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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Well…it’s Saevus. How else is he gonna respond to this? He certainly won’t sit there and act like nothing happened.
And yes, I’m gonna let everyone else go first because he…he’s Saevus.
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I really appreciate that! Violence isn’t *as* big of an issue for me personally, but it’s still really nice to be prepared in advance XD
Lol I guess Saevus is going to Saevus XD Sounds good, but just make sure everyone else has a chance to write their’s beforehand!
Out of context this just sounds so…cursed and chaotic
Which it kind o…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I will agree. Warnings or a buildup are a good idea. I’ll admit that when I was reading that I was kinda like, where on earth is this going…?Also, I’ll give a warning right now-when Saevus’ biggest regret comes in, it’ll be in the middle of a battle, and a sword battle at…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I didn’t mention it, but that’s a huge part of it too. Even if a girl hasn’t experienced that specific kind of trauma, she’s almost certainly experienced some degree of sexual harassment or objectification. This isn’t to say that guys aren’t abused too, but I’m almost 100% certain that in general it’s not this ingrained fear or concern like i…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
After thinking over and rereading it, I think…it was really powerful. I was trying to figure out why this particular post instantly struck all of us as needing a content warning when I read a couple other posts that went on those same subjects heck I’ve written some of them! I think…1. The group, it’s pretty large and harder to gauge…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Huh…I thought it was just because I trigger really easily, but…yeah, we’ve all been harassed in various ways before I write about it very graphically in my own stories as I guess some sort of exposure therapy.
I did read to the end and I didn’t even cry but I’ve been numbing since last week or so.
Actually, a lot of guys think this is really…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey y’all, I live!! Like, mostly XD Everything is okay, but I still don’t feel great so I’m just popping in really quick. I’ll try to make a comeback next week if possible. I really don’t want to miss the greatest regrets thingy, it looks fun!
Thanks for the prayers, I really appreciate that!
I just want to back up @calidris ‘…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@jared-williams hey so, I just wanted to let you know that your post with Ku was really good, but it was really upsetting tbh. It was really well written, but I think that the fact that it was well written made it that much more real and disturbing. I’m not saying this to criticise you or make you feel guilty in any way, but I felt like I s…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
(now im interested….). so…….. what parts made you laugh? ? ?
Hanniumm wearing a frilly nightgown, the scene where Aefflaed finds out they’ll be riding a bear, the diamond poop😂. I think there may be a few others, but they don’t want to be remembered right now, lol.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
(in case Abirami’s images/video thing was confusing… he used some dangerous pills that boosted his essence to (1) break out of prison after being beaten/tortured (2) used another pill to fight off an army attempting to attack him and his family and then (3) used yet another pill to escape from the emperor’s clutches which is why they were…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Abirami
As I watched the screen, a strange sensation came over me, and my mind was transported into the time and place on the screen. My senses, my mind reliving all that had transpired.
Just as it closed around me, I prayed, Oh good and gracious Maker, please tell me Ku didn’t experience all that again! Not like this….
Not really wanting to…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
😂 let’s just say we don’t know if his clothes changed… since the armor is technically over his clothes. lol. IDK… he’s technically already in a fully body suit… so…. 😂 I’ll leave that decision to Saevus’ author…..
oh, yeah. though… I haven’t watch all of it yet… I really like how they put that together. Have you heard of…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
😂 let’s just say we don’t know if his clothes changed… since the armor is technically over his clothes. lol. IDK… he’s technically already in a fully body suit… so…. 😂 I’ll leave that decision to Saevus’ author…..
oh, yeah. though… I haven’t watch all of it yet… I really like how they put that together. Have you heard of…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
aw, thank you!!!!
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(now im interested….). so…….. what parts made you laugh? ? ?
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
(I’m going to change Yarrow’s to third person)
Yarrow
Yarrow sat back down to watch the dance before he ventured to talk to anyone.
That’s when he noticed the young woman seated beside him. Their gazes met and the woman jumped slightly.
“Oh, my word!” She exclaimed. “I’m going to have heart attack sooner or later.”
“I’m sorry, did I surpri…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
perfectly okay!!! the more eyes on it, the better!!!! (I really REALLY hope to get it traditionally published once I tweak a few things…..
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I’ll just say I’m gonna wait for someone else to make the first move lol
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
No. He stayed in his armor. I don’t even know what he looks like without it lol
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
That night was cold. It was bitter. He saw no reason for it to be different from the other missions. But his life was changed forever that night.
“Hades, over here.”
He obeyed, approaching the commanding officer.
“When the mission is over, eliminate Dr. Carter and Special Operative Timur.”
Hades immediately knew something was wrong. “Wh…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Nice! Kit and Basil (one of my former castle occupants) were both inspired by characters from my favorite anime/manga XD
I’ve actually never watched an Isekai anime before…
You mean the worst regrets thing? I have a character I’m going to introduce at the very end, so is it ok if Seavus holds off until then?
I’m going to use the worst r…[Read more]
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