Rachel

Awesome work you guys! 🙂 despite the fact this was my second time reading the story it nearly made me cry.

@noahlitle Thought provoking video! I need to watch it again to fully grasp it.

Keep up the awesome work guys! 🙂

@corissa keep us posted, you, the Good News Club, and the rest of your school are all in our prayers. 🙂 Praying that the Holy Spirit will prepare thier hearts. And praying that your finals week goes well to.

Nice work guys! 🙂 Read the rough draft and loved it.

@noahlitle Love the idea! Continue writing! The song Misty is perfect, although I’m curious about the 2nd one and plan to listen to that as well. But personally I’m really sold on the Misty. 🙂

Wow, awesome ideas everybody! 🙂

@noahlitle

Congratulations on naming your cities. 🙂 Cool names!

@noahlitle

Wow, thanks for sharing that video, as someone who can get too caught up in research instead of actually writing, I felt like I needed to hear that. I suppose that is part of how I get in the way of inspiration. Often it’s all research for the writing project I am working on, but sometimes I spend time doing more research when I really…[Read more]

@daeus-lamb

You’re right that so often what pulls most of us into a story is the sense of wonder it gives us. Loved reading your thoughts on Tolkien’s Unfinished Tales.

I think part of a book’s charm is how well it’s written, and how well it speaks. I believe Tolkien spent years creating his world and writing the stories themselves, but Lord of…[Read more]

@eden-anderson

Well it’s harder for me to measure how I did since I’m not counting words, I haven’t reached my goal of my story being ready yet. But I did fill in the plot holes, and fix up two scenes. I improved on my theme, added another scene,  and did more research on the rules of writing thanks to a certain someone. All this sounds like a…[Read more]

@eden-anderson

Yay! Another war! 🙂 Thanks for tagging me again Eden. Last week, I got further toward my goal of finishing editing, but not close enough. Must work harder this week!

@bama-rose

Congrats on writing the most words last week! 🙂 Way to go!

@r-m-archer

Wow!  I read both the articles just now, and they are definitely helpful!  I haven’t read any of those books yet, but I will be looking into them. 🙂  This is awesome, thank you so much!

@r-m-archer

Thank you, as you can see that sort of proof reading is not my strong suit. 🙂  And I’m definitely going to keep this all in mind before I publish or republish anything else. I tend to focus more on the story than the format in which it is presented because for some reason most of this stuff I haven’t heard of before. I read your…[Read more]

@r-m-archer
Wow! Okay that was a well thought out answer. I see your point and I will be looking into how to fix these issues in the rewrite. Thank you for pointing those out! No one had brought those points up before, so I really appreciate it. 🙂

So much to do now. But before I start really planning how to fix all this, I wanted to ask if you…[Read more]

@eden-anderson @corissa @r-m-archer @bama-rose @chalice

I smile.
“Welcome back Eden. Well to answer your question, what do people want to talk about? What we girls want to talk about?”

@r-m-archer

Wow, that’s a lot to think of.  First of all, thank you so much for reading my book, I really appreciate that. 🙂 Second, no it doesn’t come off as judgmental or anything, I’m aware that I need all the feedback I can get, and I’m grateful for all of it. Each bit of feedback helps me become a better writer. After reading your list…[Read more]

@corissa

Caught off guard, my heart beating a bit faster than usual, but I knew it would return to normal in a minute. I smile at the newcomer. “No, not too frightened. Reminded me of a little brother for a moment, he had a tendency to spring up from unexpected places to. Good to see you, Corissa.”

@r-m-archer
Stories needing to simmer was something I had experienced as well. Briefly I wondered how long a good story needed to simmer. Some of my stories had been simmering for the past five years. Possibly longer.

“Ah I see. Yes, before this I designed my own covers, it’s pretty easy on Amazon. But not very impressive looking. However, one of…[Read more]

@r-m-archer
🙂 Yeah sure, go ahead. Wait, are you saying you read the story I posted on Amazon?!

@r-m-archer

Wow, a novel sounds like such a lofty goal! At least for someone like me that sticks to short stories. And the premise did not fail to be intriguing.

“Sounds like an awesome premise though, I like the sound of it already. I understand what it’s like when you’re at that point in the writing process. You know most of the events that…[Read more]