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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
((okay… am ready to introduce character))
Standing behind the coffee shop, at the back door is a hooded figure clothed all in black. Clothed like a wraith in sheets of dark fabric which wrap its body, the figure is invisible to outside eyes, that is if they’d venture behind the coffee shop. In its right hand is a silver katana that whispers in…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
The girl shifted into a crouching position, but made no move for the door. So Emmit stood up, grabbing her arm in an iron grip, and pulled her to the entrance way of the coffee shop.
“Come on,” he said, pushing her inside before letting the door close behind them. He then turned and stood like a statue, head down slightly, listening, watching.…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Help! Representing God in Fantasy Fiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hope that’s helpful.
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Help! Representing God in Fantasy Fiction? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey!
Although it might be certainly tacky, I don’t think it’s dangerous ground. What I would say is that it’s okay to use a fictional deity of God, and he doesn’t have to be just like the God of Life. And I say this for at least one reasons. If we look at the parables in scripture, we see that Jesus uses representations of God, and…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
((@scribbles… I know! It’s so fun, and cryish! And yeah… Emmit is super protective… which kinda gets him in trouble [huhhh! plot twist in my WIP!]. And he is close to my heart, not just that I like him, but that he’s heavily based of my mindset, and feels like a part of my soul))
He closed his eyes as her voice rang out, music with the…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Also… have you read my two latest posts?
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey there! I don’t mind at all.
First off, the word “kill” is an incorrect translation. We know that it wasn’t wrong to kill in battle, self defense, or defense of others, in the OT. Second it says angry without cause and yet in Ephesians it tells us “Be angry and do not sin.” Besides that if someone is trying to kill me, and…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
And furthermore… “16 All Scripture is breathed out by God and profitable for teaching, for reproof, for correction, and for training in righteousness, 17 that the man of God may be complete, equipped for every good work.” (2 Timothy 3:16-17)
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Also… have a very long post XD
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Any guys out there? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
And I did it again… So this will feel like stale crackers…
I will start out by sending you Romans six and seven… because you took both of those Romans passages out of context. Romans eight still applies here, but it’s not crucial to my point. This chunk of Romans says two things that I believe are very important here (though I’m sure it…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Interested in a dystopian/utopian fairytale sort of thing with some symbolism? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Sounds great!
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
The girl was obviously enjoying this game, as she held out the paper for him to grab. She reminded Emmit of a little girl bouncing up and down, waiting for her sippy cup.
He reached out, taking it with one hand and reading it with a quick glance.
“You are a goof ball.” This time he let smile creep up, matching the glistening blue sky that broke…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
((@scribbles hahahahahahaha!))
Emmit picked the new note up, and his face remained as stone. Cool stone, but stone.
“…And I have no words for how I acted in there either. You must think me crazy.” Bahahahaha! he thought. The girl’s smart.
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
(( graceabounds2129 Hey! This is the lounge… you don’t need to ask to be disruptive. Also, I second what @scribbles said ^))
A few seconds after she picked the paper up, he felt a little tension relieve. It was almost like the sun fell below the trees after a blistering day, and the cool breeze pulled in. The pen scribbled for a second or two…[Read more]
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
Emmit made no reaction when the girl moved, only continued scribbling, but also let a few mumbles here and there into his musings. At last, after several minutes of writing, he put pad on the ground between them, without pushing it forward, and still never looked at her. It read:
~~~~~I am without words 😉 ((actual winky face on the paper)) at how…
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
((@graceabounds2129 Okay!))
((@scribbles Hey! This works! I know where to take this (at least for my character). ))
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
(( @graceabounds2129 My guy just left the room… sorry))
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Wanna read my next story? in the forum Rillumen’s Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Ah! That makes sense.
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
(( @scribbles @graceabounds2129 I’m still working stuff here))
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Wordsmith replied to the topic Rillumen's First Character Lounge in the forum Character Lounge 8 years, 1 month ago
The girl paused, but then hurried out the door and sat down under the front window. He stared at the window for a minute, trying to decide what to do…
Emmit stepped out the door with a pad of paper in one hand and a pen in the other. He took another step forward, looking both ways down the street, but made no appearance of seeing the girl. So…[Read more]
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