4 Factors to Consider Before Including Physical Manifestations of God in Fiction

May 31, 2021

The divine is an elusive subject to capture, yet humans have been fascinated with it since the beginning of time, exploring it through poetry, stories, music, art, and various other mediums. Whether God shows up in a burning bush, as a thunderous voice accompanied by fire and lightning on a mountain, or in the humble person of Jesus Christ, incredible wonders are guaranteed to happen. Any moment that He steps into the story of humanity is powerful and purposeful.


As Christian writers, how are we to approach these visitations in a way that is both faithful and accessible? Before we tackle the how, we must answer another question: Should we even attempt to tuck theophany into our stories? We’ll be offering the world an image of God that’s outside the revelation of Scripture, after all.


Theophany is direct, physical interaction with God Himself. The problem is, we must cast Him as He actually is, removing our own opinions and impressions as much as possible. Can flawed humans even accomplish a task of such immense gravity?


I believe the answer is yes, we can. But it’s a serious undertaking requiring caution, and keeping four guidelines in mind will help us avoid distorting God’s nature.


1. God Is Not a Thing within the Universe

Whenever God enters a scene, we must remember that He isn’t confined to any perimeters or subject to any rules. He is the ground of being. Every molecule subsists because of Him. This fact sets Him beyond the bounds of the universe. When we place Him within a story, we must be diligent to convey that He surpasses all limitations. We can only accomplish that if we manage to represent what cannot be represented.


In the Bible, encounters with God are shrouded in mystery and change from one instance to the next. Because any conception of Him is inconceivable—even by the highest angel—we must strive to preserve His unparalleled complexity within our stories. That could mean deliberately withholding information.


In C. S. Lewis’s Chronicles of Narnia, he ushers his audience into a meeting with Aslan, who is a type of Christ-figure yet not Christ Himself. Lewis never supplies much detail regarding Aslan’s father, “the Emperor over the sea,” which packs a meaningful amount of distance between the readers, the characters, and the symbol for God.


2. Descriptions of God Are Necessarily Incomplete

When we write about visible or audible contact between God and our characters, we’re drawing a line around an immeasurable deity. Every language on earth springs from the Word spoken before time and into eternity, and therefore no combination of letters and syllables can ever completely express their own origin. Neither can we. While that doesn’t bar us from trying, we must realize that anything we set down in print will be imperfect.


We don’t have an easy, straightforward manual we can follow, but we can steep ourselves in the passages of Scripture that expound on who God is and how He engages with His creation. What does He reveal or say about Himself? These truths are an ideal starting point, but even the Bible cannot contain God’s magnitude, because our minds lack the capacity to process and communicate it.


3. Stories Can Shape an Audience’s Perception of God

The prospect of influencing another person’s imagination through a story is both appealing and terrifying. As Christians, we carry a weighty responsibility to accurately depict the fallenness of our world while also honoring God. The responsibility grows heavier, perhaps too heavy for some, when our characters venture into the presence of God Himself.


Theophany can be very impactful but also very dangerous, because what if we misconstrue it?


William P. Young’s wildly popular novel, The Shack, is a modern retelling of Job that revolves around a protagonist who undergoes intense suffering and wrestles with the problem of evil. Mack comes face to face with God at the shack where his daughter was murdered. The unique aspect of Young’s technique is that each member of the Trinity appears in bodily form. While this makes God tangible and relatable, it also positions the author to impart conclusions about Him that readers will accept as authoritative.


We could argue that it’s fiction and everyone knows the events aren’t real, but whether writers are aware of it or not, stories become a type of catechesis: a moment of teaching. When we allude to or mention God, we pose questions about the divine, and when we deposit characters at the foot of His throne, we begin to provide answers. While Young is to be applauded for crafting a moving story about love and trust in God, he also built a concrete likeness that is prone to human error.


4. Be Wary of Putting Words into God’s Mouth

God’s commands are life-giving. He brought the universe into existence out of nothing. In the Old Testament, He warned the Israelites that they should treat His edicts as sacred: “You shall not add to the word that I command you, nor take away from it” (Duet. 4:2). And the New Testament reiterates that “the word of God is living and active, sharper than any two-edged sword” (Heb. 4:12a). As writers seeking to glorify God in all of our work, we must be careful that the dialogue we assign to Him is reverent.


