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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic A Difficult Ethical Question in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/82084/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2020 02:05:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are just my thoughts, take them if they&#8217;re helpful.</p>
<p>In this situation, I don&#8217;t think suicide really &#8220;atones&#8221; for anything. Not the way she might think, not when you break it down. If she does kill herself, the only thing it&#8217;s doing is erasing the possibility of her hurting anyone else. But it doesn&#8217;t change or &#8220;make up for&#8221; anything she&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-82084"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/82084/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic I Made a Writing Rank Quiz! in the forum Writing Level &#038; Journey Plans Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 May 2020 15:11:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I got Apprentice Writer, which I find kinda funny because I got one of the higher scores possible from the SE quiz. Realistically I&#8217;m probably somewhere in between.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 May 2020 14:58:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thaddeus glanced back, thinking he heard something in the woods behind him. His hand reached for his dagger before remembering he had left it behind. If this was a trap&#8230;</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 24 Apr 2020 15:44:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whoops sorry. Life got away from me. I&#8217;m good with starting again. <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/esther-sears/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-sears</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2020 15:58:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a></p>
<p>It&#8217;s up to you. I&#8217;m okay with it either way. 🙂</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 10 Apr 2020 15:52:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a></p>
<p>Hey, sorry. I keep getting distracted by life. I&#8217;m here.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Anyone want to chat since the world is basically ending in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76488/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:15:19 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since I ended up with the week off from work I&#8217;ve been gutting my room and working on rearranging the furniture. Haven&#8217;t written in a week, which is as long as it&#8217;s been since I&#8217;ve been to work. Since my boss allows me to write during times at work when I&#8217;m just waiting for my next assignment, I&#8217;ve gotten into the unfortunate habit of not writing&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76488"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76488/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi =) in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76487/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:10:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/katthewriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@katthewriter</a> Maybe a couple. Depends on the definition of &#8220;cute&#8221; 😛</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Let&#039;s talk about representation! in the forum Characters</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76486/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:08:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/phoenix/' rel="nofollow ugc">@phoenix</a> Ah, that makes sense. I tend to automatically recoil a little when someone mentions characters with depression, just because it does seem so romanticized in popular fiction now, which hurts the issue. But portraying it well could be helpful, if it was done right.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sarah-inkdragon/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sarah-inkdragon</a> Jumping off what you said about depressed love interests,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76486"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76486/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi :) in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76484/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:04:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/katthewriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@katthewriter</a> Thanks! It&#8217;s a complicated mess to write for a lot of reasons, but hopefully maybe by draft 25 it&#8217;ll make sense. 😛</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic I drastically need help actually writing in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76483/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2020 18:02:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/phoenix/' rel="nofollow ugc">@phoenix</a> I think we live in an achievement oriented culture as it is, and that doesn&#8217;t help with anything, but especially things like writing. I hope you find something that works for you.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic I drastically need help actually writing in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76070/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:31:27 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How long have you been dealing with this? What the others said is definitely good advice, but honestly, sometimes your brain just might need a break. It&#8217;s okay to give yourself a week of no writing at all, don&#8217;t even think about it. Then come back after the week, and work on the habits and such that the others mentioned.</p>
<p>And no matter what,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76070"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76070/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Need Help Coming Up With Titles? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76069/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:27:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All of my stories pretty much go for years without titles&#8230; What kind of information do you want/need?</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Let&#039;s talk about representation! in the forum Characters</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:25:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t have much to add, beyond what others have already said. Pretty much everything already mentioned are all things I wouldn&#8217;t mind seeing more of.</p>
<p>The only one I can think of on top of that is characters in wheelchairs. I&#8217;ve ended up with two paraplegic characters so far, just from having a random idea of &#8220;I want to see an x style story with&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76068"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76068/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76067/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:13:54 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/the-inkspiller/' rel="nofollow ugc">@the-inkspiller</a></p>
<p>Thanks for the link! I&#8217;ll have to read a story or two sometime.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/vivian-grant/' rel="nofollow ugc">@vivian-grant</a></p>
