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Wow, that’s a lot to think of.  First of all, thank you so much for reading my book, I really appreciate that. 🙂 Second, no it doesn’t come off as judgmental or anything, I’m aware that I need all the feedback I can get, and I’m grateful for all of it. Each bit of feedback helps me become a better writer. After reading your list several times, I copied it onto a new document which I am going to be using for the rewrite of the story. You’ve just made me think, maybe I should rewrite it sooner than I had planned.

But I really should finish my current project first. But in interest of improving both stories I wanted to ask you a few questions. 🙂

Have you read any steampunk books that you can recommend to me? Due to time constraints, I haven’t been able to find any really good ones to study their world building. So I would be interested if you could recommend one to me. 🙂 That’s why their on a airship, that and so Beatrix can continue hiding from her problems.

And what sort of development did you feel should have happened between Beatrix and Hoffmann?

And between Beatrix and Helena? This is something none of my other readers brought up, so it seemed like a good thing to ask.

I’m really glad to hear you liked some of it, and that it doesn’t need a complete rewrite. 🙂 You didn’t happen to leave me a Amazon review did you? I have just one review per format, so I’m trying to get more reviews.