Urwen Starial

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

My hands are kinda full at the moment, so if you could put it here, that’d be great!

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Nope! It seems good at the moment. But, if you could elaborate on Shyla and Logan, I feel like I understand the majority of it, but I want some background info to help shape the way Rhioe’s going to act.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

I was just worrying, because I wasn’t sure how she could react to such a sudden thing. As long as it’s okay with you. . .

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

🙂

How awkward does this new piece sound? XD

Does it make sense?

And do the words flow okay.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Yup. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

I have a few questions, whenever you have a chance to answer them.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

***

“Sh-Shyla!!” the man standing over her cried, stiffening, he collapsed to his knees. His eyes were wide, and his breathing heavy. Rhioe dropped down next to him, she gritted her teeth, trying to ignore the pain in her ankle.

The man’s hand slipped from her shoulder, and traveled up to his temple. She tried cal…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Yep. I’ll work on the next part. 🙂

@dakota

*hands you a plate of cookies and a mug of hot chocolate*

These might help. 🙂

@dakota

yeah, there could be a fenced in area around it. 🙂 Good idea.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer @dakota

*has made me sadder than words can express*

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Something dramatic could happen 

Rhioe could somehow remind Logan of his little sister (this perhaps making him lock up)

Logan could take her to the old blind woman he lives with.

Any of those. My favorite would be the second, with Logan. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Any of those are fine with me, you can decide. If you can write the next part. 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

***

“Don’t try to get up yet; your ankle’s broken. How do you feel? Does it hurt anywhere else?” he asked.

Rhioe blinked, this wan’t what she’d been expecting.

“I feel fine. But who’re you?” she asked, “And what are you doing in Jin’s house?”

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Nope. XD

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

ideas, things that could happen. *shrugs* ideas.

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Okay!

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Yes. 🙂

@the-fledgling-artist

Mainly the shading and lighting, clipping, alpha lock and how to get clean lines.

@the-fledgling-artist

Oh cool! I have Krita, but it’s taking me a long time to get used to. 🙂

Any tips?