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Eden Anderson replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
I’m voting for @kate‘s version. 👍👍Β Jason is so hilarious! I feel like that would be me if I ever saw the ghost from a famous painting. Running around and jumping up and down and freaking out. 😀 And I really like the personality you gave Lisa.
But @literatureforthelight that part about wrapping up the guard in the toilet paper was just too…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight @kate Thanks for all your hard effort.
In my mind, it’s somewhat close, but Kate’s depiction of Jason puts me in favor of her production.
Grace though, you had such a perfect last line! π That was really good comedic technique.
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Eden Anderson replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
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Both you guys did an amazing job! 😀 I love comedy and both of them were awesome! I’ve never edited someone else’s work, so I don’t know how much of a help I’ll be with editing. 🙁
Are we supposed to vote on this thread or in google docs? Or somewhere else?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay guys! *flops down on the floor* It’s done. The current word count isΒ 2,736, so we do need to trim a little if we choose this one, but it’s basically down. π
I’m not sure what to think about it, honestly. Neither first person nor comedy are my strengths, so I’m not entirely sure how it turned out. Not to mention the last half hour I was…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Is the word limit 5,000? @literatureforthelight @daeus-lamb
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight hoping to get it finished up by tomorrow evening. π
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Disposition #2 in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey Guys,
I’m going to do a slightly more in-depth post about disposition for this week’s theme discussion topic. If you missed it, here’s my first post on disposition:Β https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/disposition/
This being a relatively new idea for me, I’m still learning about it and I did a lot of that learning over the past week. The…[Read more]
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Eden Anderson replied to the topic Hello…? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Your WIP sounds so interesting!!
About Ferdinand. I totally should come up with a story about him! Awesome suggestion. I need to think about that! 😀 Do you wanna help me write it? 😜
Yeah, I bite my nails all the time, so I wasn’t weirded out by your last sentence. Trust me, I can get really weird at times too. 😀
(We should…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight *nods* You do that. I may not be able to finish this afternoon— we’ll see.
Whichever one’s chosen, there will probably be elements from both we want to steal and combine. π
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
OOooh, I just skimmed it and it looks pretty fun! Tell you what. I’m going to go ahead and share the link to what I’ve done (I do have an ending planned out, but haven’t gotten to it yet) and we’ll see what we shall…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight *grins* well, looks like we’ll have two drafts to choose from. π I’ll keep up with mine, and though I haven’t read yours yet I’m sure it’s great, so you keep up, if you have the time. Sorry I didn’t get back to you immediately— I was in bed. XD
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Rachel replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
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Love what you have done with it, Grace! π Reading over your shoulder was a pleasure with that sort of amusing narration and the colorful characters. The Mona Lisa herself of course, feeling inconvenienced and yet resigned, and the fun security guard, I would love working with him, yes let’s go slay dragons together by all…[Read more] -
Daeus Lamb replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight @kate Oh, I was just about to post that we needed to get on this. π Thanks for taking the initiative in my place.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
The first thing anyone needs to know about being a ghost is that it makes getting a job incredibly difficult.
Add to that the fact that the job I wanted was in Paris. You people have gotten so rushed and crowded over the ages. And rude. Gentlemen in my era always bowed, whatever they thought of my looks.
Apparently shrieking is etiquette now. In…[Read more]
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Eden Anderson replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
I’m just gonna barge in here and make my comment. 😛 Probably the majority of people on this guild don’t even know I’m here, but I was advised that the best way to get involved was just to barge right in, so here goes.😀
Yay!! This sounds like so much fun!! I’ve never been a part of any sort of contest like this before so I’m excited to see what…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@literatureforthelight crikey! You’re right, we need to get a move on. π Tell you what. I’m terrible at comedy, but I’m going to give a rough draft a shot tonight (at least start it, since I tend to be fairly strong on beginnings) and give us something to get the ball rolling.
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Noah Litle replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey, guys.
Sorry I haven’t been here.
I would say go for it, @literatureforthelight. As it is better to have something, than to not.
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Eden Anderson replied to the topic Hello…? in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Aww, you guys are all so nice and sweet!! I already feel at home! This is going to BE SO MUCH FUN!!😀😀😍
So nice to meet you!! Do you have a WIP? What’s it about?
Thank you! I feel very welcomed. 😀 I have never read βThe Anatomy of Storyβ, by John Truby, but it sounds really good. I’ll need to check that out! Thanks for…[Read more]
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Sarah Baran started the topic Tips for Unsticking a Stuck Scene in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello, my wonderful Scribe Peoples! I thought I’d pop on real quick and share something I just discovered.
Lately, I’ve been dealing with the dreaded Stuck Scene. I know where I’m going, and I want to get there, but when I sit down to write, I just… can’t… get there. Everything seems gray and blah. My heart isn’t in it and I don’t even know…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The World Turned Upside Down in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay guys, here we go. I figured it out. π
@daeus-lamb @noahlitle @gabbyj @msqueen8 @r-m-archer @r-j-karas @literatureforthelight
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