Trallion

I absolutely love seeing all the different reactions to the battle scene =)

@this-is-not-an-alien

I know life is busy… hope your finals went well!!!!

I really want to give Ku’s reactions, but wanted to wait for your response to Ku’s question about love. =) I’m really interested in his reaction… Feel free to write as much or as little as you…[Read more]

@calidris

That was awesome!

🙂

Haha you’ll fit right into the group, I can tell!!

btw I love your quote 😉

@ethan-leonard @jared-williams I’m going to change Kit’s part a little bit – for the sake of his dignity (and his chance with Val) I’m going to have to tone down his stupidity XD He’s hotheaded and impulsive in his own story too, but it’s in a much more modern setting so…idk how real any of this really is to him tbh.  I’m going to try and prod…[Read more]

Jade

”Quiet, wench!” shouted the weird fire guy, swinging his metal-gloved hand at Jade.

She ducked in time to avoid the blow, but not the fire that suddenly burst from his hand. Searing agony licked the side of her face. She dropped to her knees in shock, cupping her cheek in her hand and screaming. Then she fell silent, and something dee…[Read more]

I really, really love how Jade has started to see past Ophelia’s apparent shallowness. It makes me so happy to read!! It also means I’m writing her right, and that makes me happy too 😀

And I love how Jade just marched up to Saevus and told him to shut up and sit down XD That gave me such a laugh!

Yes, and it’s good for Jade, too! She sees most ot…[Read more]

Isaias

Woah. What kind of crazy was this place? A seven foot Protector on fire? Abirami turning into a wolf? That was kinda cool.

Isaias turned to look at Jade, who’d gone rigid. “Did Abirami really just turn into a wolf?” He bounced on the balls of his feet.

Jade gave him a curt nod. “Yes, long story. Stay with Ophelia.”

Stay? Then was s…[Read more]

😂I bet. You can see why I’m trying to develop his character so that he is not just boom town everyday

@jared-williams

You did a good job, but two things (1), he doesn’t really control the elements, it’s more that he uses witchcraft, and (2) he doesn’t take his helmet off. Uses it for intimidation purposes. Also his powers…he is so strong th…[Read more]

lol. I wish you could “like” posts in here. Would make it easier, I think.

@rose-colored-fancy

that was awesome!

@emily-waldorf

Here’s a slightly more in-depth thing about Bonds👆
Which reminds me… I totally forgot to tell y’all about the “bonds” part. Whoops😅. In short, a main theme throughout the trilogy is bonding through friendships/marriage🙂

I seem to have miss typed your thing so…

@calidris

I have an idea for Cal as well, but I don’t know if I’ll be able to write her today. I’ll just start with Ophelia and try to do Cal soon. I’ve been sorely neglecting her XD

Ophelia

Abirami was finally getting the hang of it. I grinned, thrilled with the development.

He hurried off to go get the others and I stayed behind, anxiously rocking from…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

bwahahaha new victim 😂😂😂  I love it

Hhrrrrrmmmm…I’ll pick him up and drop him into group 2. Unannounced. No warning. See how they react to a king wearing maybe 250lbs of armor suddenly dropping into their midst.

FOUND A NEW VICTIM FOR THE CASTLE GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jk @ethan-leonard, welcome aboard!!!
You have two places your character can land in! One group, with Nithel, Nathair, Blaze and Sherlock are in a room inside a mirror being forced to admit their “greed and selfishness” or else…
The other group, Alessio and Arsene are stuck on a ferry and…[Read more]

@calidris

I step back.  I’m not sure what I’d do if he tried pulling that on me, but I don’t think it’d be pleasant.  Is it ok to slap a kid?  It certainly sounds awful, but so is touching people without permission.

XD Conroy does seriously need discipline.

@jared-williams

It’s so sweet to see Abirami slowly adopting Conroy. 🙂

CONROY…[Read more]

*Hurries in way too late* Greetings people! I have sort of survived XD I have some catching up to do…

@inkhorn

It’ll be fun to see Conroy again! I don’t remember much of him, but I look forward to seeing what you’ll do with him!

@ethan-leonard

Hi Ethan! Welcome! Saevus is really cool! I love that art of him!

My characters are Ophelia and…[Read more]

oh, and @ethan-leonard

…. wasn’t sure all the abilities Saevus had, so I just went with best educated guess from what I’d seen so far… hope that’s okay. Change the fight scene to your whims if you wish…. =) I tried to do him justice…

hahahhaha!!!!! oh, that’s great. and…. gives me a wicked idea. (mischievous grin from ear to ear, putting the grinch to shame)

hahaha! so funny.

haha. that was awesome!

Okay…. so, this is gonna be……… interesting.

Hopefully this is good with you all, but I’m really going to throw a wrench in the works.

(oh, and just in case,…[Read more]

@inkhorn @jared-williams I’m going to change a few things from Val’s POV!

@inkhorn feel free to change Conroy’s parts 🙂

“What’s your name?”

“I can’t tell my name to strangers,” the boy answers abruptly.  I pause.  Is this some kind of joke?

“Alright then.  What would you like me to call you?”

“You can call me CF if you want.”

CF?[Read more]