<p>I have not actually written anything I&#8217;d call horror yet, although I have some ideas. I could see how that&#8217;d be difficult though. I think with other stories I&#8217;ve gotten the advice of focusing more on what the characters are feeling, rather than what&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-76067"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/76067/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Anyone here 16+? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75288/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2020 17:06:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m 22, so. Hello.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Favorite Fantasy Christian book? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2020 17:04:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Only one I can think of that hasn&#8217;t been mentioned yet is <em>The King Sword</em> by Micah Cooley. It&#8217;s one of the only &#8220;Christian&#8221; fantasy I&#8217;ve enjoyed.</p>
<p>I also really liked <em>Broken Arrow</em> by Azaria Durant. It&#8217;s not explicitly christian, but I know the author is, so for whatever that&#8217;s worth.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>If you read the Circle (trilogy) Series, do not read <em>Green</em>. J&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-75287"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75287/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi :) in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2020 16:59:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/katthewriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@katthewriter</a></p>
<p>Those all sound really neat.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m trying to figure out how to describe it. XD It&#8217;s basically a sort of &#8220;life is worth living/anti suicide&#8221; message with a road trip aesthetic. If that makes any sense.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2020 16:57:27 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sam-m/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sam-m</a></p>
<p>I actually haven&#8217;t read much horror either, besides classic horror. <em>Frankenstein</em> and <em>Dracula</em> are both good, and there&#8217;s a super short second vampire novel called <em>Carmilla</em> that was interesting. I think the only modern horror I&#8217;ve read was a book called <em>Prodigal Son</em> which is part of a Frankenstein retelling series sort of thing by a guy&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-75285"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/75285/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2020 16:49:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thaddeus blinked. &#8220;Okay then.&#8221;</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic How do YOU begin a fantasy story? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 18:16:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Stories almost always start with the characters for me. Though I do have a couple that deviate.</p>
<p>My current fantasy project came as a scene randomly popped into my head. From there I had to figure out who those people were, what they were doing, and what was even going on.</p>
<p>I do have one story idea that came as the idea &#8220;this story, set in this&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-74445"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/74445/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 18:07:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I used them heavily in my story, but I structured the story so it was expected. Each chapter began with a flashback of some sort that related in some way to what would happen in the upcoming chapter. None of the people who read the first draft for me had any complaints about it, and I have seen published novels use a similar structure. If it&#8217;s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-74444"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/74142/#acomment-74444" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<a href="https://storyembers.org/members/caffeinated_hipster0218/" rel="nofollow ugc">caffeinated_hipster0218</a> posted an update in the group <a href="https://storyembers.org/groups/mystery-suspense-thriller-writers/" rel="nofollow ugc">Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers</a> What are your thoughts on the use of flashbacks to provide important information? Should they be avoided at all costs? Or can [&hellip;]			]]></content:encoded>
				
				
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 18:03:59 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/esther-sears/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-sears</a></p>
<p>&#8220;Hello.&#8221; Thaddeus said.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Naming Conventions in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 18:03:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-m-archer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-m-archer</a></p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Depicting God in Fantasy in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 18:02:04 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/deeprun/' rel="nofollow ugc">@deeprun</a></p>
<p>That is interesting. It&#8217;s neat how different stories can come across to different people.</p>
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<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/michael-erasmus/' rel="nofollow ugc">@michael-erasmus</a></p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know if I have much to say about what you wrote (brain isn&#8217;t working right now) but it does sound really neat, and from what you described of your story world it sounds similar to a story world I have that I&#8217;m including&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-74441"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/74441/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi :) in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Feb 2020 17:58:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/katthewriter/' rel="nofollow ugc">@katthewriter</a></p>
<p>Those sound neat! What&#8217;s the premise of them?</p>
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				<title>PenSword started the topic Greetings Other Humans (I think) in the forum Horror writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 22:20:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Someone&#8217;s gotta start something. Anyone here have a horror story they&#8217;re currently writing? Or an idea that&#8217;s saved for later?</p>
<p>Any good horror books you&#8217;d suggest? I read several Ted Dekkers a while ago, but he managed to alienate me enough that I&#8217;m leery to read anything else by him.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi :) in the forum Contemporary Fiction Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 22:16:45 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello. I&#8217;m late to the party, as always.</p>
<p>I have one contemporary story that I&#8217;m playing around with. It&#8217;s a road trip story, which I have no idea how to write and that&#8217;s making it hard. I think I also backed myself into a corner with my last couple of chapters that I can&#8217;t get out of without deleting them, and the character they introduced. Which&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73965"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73965/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Naming Conventions in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 22:11:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One people group in my novel use a Russian inspired family name system, where the children get a patronymic, except in my world it would be a matronymic. And the matronymic comes before their given name, then their family name. So Ingvar&#8217;s daughter&#8217;s first name is Ingvariyna but she&#8217;s known as Eirwen. Still working out the masculine versions of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73964"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73964/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Depicting God in Fantasy in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:59:55 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It depends on the set up of the world for me, I think. If it&#8217;s set up like a &#8220;lost country&#8221; or something that could have existed, and the world behaves the same way any other story on our world would behave, it&#8217;s not out of place to portray God as you would in a his fic.</p>
