Story_Guardian

(Continued)

Perhaps she was from the desert region, or perhaps the far corners of the Kemet. Trying the formal greeting of the desert, I held my hands at the waist a shoulder-length apart, bent my wrists down, fingers spread, palms up, then brought them up till they were parallel with the top of my shoulders.

“Forgive me.”

She took a few more…[Read more]

I don’t know what it is censoring… so, forgive the annoyance, but I’ll try posting it in sections…

Abirami

Turning around, I stood to find a well-endowed, young, blond faehin standing before me. Her right eyebrow was slightly raised, and her lips were as straight as a whip. Her expression reminded me of Yaxkin’s resting face… the…[Read more]

Somethings wrong. It keeps blocking me when I try to post it… something about WordPress?

@jared-williams

Figure one short one might be okay here? … Hope I can borrow Enydd for this scene… Can you borrow other people’s characters for conversations? hope I do her character justice… please let me know if I do something wrong.

You’re welcome to borrow Enydd! I’d love to see your take on her!

Hahaha.

@rose-colored-fancy

your  character’s cynicism is great! I don’t think I’ve ever laughed at dry negativism before. Quite excellently written. lol.

Is it okay to borrow other characters when it comes to conversations? I’m wondering if I should respond, since the scene’s halted with us facing each other…. or wait for others to join in?…[Read more]

Mejt

The girl didn’t reply, but she seemed to be trying to say something.

“Not–my–name. My–name–is–Isella–Christine–Aumardel.”

I scowled. With a name like that, she was definitely nobility. Why had she told me?

Suddenly, the realization dawned on me and I snorted a laugh.

“I didn’t mean– Delya means–” I fumbled for a synonym in the sa…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

@jared-williams

@calidris ‘ other character is called Saskia! She’s also a genetically enhanced supersoldier, though not as much altered as Basil. Skia is 5’3″, with brown skin and chin-length curly black hair, and dark eyes.

Also, one correction, Basil isn’t germophobic, though he came across that way at the beginning XD He’s…[Read more]

K’Nika nodded. “Plenty.”

(lol well Pias was more like a leather pouch on her belt XD)

“Hey, cool!” Julian smiled

“K’Nika, is there any fish in this river?” He asked

(Fair enough XD it’s awesome that these bags that suddenly appeared just so happened to have everything we need in them when we need it)

@emily-waldorf

ooh you were so close XD so Lorcan actually has short wavyish black hair heehee, and its sort of an undercut style. He also has gorgeous dark eyes that reminds you of a starry night when you look at them😊 I think i posted a drawing of him somewhere, ill see if I can find it XD

As for Daire, he has ginger hair tied in a very short…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thanks Brian! Your encouragement means a lot.  It honestly has been painfully slow as I have slowly worked up to the 3rd chapter of my 1st book! It has been honestly been depressing trying to keep at it above exhaustion from work. But I working at being more passionate and consistent with my writing.

I am honestly…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

oh, that’s awesome. Thank you so much! That’s helpful. So… lol. Klein… is his weapon a gun? he coulda shot me out of the sky or shot me before I got close. … eek. lol. oh well, hope what I’ve written works…

SE isn’t behaving, so the above post looks a little odd. Sorry about that.

@jared-williams

Mr.Trip Williams wrote:
That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.
I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!

Mr.Trip Willi…[Read more]

@jared-williams

I’m glad! This ought to be interesting!

They were in the castle before I was, so I don’t know. But I’ll give you the lowdown of all the characters, and the authors can help clarify/correct what I say as they choose

<span style=”text-decoration: underline;”>Currently Active Characters:</span>

Isella–my own; you know…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

That was awesome… as long as I attacked after I warned them, then it would be within character, I think. He assumes they are under the command of an evil emperor, so if they didn’t take to his warning and approached with raised weapons, he’d attack.

What page are Klein and Lorcan’s descriptions… I would love to know who is…[Read more]

@jared-williams

(huff… perhaps it was the urls… is there a limit to one url per post or something?)

Yep, there is, I forgot to mention that 😅

Oops… didn’t realize should only have one character in at a time… hehe. Let me fix that.

You can have two in at a time! Though, some people have had three in at a time for short periods of time. The rules…[Read more]

Isella

There was a roar that sent new thunderings through her brain. She blinked long. the water had helped, and so had the sleep, but she still felt weak and a little ill, and she was cold.

She looked in the direction of the noise.

There were two figures about as small as a child, and one the size of a man, but they looked nothing like the…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

thank you so much for reading! It’s a complex and delicate subject. Slavery and war are both very controversial topics. The question of guilt or innocence is also a difficult one (ultimately, only the Lord can determine true innocence) and I think this situation blurs the line between innocent and guilty in a stark…[Read more]

“Just…need air…” Alessio whispered, wilting again.

Nithel’s jaw set, and he nodded. He put his arm around Alessio, under the youth’s arms. He stared at the lowered head, the pain aching in this youth. He had to resist the urge to kiss him, and looked around the room. It would probably be easier to put Alessio over his back, but it would probabl…[Read more]