In The Brothers Karamazov, Dostoyevsky achieves what I believe to be the most veracious exchange between God and man outside of the Bible. Christ Himself comes to earth to stand trial before the Grand Inquisitor, but His response to all the accusations of evil isn’t biblical platitudes or theological explanations. It’s a kiss. This decision is brilliant because it neither puts words into God’s mouth nor ignores His solution to the world’s suffering: His love in sacrificing His Son on the cross.


Again, we don’t have a handbook that instructs us how to script a fictional conversation with God. So if we do choose to have God speak in a story, we need to adhere closely to the attributes we know from Scripture.


Pursue Humility and Courage

The beauty of stories is their ability to pull readers into eras, countries, and situations they’ve never experienced. When our characters physically encounter God, we’re giving readers a chance to interact with the divine in their imaginations. A scene like that can change lives, but if it’s not executed with humility and courage, I suggest that it shouldn’t be done at all. But don’t despair—the goodness of God is more than worth the effort.


How do you gain the wisdom you need to address the divine effectively in fiction? Because of how broad this topic is, we’re going to cover it in a couple more articles. This Thursday, Martin will examine the pros and cons of two possible methods for portraying God in fiction. Then, next Monday, Lori and Allison will team up to discuss another facet of the supernatural—angels and demons. Hopefully our advice will equip you to encompass the spiritual realm in your stories.


At the end of the day, God is the reason we write. He can and does use our stories, whether we mention Him explicitly or point to Him through veils and shadows. So let’s recognize the enormity of the task and stretch ourselves toward excellence.


Return on Thursday as Martin continues our series on theophany. In the meantime, we’d love to hear your thoughts! What’s the biggest challenge you grapple with when depicting God in fiction?



  1. Zachary Holbrook

    Story Embers is a truly unique and helpful resource for Christian writers. I’m really glad you’re exploring this topic and look forward to future articles!

    • Rose Sheffler

      Thanks Zachary! I hope it helps you on your writing journey

  2. Brian Stansell

    Love this article and totally agree!

    I do need to add that any writer attempting theophany should have a deep and daily fellowship with their Creator, including prayerful openness to the guidance of His Holy Spirit.

    Teach me to do Your will, For You [are] my God; Your Spirit [is] good. Lead me in the land of uprightness. [Psalm 143:10 NKJV]

    Writing a theophany instance of the Most High, if attempted, should always and only be done in a deep personal reverence for Him.

    “When the Spirit of truth comes, he will guide you into all the truth. For he will not speak on his own, but he will speak whatever he hears. He will also declare to you what is to come. “He will glorify me, because he will take from what is mine and declare it to you. [John 16:13-14 CSB]

    The goal of a portrayal should always glorify God and especially the human touch of God in Jesus.

    Wherefore I give you to understand, that no man speaking by the Spirit of God calleth Jesus accursed: and [that] no man can say that Jesus is the Lord, but by the Holy Ghost. [1 Corinthians 12:3 KJV]

    One of the methods I appreciated about Jerry Jenkins and Tim LaHaye, in the Left Behind depictions of theophany, was the use of God’s Word in any divine communication since we do know the ‘words of God’ reverently recorded there. (2 Tim. 2:15; 3:16)

    Job’s, Abraham’s and the OT prophet’s discourse with God, shows God to be interactive and personal–relational–rather than just a sovereign who issues forth divine edicts. The ground principle, however, is God has the full detailed and timeless perspective in all things. Any depiction should never limit that awesome sight aspect.

    Both Peter and Jude admonish people not to slander “glorious ones”, but be mindful of the position God has permitted them to occupy. (2 Peter 2:10-12 & Jude 1:8-10)

    Finally, any depiction of a theophany must never contradict God’s Word or His Nature as represented in Scripture. This requires any writer to seek out what the Bible reveals about God, rather than what we assume we need from God to serve the story we are writing. We serve Him, not the other way around. He loves us, but that love does not make Him subservient to our whims. Anything we ask of Him should be in accordance with His Will and not our own.

