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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok
Niarok scrabbled over the last few rock outcroppings in the tunnel. Firelight glowed up ahead, and he smiled when he realized Klein or Yila must have started a blaze.
The cavern was freezing, colder than even Niarok was used to. Even though the temperature routinely dropped where he lived, it never got this cold.
He strode into the cave,…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
It’s ok! I didn’t do a really good job of describing him to begin with, plus it’s kind of hard to keep track of everyone cause there’s so many characters lol. And I’m also very interested to see his and Niarok’s interactions – Basil and Misu are both from a modern fantasy setting, so he and Niarok are used to very different medic…
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@denali-christianson It’s ok! I didn’t do a really good job of describing him to begin with, plus it’s kind of hard to keep track of everyone cause there’s so many characters lol. And I’m also very interested to see his and Niarok’s interactions – Basil and Misu are both from a modern fantasy setting, so he and Niarok are used to very d…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Can I just say that you got Lorcan SO right just there?!🤩 yasssss him and Niarok are such a TEAM! Go us lolll😂
Lorcan
Lorcan was relieved that Qatar and Quin were unharmed. That didn’t take very long to find them. And they came with a batch of newcomers too. He inwardly sighed. It was a never ending cycle so it w…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
While the others were preoccupied with Nithel’s sudden reappearance, Brendin felt a sudden calm sweep over him. He looked down and realized with a start that he was fading, like Nithel and Jericho had. He wished to say goodbye, but he also didn’t want to interrupt the moment between Mayra and Alessio and Nithel…and he didn’t want to cause t…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
The sound of metal sliding into leather and footsteps appeared right behind me. I hadn’t heard them coming. I started and spun around, then hated myself for it. Why did I startle so easily, it was ridiculous.
My gaze flicked to the weapon first, then I barely managed to hold back a sigh of relief as I saw he was putting the sword back, not taking…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
In that case, he’ll get along well with Basil! Niarok and Yila are siblings, correct? They both sound pretty cool!
Misu:
“Who’s there?” Misu called back into the shadows behind them.
“I am,” a young man stepped forward and cleared his throat, his face partially obscured by his long, dark hair. Qatar shot a tired glance over at the strang…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Yayyy!!! Welcome back to the chaos!!
He dark blue eyes, and he’s insanely discerning. If someone is feeling something, Niarok will usually pick up on it and respond in kind.
Oh, man, I can tell! He got my character exactly right. I wonder how he’s going to respond now people actually aren’t as hostile as he expected…
On a s…
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Oh my word I’m so sorry! I prolly just missed that in your description. I’m sorry! I know how annoying it can be when other people write your characters wrong. I guess he and Niarok can have some interesting butting of heads…
On a side note, my pet frog may or may not be named Basil…
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Okayyy and now I’m going to write Yila…
Oops @calidris I forgot about Leytera: 5’3 (I think…) with black curly hair falling to her mid-back. Light brown eyes. She’s small-boned and looks fragile. She’s from a highly advanced technological society and carries about three small gadgets with her. She’s completely incompetent with any type of…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@denali-christianson I don’t think I mentioned this before, but Basil’s actually quite tall! He’s seen some stuff canonically at this point, so I can’t say that any of the castle’s recent events have been particularly surprising to him. His remark to Misu was just him being snotty and stating the obvious (although Misu is entirely unaware t…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Niarok is 6’1 (I think…) with shoulder length black hair he usually wears in a half ponytail. He’s very muscular and carries a sword and a bow with him at all times. He’s also a doctor so he’s always got about fifteen hundred different types of herbs on him. He dark blue eyes, and he’s insanely discerning. If someone is feeling…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
I’M BACKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m soooo sorry I haven’t been on in an eternity…
Niarok
Niarok’s hand immediately went to his sword as a huge bat dragon hybrid thing rose out of the floor.
At least Lorcan had given him warning.
“Finally. Things are becoming interesting again,” t…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Yours.
Ohohoho, this is going to be cool!!
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I was internally screaming but that was barely unusual.
Don’t let them see you don’t move don’t breathe, preferably don’t exist. If they saw me I was going to be in trouble, I shouldn’t be here and I had no valid excuse for why I was.
If I told them they would think I was lying…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Yours. 🙂 🙂
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
In fact, this whole place is positively miserable. And how am I supposed to find food here? If I can’t find food, I’ll starve, and in that case I would have to eat a bat to survive. And that is disgusting.
Basil sniffed. “You’re glowing.”
Basil is a big mood and I love him XD
you know…I’m not even going to question that one
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Quin
There was a jolt that sent pain shivering all over his body. Quin didn’t open his eyes. Everything hurt. For a minute he thought he was in another nightmare.
He sniffed, half expecting the smell of fire, or the sweaty heat of horses. All he smelled was blood.
So it is a dream.
He stayed perfectly still; if he didn’t move, nothing would…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy you know…I’m not even going to question that one
Sounds good! I’ll probably drop him in with Misu and Qatar as well. He’s from the same setting as Misu, but I don’t think they’ve officially met. This is going to be interesting!
Also, I read your guy’s entry…never thought I would see a Kongar reference in the Ch…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Nithel’s eyes softened to the gentle reassuring light that dissipated so much anxiety Alessio could’ve died. A small, hopeful smile flickered across his face. He had so much he wanted to say so much he wanted to ask but he was just so happy his friend was here. Which was probably a selfish thought…
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
He looked well? He chose not to debate that.
“Mayra…” Nithel repeated slowly, looking down, but also at her face. It was hurting her, his lack of remembrance. If it meant anything, the name was beautiful. “Your name is lovely.” … “And I’m sorry.”
He glanced at Alessio, wondering if he was the youth he had at the back of his memory. Wondering…[Read more]
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