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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
Haha, Gwen and Stilton are uwu personified XD
(Also, related to our needles discussion–I had a happy yesterday because I had a doctor’s appointment and didn’t have any sharp stuff! So yay!)
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@urwen-starial Thank you! <3
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C. R. Watson joined the group Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
Beautiful!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@naiya-dyani *grins* Yep. Oh, you’re on the thread with all the wound discussion, aren’t you?
Gwen: Luckily, our list is small. I’m the only person on it.
Stilton: Wait wait hold up. You almost died??
Gwen: Oops. I wasn’t gonna tell you that part.
Stilton: YOU WEREN;T GONNA TELL ME THAT YOU ALMOST DIED?? YOU DON’T THINK YOUR BEST FRIEND MIGHT…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
XD Well, Gwen does have good reason to complain.
Tai: May I make a list of all the characters that almost died???
Me: you may not
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
XD Also relatable.
Gwen: That’s obvious by the CONDITION MY HECKING ARM IS IN RIGHT NOW
Stilton: Yeah! What she said! *glares at me*
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
I find it far more fun to have my characters go through medical stuff than to go through it myself. . .
Kiet: *irritation*
Me: I’m sorry, my precious boi
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 YES! Man, once I thought I might go into the medical field. *shakes head firmly* I’ve learned.
Yeeeeee. . . I hate needles. *shivers* Can’t watch it, can’t experience it without intense wincing and anxiety, not rarely coupled with some shaking. Lemme tell ya, the dermatologist is not a fun place for me. Because I get keloids…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
*grins* True!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@naiya-dyani Yep… And I know some people have an actual phobia of hospitals, and that’s not my thing. I think what my main problem with them is I can’t stand to know that people are in pain. And so that makes me feel almost kinda claustrophobic. I dunno. It’s weird. But that, whatever that is, coupled with the smell of disinfectant and the…[Read more]
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
Heh, at least my children were safe. . . for one night, at least. ๐
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 <3 <3 <3
Hospitals can be pretty awful. . .
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 GAAAAAHHH YES
I came home from watching I think it was calledย Overcomer–can’t quite remember, but it was that Christian movie with the boy that drowned–and it messed me up and I just went OKAY NOW I NEED TO GO TORMENT MY CHARACTERS TO GET THESE FEELS OUT
Unfortunately, I struggled and just ended up yelling to my sister over…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@naiya-dyani *grins* My mom and I are, too! And yeah, I make purposeful typos as well ๐
Yes!! Exactly what I do! I’ll get inspired by the weather outside or whatever and write a sonnet, but then I’ll read a book with a bittersweet ending and write a free verse sob story.
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Naiya Dyani replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@anne_the_noob14 Hah, you should see me when I make a bad typo. . . I get the puppy face of shame, because in my family I’m kind of known as the grammar Nazi. Although I’ve come to mind it far less on things like forums and IMs. Because I make plenty of errors on those things, too. Often on purpose. ๐
I enjoy doing free verse a good bit myself.…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A poem in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
No, actually, but I can see how you’d think that ๐ I wrote this one day as I was thinking about the day I got to go see her after her surgery a couple months ago, and how much I hate hospitals and the whole mess of things that I was dealing with (had mild depression in the couple weeks before her surgery, I think because I was so…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Writing free verse poems in the forum Poets 6 years, 1 month ago
@naiya-dyani *grins* It was so fun!
GAAAAAHH YOU’RE RIGHT DANGIT
Sorry XD I get aggravated at myself when I use the wrong homophone XD
And yeah, I get what you said about poetry being “too personal” to critique comfortably. I’ve had the same problem a couple times, even with some prose.
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