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Gracie replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
No, you’re good!
I’m so sorry about the POV! I tried to put a break whenever it switched, and got rid of a lot of thoughts several people had… Do you think I should just leave out Rachel’s part or something?
Hebrew words,.. I changed all Eloha to G-d.
I like the idea of the nick-name. I will have to think of one. I am embarrassed, (to…[Read more]
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AshleaAdams posted an update in the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Hi, everyone! I hope y’all are having a great day!
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Eitan replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Your prose is great, and the chapter is very good. I think you portrayed the time era very good, and I loved your subtle references to the Bible – The covenant of David and Jonathan, and Boas – the godly, not quite poor man, that take scare of a young woman / girl without a family. Maybe it was totally accidental though, but I still…[Read more]
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Heyo, just so you know my email is acting up…I can’t see new messages at this point…or send anything.
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Ok, I’ll send it here.
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Hi!
Hmm… I’m not sure. I’m pretty sure I have such things, but I can’t think about such right now… What about you?
Something I really admire in my secular friends is their tolerance. Even though we disagree about so many things, they tolerate and love me. Many people call themselves ‘’tolerant and progressive’’ when they’re so far from it, but…[Read more]
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Oh, I got that one last night. (: I also replied to it, (Not sure if it went through).
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It didn’t.
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I sent you an email from my dad’s email. (:
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Beth replied to the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Awesome!! Will read this soon!
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Gracie started the topic Chean’s Story Chpt. 2 in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted
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Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant town, two miles from Chena’s home. Joab had a wife, named Rachel, and one…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I think it’s a better idea, so people can comment on each chapter without comments being confused.
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
@eitan @beth20
<p style=”text-align: center;”>~a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted~</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>II</p>
Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant t…[Read more] -
Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Oh! Do you want me to start a new topic for every chapter?
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I’m sorry you had to start over. 🙁
Okay, pre-prologue has disappeared. 🙂 The Roman scene it is.
I watched the video you linked, and might again. (:
Another, smaller problem I had with the pre-prologue is the POV. As a general advice – don’t use omniscient POV.
So, you likely don’t want me to do this in the
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Eitan replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Oh, I wrote a whole comment and then the electricity fell…
Your writing is really good! Descriptions, punctuation, etc., you do it great. Good job!
You’ve also portrayed good the relationships in the family. Malachi sounds like a real elder brother, and I say it as an elder brother 😉
The main problem with the pre prologue is that……[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I think this is the one you already read. *embarrassed look* I haven’t edited yet. Sorry.
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Beth replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I’ll make sure to read this lol!
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Beth Darlene joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
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Gracie started the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Six year old Chena Batjehoshaphat laughed as she and her two brothers chased a plump frog.
“Hurry! Hurry! Before he reaches the stream!” Nine-year-old Malachi rushed ahead, shoving his little sister aside.
Far behind them Levi, his chin only reaching a finger over the tall grass began to cry. Chena glanced back, her shoulders low…[Read more]
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Olivia Catherine joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
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Gracie replied to the topic WWI in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Your story idea is amazing!
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Gracie replied to the topic Old West in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Wow! And awesome!
I have a book with that article in it. Amazing that you’re making a story from it! I really think it was real. They’re not the only ones who saw such creatures (though farther back a ways.) In 106ish BC Marcus Tulliues Cicero wrote about flying snakes, and where they lived. In the same paragraph that he talked about the ibis…[Read more]
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