Story Embers | RAE | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/rae/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning RAE. Thu, 30 Apr 2026 03:24:32 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 4550d2e4711d16be2b1b160a770b8dbd Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105066/ Wed, 06 Sep 2023 19:54:06 -0400 @calidris

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]]> 1 3d681ebf243595073b9c0941b16ea729 R.M. Archer posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104976/#acomment-105004 Mon, 21 Aug 2023 16:46:16 -0400 @rae
Could you email me a link to the chapters you have, if it’s in Google Docs, or email me a file if it’s not? I have some thoughts based on your description, but I’d like to read what’s actually been written before I jump to anything and I’d like to be able to send you direct broad-scale feedback. If that works for you, my email is…[Read more]

In reply to - RAE posted an update @r-m-archer I know this is sudden, but since you have published and you write in two genres I like, would you like to be on my Google Docs fo my book? I like to have people older than me, who […] ]]> 28c0d6ca745eba56106e0edea642c9d9 R.M. Archer replied to the topic Publishing questions in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104975/ Tue, 15 Aug 2023 14:58:50 -0400 @rae

Your dedication and your desire to dive right in remind me of myself at your age. I didn’t successfully publish until I was 15 (which was still too early), but I knew what I wanted to do and I did it. And I get the impression you could readily do the same thing.

But since I have been there, I have some words of caution. Well, the first is…[Read more]

]]> 0 9c7d71b09cc43f40e8b1f0cc2ef8c3c8 Abrielle posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104959/#acomment-104967 Sun, 13 Aug 2023 19:01:07 -0400 @rae
No problem! I took english 101 last year, and while it was boring in the extreme, hey! I kind of understand sentences better now!

In reply to - RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers So…I need someone who is crazy about correcting grammar, as in typos, sentences that are not structured right, inconsistencies in spelling and capitalization, wrong […] ]]> 55037855857bd29d4a35de3939a06e62 Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104906/ Wed, 19 Jul 2023 23:37:49 -0400 @rae

Clown? Court Jester? Some other kind of tradesmen that Igua regards as utterly useless? Merman? Bear? 🙃🤷‍♀️

]]> 0 46e09aa06b87ce45e7575e306fb61080 Olivia (Livi Ryddle) replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104904/ Wed, 19 Jul 2023 20:15:22 -0400 @rae Hi, Ru!

Your brother sounds awesome already haha! I haven’t heard of Petra but I’m going to go look them up right now!

There’s not much of a story behind it, actually – I just saw it somewhere and really loved it. I like the imagery of life throwing something wacky at you that you don’t realize what it is at first, and then you take it and…[Read more]

]]> 1 c8adc2846fab1e6f49b3e5a61752779a Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104897/ Tue, 18 Jul 2023 14:55:11 -0400 @rae
Basically, Lord Castle booms the ultimatum (give up your most prized possession or participate in the fashion show) so that Igua has a vague idea of what’s going on. Assuming he participates, you need to come up with something hilarious for him to wear. He must then go down the catwalk (whether he does that willingly or under Lord C…[Read more]

]]> 1 501ac70e1d82ad2dea1ea133f7de4aed Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104869/ Tue, 11 Jul 2023 00:38:05 -0400 @inkhorn

That would do it! Are y’all moving, like, across the country, or are you staying in the area? Are you excited about it? I hope that goes smoothly for you!

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Welcome to the character castle! Igua must now either give up his most prized possession or take part in the fashion show. After which, Rhianna is trying to run a rebellion…[Read more]

]]> 0 2febe0b3944d26cbd70e513da3b0fcee Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104863/ Mon, 10 Jul 2023 14:06:18 -0400 @abrielle

My family is moving this summer, which proves to always be a major upset to my schedule. 😅

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Welcome back!

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The worldbuilding you’ve done is quite interesting, especially concerning the shapeshifting metal aliens. You’re welcome to drop Igua Cloak (I keep wanting to add “na” to the end of his first name) into the…[Read more]

]]> 1 a6ef6e3e1c9a9c1e0b214e7121323da9 Abrielle posted an update: @rae Hi! I've finished what you've written so far, and […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104856/ Sat, 08 Jul 2023 00:28:44 -0400 @rae
Hi! I’ve finished what you’ve written so far, and it’s pretty good! It certainly doesn’t drag, which is great. I think the biggest thing I have is that you tend to be a little wordy. Particularly with trying to throw too much information into one sentence (totally understandable, it’s really hard not to when you’re trying to introduce…[Read more]

]]> 3 54a81fd96f78c481d681bf4b5bccea40 Abrielle replied to the topic Hello. in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104764/ Thu, 22 Jun 2023 12:48:05 -0400 @RAE

Hullo Ru! Kudos on finishing your first draft of a story! I didn’t do that until just last year. How’s revision going? I probably ought to be revising, but I don’t really know where to start. I’m just so fond of the first draft, you see, despite it’s glaring problems.

Do you enjoy reading? Ah, I just found your profile page. I highly…[Read more]

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