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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Okay, can I just say how much I love that part!? It makes me like Abirami so much more. He was literally willing to take the injuries he’d dealt to the others. That’s an awfully big sacrifice. I love it so much!
@everyone
I think I might drop in Mejt’s older brother. I had an idea for his character and it could be pretty h…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Hi Skylarynn! I believe we met in the villains’ character castle a while ago! Nice to see you again!
Disclaimer, I have next to no medical knowledge, I’ll leave that to @the-inkspiller . However, I have some experience with longswords and some knowledge of medieval stuff (having researched it myself) So I’ll try to give you a partial…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Let’s see if I can revive this thread.
So a character of mine (@anne_the_noob14 not Brendin, I swear) had a longsword thrown at his back when he was 17. I’ve already decided that it miraculously managed to cut his back open from his right shoulder to his left hip, but my questions for you are:
1) Is it possible the impact from…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Haha yeah XD
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
“The thabians attacked us while we were unarmed and not ready. My brother… he tried hiding my sister and I but when I tried to find them… everyone was just… gone.”
“I’m sorry.” Pia said. “I didnt know my father was even thinking of attacking.”
Kallun said nothing. He only nodded.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Glad to do it. 😉 and Lorcan is fully healed now too. =) Lots of fun things to come, I don’t doubt… (oh, and Ku is currently sending her bugs out into the castle to map it out. hehe. – well, at least a map of the castle as it currently is… or perhaps even as it changes… hehe hehe.)
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
“what happened?” Ellie asked finding some smooth rocks to use as plates for the fish
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
THE IRONY!!!!! Look at what I said about her family on cucg
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
“that’s alright.” Kallun peeled them and cut them in quarters with his dagger. He passed them all around and K’Nika passed around some sticks so they could roast over the flame.
“K’Nika?” Kallun glanced at the small girl.She looked over at him.
”Could you tell us about your family?”
K’Nika nodded. “I have two siblings, and my parents… or I did.”
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
“Perfect!” Ellie proclaimed, “shall we eat, or shall I cook the onions first?”
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
@Jared-williams Thanks for interacting with Isella! It was really great and will provide much fun and interesting stuff to answer to. :))) I’m a very happy camper over here. One problem is that I doubt I’ll be able to reply until Monday. I’ll try tomorrow, but…
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
K’Nika raised her eyebrows.
Kallun brought a few extra fish, just in case. He looked around, “Pia?”
Her red-brown hair bobbed up about the tall grass, “I found wild onions!” She made her way back with a arm load of them.”Wild onions are local here, the Tribe would eat them all the time…” Her voice trembled. She missed her people.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
The fish were cooking away. “Hm…” Ellie thought turning them slowly so they could evenly. “Julian, come turn these, and uh, don’t turn them into charcoal this time.”
“Stop it.” he mumbled glancing at K’Nika.
She went over to bag that was laying on the rock with her wet clothes, and dug around in it until she pulled out a small box. Inside were…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Tears…. I just wrote a whole section and lost it again. waaa.
Ok. bah. here we go again… well, at least, for me… here we go… again. :,(.
Abirami
I put on my garb as Ku’Aya stormed in and stomped over to me.
I held my hands up as she wielded her quarterstaff like a painter’s brush. “How dare you throw me! What if my hive hadn’t…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
I think it’s an awesome visual. In a tumultuous sea, it can very well seem like a dark hand rising up to swat you into oblivion!
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Please Critique: Warning- Emotional Scene (1809 words) in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
That’s awesome and sounds like a great and interesting book!
amen!
no problem. =) I understand.
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Kallun pulled out two more, and K’Nika brought them to Ellie.
Pia was digging around by the trees and tall grass in search of any other edible thing. -
Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Julian frowned. “Alright. How many more do we need?”
In the meantime, Ellie had found some sticks that had a sort of Y shape to them and stabbed them into the ground on either side of the fire. “Hey, Julian, let me have those. This is something I can actually do.”
He gave the stick to Ellie and she laid the stick over the fire. “You stay away f…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic Best Analogies in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Hi there, sir! I don’t believe we’ve met yet. I’m Erynne (Erin 😉 )
This is a really cool idea!
The best analogy I’ve used in writing was a fantasy story and the scene was of siblings trying to escape pirates in the middle of a storm. They were in a small getaway boat and to describe the waves I used this analogy:
The large,…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 2 months ago
Kallun shook his head head. “That’s alright.” He walked over to the edge and reached down into the water, the fish swam right to his hands, and he pulled them out with ease.
K’Nika grinned.
(lol yesssss I have that’s the best.)
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