Rebekah12

@rebekah12

I’m fine either way, but maybe having Harry, Ron, Kalmar and Rex filled in later might be better, just because I’m not sure when they will get back. Or you could write them coming back. I don’t really know where I was going with sending them off, anyhow…

@rebekah12

Yep, that’s all right with me.

@rebekah12

Sorry!! I was the last one to write a section before you, so I thought I’d let someone else go, so it sort of cycled evenly between us?? Anyway, I can get something up first thing tomorrow if no one else needs to…

@skylarynn & @rebekah12,

Critique coming later!

@jasmine,

Haha, that’s great!!

@rebekah12,

No worries!

@rebekah12

Well…

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Startled, Nadia only barely caught Ada’s arm as the girl tried to flee to the gate. The gypsy cast a glance back at the wyvern. It was rearing, flailing its rugged wings in an attempt to keep its balance. She could see now the lance protruding from its arching neck and the black blood flowing down the haft. Something pan…[Read more]

Thanks @rebekah12 glad it helped

Woohoo! The story is going again! Thanks @rebekah12!

@Everyone

I just discovered recently that there is an actual person named Farley other than the character I created, when I named my character I wasn’t trying to name her off of another person XD

@mischievousthwapling, HIIIITHANKSLOVEYOU!!!! *bowls over with hug*

Me *catching up with everybody’s posts in one day despite my common sense* *me reaching @melancholicwriter’s expecting luxurious prose with a hint at upcoming action*

*me chokes on the Algebra I was supposed to be doing! (still made an A btw*is super smug about that XD*)* Wow…[Read more]

@rebekah12

Ok thanks

@rebekah12 Thanks, not all of what I’m allowing to occur in Esthelle’s story will come from the book of Esther, however notable things from the Bible story do happen along with a lot of other stuff. 😉

@rebekah12 @emma-walker @skylarynn @anyone-else-who-posted-a-story-and-I-accidentatlly-missed it:

To kinda echo what Joelle said earlier: How detailed of a critique do y’all want? Like.. concept? Or more of a grammatical/line-by-line type thingy?

@rebekah12,

First off, that is SO intriguing!! I can totally envision the slick deck and pelting rain. Your descriptions are vibrant and your dialogue realistic. But before I go rattling off, how detailed of a critique would you like?

@skylarynn,

Concerning description and stuff, your revised version was much better!

 Nadia sat relaxed on the…

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So, last time I did one of these, I got completely overwhelemed trying to critique everyone’s stories. So this go-round, if y’all are okay with it, I’ll just pick two or three to follow so that I can critique those as well as I can instead of giving you hasty and probably inaccurate ideas. Sorry if that hurts someone’s feelings. :/ I think I’m…[Read more]

@rebekah12,

Yurp, works for me!

@joelle-stone

Happy (late, very late) Easter!!!

@rebekah12 @birds-rock @ivi-hope and Joelle:

Do we still need this, since we’re moving to a different doc instead? (That is the plan, right???)

@rebekah12 @emma-walker

Nice to have you join us!! (Rebekah, chapter 57??!! *grins at you* W.O.W) I’ll try to critique in a bit (perhaps today or on Tuesday). And @skylarynn, yay, nice! I love how nicely you incorporated the critiques from earlier. *nods* I really like it and the new bit you posted! (As I said, I’ll try to critique later 🙂 )

@rebekah12

Since you asked politely:

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As was her nature Ada first jumped at the call and whipped around, looking every which way. Her blue eyes were wide and startled at the sudden noise. Nadia turned slowly to look up the steep cobbled street that ran winding along the river, her brow creased slightly in confusion. Her lips were still…[Read more]

Thanks, @rebekah12

I may continue and post more of it later…. hmm

@rebekah12

Thank you.

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