Urwen Starial

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

You could do an introduction for Logan, I’m already writing a part for Rhioe, but feel free to go ahead. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Let’s start this part then. 🙂

@kayla-skywriter

Yeah, that was like what I was imagining, then smaller gears, as the other levels. (still part of the city, just on smaller gears throughout the place, to affect the weather)

Thanks for graffiti-ing your drawing for me, that means a lot. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

You still there?

@kayla-skywriter

Yeah, just with gear thingies on the end. XD Idk, that’s just how I’ve been imagining it. To each his own, or her own, I guess, go ahead, dream up whatever you want. I’m just here, if you’re not sure, ask @emberynus-the-dragonslayer, Emberynus would know.

🙂

Possibly. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Ah, yes, so. much. like. the. city!!!! *coughs* heh heh, it does.

@kayla-skywriter

I think we decided somewhere back in one of the thread pages for the story that the city was gear shaped, and the various extra levels to the city were all interlocked, as if it were from some machine. *shrugs* Idk, it doesn’t have to be. That sketch is so good, makes my eyes happy.

@kayla-skywriter

There are nine sections to the main part of the city, then smaller section, (all are shaped like gears).

If you hang on a few minutes, I might be able to sketch something fast.

@kayla-skywriter

I believe that the Leader’s building is in the center, the tower or punishment is on the edge of the city, and the knot house is located in a building somewhere. XD Ask Emberynus to enlighten us all.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Sure, let me brainstorm for a few minutes! I can still talk over the details if you want.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Is he with the police? He could help Rhioe in some way. Oooh.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Sure, this sounds like it could be good, want to write it?

*disappears under desk*

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Sure. What’s said character’s name?

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Time, by NF. Thanks anyway.

@kayla-skywriter

XD Era is a dog, she’s Jin’s dog. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

so. . . any ideas? it’s fine if you don’t. 🙂

@kayla-skywriter

Feel free, (please do) write a part where Pasha meets Era, if you could?

@dakota

Thanks 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Cause even if we both break down tonight. . .

*tears up thinking about Aura, Judah and Rhioe*

And you say you hate me, and we go to bed angry. . . 

*Thinks to backstory thing for character story, with Kirat and his mom*

I know everything will be alright, I’ll be here waiting, I promise I’m changing. . .

*starts…[Read more]

@naiya-dyani

I was wondering, did Kiet get taken to the Tower of Punishment???

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Rhioe’s set up for pretty much anything, anything can happen. if you had any suggestions, it’d be extremely helpful. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Firstly: I added a poem to the doc, should you want to read it, could you also suggest some changes if the words don’t flow well?

Secondly: What happened to Judah?

Thirdly: what should I do with Rhioe now?