<p>When there&#8217;s any kind of magic though, that&#8217;s when things get iffy for me.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73963"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73963/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Fantasy Types in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:55:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/naiya-dyani/' rel="nofollow ugc">@naiya-dyani</a> Without knowing anything more, yours is probably considered &#8220;low fantasy.&#8221; That&#8217;s what I think mine is anyway.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Fantasy Magic? in the forum Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:51:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t use magic in my own stories just because of personal preference (and laziness) but I don&#8217;t have a problem with most story magic. There have been a few that have made me feel uncomfortable, and some of them are viewed as &#8220;great Christian works&#8221; so maybe I&#8217;m just weird, but for the most part &#8220;fantasy magic&#8221; or like other people have been&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-73961"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73961/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Hi =) in the forum Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:47:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello. *wave*</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Guess I&#039;ll break the ice … in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:46:13 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Two is hard. I always say that my mystery WIP is most like <em>The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo</em> (NOT an endorsement), but a combination, hm. Probably the above with a dash of Jack Reacher.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Any Fellow &quot;Sherlock Holmes&quot; Fans Out There? *raises hand* in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:41:54 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve read the entire series of books/short stories at least once. Some stories I&#8217;ve read multiple times. I&#8217;ve also enjoyed several of the old Basil Rathbone/Nigel Bruce movies, and I&#8217;m a fan of the show. I haven&#8217;t seen the RDJ movies though.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Feb 2020 21:39:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/esther-sears/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-sears</a></p>
<p>Thaddeus knocked loudly.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/73207/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Feb 2020 19:46:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thaddeus noticed the cabin and paused, watching it for a moment. It looked like someone was home. He walked over and stepped up the porch. If the people weren&#8217;t nice, then at least Philip should be close behind him. It was an adventure.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72493/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 30 Jan 2020 03:49:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Alright.</p>
<p>**</p>
<p>Thaddeus glanced around the forest. He wasn&#8217;t scared. Although it would have been nice to know where he was&#8230; And how to get back&#8230;</p>
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				<title>PenSword joined the group Fantasy Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:30:25 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>PenSword joined the group Sci-fi Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:30:23 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>PenSword joined the group Contemporary Fiction Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:30:22 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>PenSword joined the group Horror Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:30:17 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>PenSword joined the group Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:30:11 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72365/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 29 Jan 2020 01:29:48 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/esther-sears/' rel="nofollow ugc">@esther-sears</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/dakota/' rel="nofollow ugc">@dakota</a> Thanks!</p>
<p>He can be lost or hurt, whichever works best.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 24 Jan 2020 06:05:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Do I need to introduce mine?</p>
<p>Thaddeus (last name currently went missing): 16, average height, thin, sandy hair he likes to flop over his eyes, introduces himself Philip to annoy his cousin, enjoys falconry. I don&#8217;t think I have much else on him.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jan 2020 19:28:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can have a character who&#8217;s hurt or not, I don&#8217;t mind either way. I&#8217;ll probably use a character who&#8217;s sort of a brat, unless anyone else has a problem with that.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 15 Jan 2020 23:08:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;d be willing to try and help, if you don&#8217;t mind I probably will only get on every couple days or so.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic What&#039;s Up In Your Life? in the forum Meraki Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/71651/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 15 Jan 2020 23:02:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, so I died.</p>
<p>Christmas was Christmas. -shrug-</p>
<p>Glad to hear that you&#8217;re safe from the fires so far! I&#8217;ll be praying.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic NaNoWriMo 2019 in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68656/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Nov 2019 02:12:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Apparently I fell off the face of the earth.</p>
<p>I did end up committing to doing NaNo this year. Very frustrated with the site updates that are making it almost impossible for me to use properly, especially in the realm of buddies, but I&#8217;ll get over it.</p>
<p>So far I have about 30k words.</p>
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				<title>PenSword replied to the topic Mental Illness/Disorders In Christian Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/65561/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 21 Sep 2019 16:22:46 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*pokes in* So yeah, I&#8217;ve been fascinated with mental illness and health and all the facets of it for a while, so this discussion is pretty neat. I&#8217;ve read the thoughts on depression etc., and I have been diagnosed with a low grade depression myself (I&#8217;m not on medication or anything for it, though I got close once). If anyone wants to know about&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-65561"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/65561/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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