    Without humility and reverence and a personal deferential relationship with Him that involves pursuing and yielding to Him, it is my belief that a writer should not attempt theophany.

    One other point is that God’s Power is never conjured. It always serves His Will not that of a wielder. Those in the biblical who demonstrated either “the supernatural quickening” of the Holy Spirit or we used as channels to perform miracles did so at the behest of God’s prompting. The power never came from them, only through them.

    God’s nature is often to do what is unexpected by mankind’s rationale. (Isaiah 55:9)
    As He told the Apostle Paul (2 Cor. 12:9), “[His] strength is made perfect in weakness”, signifying that reliance on Him, rather than operating in our own self-sufficiency, allows Him to manifest His Power to bring Him glory through us. It is in yielding to Him, that we are then empowered by Him. And that holds for all things, not just in our writing and striving to co-create with him in our offering back our writing gifts for His glory.

    (This was just my two cents’ worth and an Amen!) 🙂

    Thank you, Rose, for writing this article! It contains many pearls of wisdom and admonishments I will be reminding myself of as I continue to pursue the call to write for His glory.

    I am looking forward to the next installment in this topical series! I very much appreciate all you and the staff of Story Embers are doing for us in addressing these topics.

    God Bless!

    • Rose Sheffler

      Thanks Brian! Godspeed

    • Rose Sheffler

      It’s my pleasure, Gracie

  3. Taylor Clogston

    Thank you for the great Article, Rose! Point number four is one I’m struggling with. My book has a conversation between literal Jesus and a lowercase-d disciple who’s a bit hostile toward Jesus, and there’s a point where the character asks “Isn’t everything I’ve suffered enough?” and I legitimately don’t know how to have Jesus answer. The content of the response is fairly easy, but the I struggle with the delivery!

    One note: What do you mean by Aslan not being Christ Himself? Do you just mean that Narnia isn’t the Bible? There’s that whole bit from Dawn Treader: “’I am [in your world] … But there I have another name. You must learn to know me by that name. This was the very reason why you were brought to Narnia, that by knowing me here for a little, you may know me better there.’” that makes it pretty clear Aslan was intended to be Christ.

    • Rose Sheffler

      Hi Taylor, It’s hard to know what Jesus would say, and it’s admirable that you’re wrestling to do it right. Keep trying!

      As for the point on Aslan, Lewis seems to use him as a type of Christ but he’s not literally Christ, and I would argue, not even a complete representation (as all representations of Christ must be incomplete). Also, while we can conjecture Lewis is hinting at Christ, he deliberately never comes out and labels Aslan as Christ. I try to follow his conservative approach. It’s always hard to know what an author is really doing (especially since we can’t ask him), and sometimes the author doesn’t know.

      Thanks for reading!

  4. Joelle Stone

    YAY I’M SO GLAD SE IS DOING A SERIES ON THIS!! Man, did/do I struggle with this. In my first ever full-length novel I portrayed Jesus physically and called him Adonai. But that SO did not work, and when (like, 5 years later) I rewrote the book I took out my “Adonai” and instead am using the Trinity as I am experiencing him in everyday life – NOT physically. This article is so helpful as I struggle with this!! Thanks, Rose!

    • Rose Sheffler

      You’re so welcome, Joelle! Thanks for your enthusiasm and I hope you found the series uplifting

  5. Bethany

    Great article, and I’m very much looking forward to the rest of the series! I only write supernatural type stuff in fantasy where my god-figure points to God, instead of actually BEING Him, you know? I feel more free and comfortable doing it that way.

    • Rose Sheffler

      Bethania, I 100% agree. I do the same in my writing.

  6. Jenny Chasteen

    I’m really glad you’re tackling this important and difficult topic, and I love all the comments! When I’m portraying God in my stories, one thing I really struggle with is keeping an accurate balance between attributes like mercy and judgment, holiness and humility, and joy and solemnity. In the Bible, God so frequently doesn’t do what I’d expect. So I always wonder if I’m writing what He would really do or say. Again, it requires so much prayer and immersion in Scripture. And feedback from wise believers is also really important.

    • Rose Sheffler

      Well said Jenny. I think God is a very surprising Being on the whole.

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