God like its 1880s Kansas, but with the sense of yearning and progress that space provides. I have an agricultural research planet run by an interstellar version of NASA. The rest of the plot is just dealing…

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@calidris

sorry, didn’t see your post until after I posted mine. I had my two in the back of the room previously, so I decided to pick up where I had left off… hope it works. I can have Abirami interact with you in my next post… after people’s reactions… I’m gonna have Abirami try to corral everyone out of the room… =)

Ku

(essence is the “magical system” of my fantasy world. It’s based off of Plato’s true forms, if knows what that is. =) )

Pitch blackness.

“No.” No way could I be alone.

I stretched out my essence, seeking for some living creature. Surely, I would find one. Even as a street urchin, I was never really alone. Every square inch of earth hous…[Read more]

@jared-williams Kit and Valencia are free if you’d like to start an interaction between them and Ku/Abirami!

Valencia:

The last of the street lights flicker on, scattering the inky shadows on the damp sidewalk.  The sickly yellow glow flashes across Kit’s keys as they twirl around his finger, flickering in and out of his hand to the beat of some inaudible tune.  My chest tightens as the keys slip just beneath his fingertips.  Just five minutes be…[Read more]

WOW! Things are moving fast! I was going to write something yesterday, but then another page of writing appeared!

So…. before the large break in the castle, I had Ku’Aya (nicknamed Ku) and Abirami. Ku calls him Ami, but Abirami hates that nickname. Ku is a 14yr. old Aelacrin girl, and Abirami is an 18 year old Aygiff boy. Aelacrin’s are green…[Read more]

Rosemary turned toward the sound of Miss Painted Face and Alaric’s conversation. Jade reluctantly turned with her.

”I’ve never seen so many strangers in my life,” said Rosemary.

”We’ve never seen any, you mean, until now.” Jade braced herself for another conversation with the princeling brat, now with the added benefit of — another dancer! O…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

🙂 And I also want to thank you for your review of my dystopian plot idea. It was very helpful. 🙂 (One can never use too many smiley face emojis XD)

ENYDD

A man (How old is Avin? I’m guessing mid- thirties to early forties) moved towards me as one would towards a frightened animal. My lips quirked upward. I must look terrified.…[Read more]

“Failure to accept your fatal flaws shall end in death. Touch the mirrors and begin your trials.”

Uhhhhhh … what made the mirror’s special?

How are mirrors related to fatal flaws?

What trials?

“So, who wants to go first?” comes a strange voice I hadn’t heard yet – yet being defined as ‘since I fell through the first hole in reality.’

Pu…[Read more]