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@morreafirebird I just finished and I’ll be honest… it’s pretty okay, in my opinion. It’s 842 words, and kinda amusing if you squint and tilt your head sideways. I think it could be a lot better, but I don’t think I can be the one to make it the lot better unless I get an unexpected stroke of inspiration or other people start working on it and I start bouncing off of them.

That said, I don’t want to take it out of the war. I don’t expect to win with it as is, but I don’t want to give up when we have a submission.

If people are looking at it, here are some thing I think need to be done;

1. More hilariousness. LOTS MORE! I know we have funny people in our guild. (I have a running thing with eyebrows and and some references to Italian pasta, but that is it.)
2. A better ending. Seriously. Mine stinks.
   1. @seekjustice I saw your post and while I really liked your idea I couldn’t figure out how to transition to that from where I already ended.
3. More obstacles

If anyone was wondering, Blue-eyebrows’s real name is Darcy, Disguised-eyebrows name is Max, and Nice-eyebrows name is Alex.

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