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  • #136836
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (Mmm… Ok, have an idea. I’m keeping it a surprise for you to find out later though 😝)

    The rider got closer, there was no time react. He or she rode up to their shelter and jumped of the horse which was covered with metal armor. The rider was also in a metal suit, and had something over his face which made it almost impossible to tell anything about this person. He was small, almost like a child. Eliana tensed, “H-hi” she managed to spit out. The rider walked up to her and got as close to her face as he could. This made her even more nervous. “Ellie?” the rider, which she now realized was a boy, asked. He pulled off his head covering and revealed his face. “Julian? Oh, Julian!” she yelled and pulled him into a hug.

    “I thought you had been lost in the attack” Julian said.

    “I thought the same about you! I managed to escape and ran away to find help.”

    “Um, is that your help?” Julian asked pointing to Kallun who had been silent this entire time.

     

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #136837
    Erynne
    @erynne

    So Julian is one of Ellie’s best friends. (one of three, but he’s my favorite out of all of them, mainly because he and I have a similar personality) We’ll both control him like he’s one of our characters. Here’s a quick description of him:

    He’s very sarcastic, but also very smart and loyal.

    He’s about the size of an 8 year old even though he’s like 16 and this embarrasses him (so he would probably be quite annoyed with Kallun for being so tall XD)

    Umm those are about the main things you need to know about him. 

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #136856
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Ooo ciool and I like the picture)

    Kallun gave a nod. He didn’t know what else to do. He looked down and realized he had been squeezing the life out of a rock he had been holding, resulting in a strange form of rock as he opened his fist to release it.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #136857
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    And later a friend of his can show up?

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145645
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @erynne haha you remembered this guy?
    Fun fact: that Mallean character i just did on the CUCG is actually this guy’s granddaughter. 😉

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145649
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Oh wow I never would’ve guessed that 😂😂

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #145650
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @erynne lolol

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145781
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @erynne whatever happened to this?

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145797
    Erynne
    @erynne

    I disappeared off the face of the earth.

    Since I’m back I guess We could pick it back up if you want

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #145805
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Yeah I have a thing tomorrow night and the goal is to not fall asleep for twenty four hours so I’ll have plenty of time for this kind of stuff I hope XD

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145809
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Lol I love how we’re just going back and forth between three threads XD

    you don’t want to fall asleep tonight?

    There was a dead silence. A very very long silence (like what 4 months? XD)

    “Soo… I guess we just hang out here until the rain clears” Ellie finally said

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #145838
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    @erynne Yea sry no i went to bed, I’m doing the all-nighter tonight tho.

     

    Kallun nodded. “I suppose so.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145856
    Erynne
    @erynne

    The amount of awkwardness in this scene is unreal XD

    “So Julian what have you been doing?”

    “After we got seperated at the party I found my way to get some armor and got Griffin here (who had been tied to a conveniently shaped rock) then we followed that wizard dude.”

    “Yeah thanks for asking before stealing my horse”

    “Right like I knew our party was going going to be crashed. Literally.”

    “Well… Did you figure anything out while you were following the wizard?”

    “Yeah I actually did. He stops in a particular places in every country he stops in and in that place some sort of disaster happens.  He came from somewhere up north. I think there’s clues left behind wherever he strikes. Also his name is Zerrak.”

    (I think that’s what I named him. I can’t remember Lol)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #145868
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun was listening to the two converse as he played around with rocks, something he hasn’t realized was such a soothing  practice.
    He looked up at them, “What if it doesn’t clear up? We could be stuck here. How can we defeat him if we are so easily trapped by such magic..?”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #145938
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Julian looked at him with a frown “you are stuck here. I was on my way out when you decided to shoot an arrow at me”

    “A-actually that was me.” Ellie said shyly

    “You can’t shoot an arrow”

    “I can”

    “I’ve known you your entire life and I’ve never known you to shoot anything.”

    “Well I didn’t say I’ve been doing it forever! What’s your problem Julian?”

    Julian eyed the blue haired boy who still had a rock in his hand, “Nothing. Anyways, if you have a thick enough armor you can get through the rain. It’s hot and uncomfortable but it at least won’t burn your skin”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

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