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Eitan replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Oh, I wrote a whole comment and then the electricity fell…
Your writing is really good! Descriptions, punctuation, etc., you do it great. Good job!
You’ve also portrayed good the relationships in the family. Malachi sounds like a real elder brother, and I say it as an elder brother 😉
The main problem with the pre prologue is that……[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I think this is the one you already read. *embarrassed look* I haven’t edited yet. Sorry.
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Beth replied to the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
I’ll make sure to read this lol!
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Gracie started the topic Pre-prologue in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Six year old Chena Batjehoshaphat laughed as she and her two brothers chased a plump frog.
“Hurry! Hurry! Before he reaches the stream!” Nine-year-old Malachi rushed ahead, shoving his little sister aside.
Far behind them Levi, his chin only reaching a finger over the tall grass began to cry. Chena glanced back, her shoulders low…[Read more]
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Ella posted an update in the group Romance Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Ok, I changed my mind, my male character is an ENFP
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Ella posted an update in the group Romance Writers 5 years, 10 months ago
Hi everyone! What is everyone writing? I currently don’t have a romance WIP, but I usually have hints of it in my other stories.
I have a question: How should I build romance? I want to hint at it, but I don’t want it to be in your face. If it helps, my female character is ISTJ and grew up alone most of her life. My male character is ESFP…[Read more]-
Hi Ella,
It looks like your question has been here a little while, but I suppose I could throw in my two cents anyway, since I had a similar setup in my first book (except the girl was the more outgoing one.) I actually don’t think the pacing of your romance is too much dependent on whether your character is more introverted/quiet, or…[Read more]-
Sorry for not getting back to you, Zee! Thanks for your advice! I’ll definitely think about what you said. Appreciate it! 🤗
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Gracie replied to the topic WWI in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Your story idea is amazing!
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Gracie replied to the topic Old West in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 5 years, 11 months ago
Wow! And awesome!
I have a book with that article in it. Amazing that you’re making a story from it! I really think it was real. They’re not the only ones who saw such creatures (though farther back a ways.) In 106ish BC Marcus Tulliues Cicero wrote about flying snakes, and where they lived. In the same paragraph that he talked about the ibis…[Read more]
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