Ava Murbarger

Niarok

Niarok glared the boy down, measuring him. He was younger than Niarok, probably by quite a bit. He was also arrogant.

Niarok checked himself. Not arrogant. Just… pessimistic. And curious.

He took a deep breath at the end of his explanation of the Mirianweed, adjusting Yila’s arm on his shoulder. She seemed to be reviving, further…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Great! Glad I’m not the only one who feels this way  So Lorcan’s age is a bit complicated, but basically he’s in his late teens/early 20s. If thats too old, I can always make him sightly younger, its no big deal
Oh, he’s fine!!! If he’s like 19, that’s perfect, because he can be two years older than Yila but also younge…[Read more]

Woah… I got a serious amount of space before that last post actually starts…

Anyway, just wanted to let y’all know that Quin is 19 and Qatar is 25. Also, they’re only half brothers but Quin doesn’t know that, and Qatar never talks about it (So I don’t know why I told you except that it’s cool).

Qatar is tall, strong, and fairly handsome,…[Read more]

Qatar

There were people everywhere. One of them, a tall man in an overcoat, came forward carrying a dog. He looked about Qatar’s age, but Qatar barely glanced at him. Quin still clung to the crutch, and below him, the castle floor was filling with lava; if he fell again, there would be no second chance. He saw his brother’s…[Read more]

Acyn

He laughed in my face. Literally.

I jerked my eyebrows. That was unnecessary. I wasn’t the most qualified, and I barely knew what I was talking about, but I was really trying to help.

“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to be rude,” he added, quickly.

I shot him a withering look but managed my tongue for once. For someone who hadn’t meant to be r…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Great! Glad I’m not the only one who feels this way😜❤️ So Lorcan’s age is a bit complicated, but basically he’s in his late teens/early 20s. If thats too old, I can always make him sightly younger, its no big deal😊

Can’t wait! This is soo exciting hehe!💛

Lorcan

Quin stuck by Lorcan’s side as they followed after the group…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

IKR I LITERALLY LOVE THOSE REACTIONS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! Lol!

YES IT’S THE BEST!! LOL, Sahar and Acyn figured out they were in love before they did XD Sahar ships it so hard XD

OOhh!! I think she’ll actually pick up on the sparks between Lorcan and Yila! LOL, this will be hilarious!

And yeah. Most of the characters in my book…

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@denali-christianson
Hello welcome I’m so glad you’re here!!!

Ooh, they sound so cool!

This castle has been kinda inactive because Calidris is currently busy and taking a break and I’ve been busy with other stuff but it’s awesome you’re here!

The current characters are Cathy’s Meira and Sloane, my assassins, Kongar and Chantara, and Calidris…[Read more]

Sorry about the annoying part.   <3 Niorak’s fine–I’m getting used to annoyed characters in my WIP–EVERYBODY is a jerk right now in my books so… annoyed is better than a jerk. Besides, you clearly have a good character here, and it’s fun to see different sides of him.

LOL!!! I mean, annoying life aside, so do I…

And yeah. Most of the character…[Read more]

Sorry about the annoying part. 🙁 <3 Niorak’s fine–I’m getting used to annoyed characters in my WIP–EVERYBODY is a jerk right now in my books so… annoyed is better than a jerk. Besides, you clearly have a good character here, and it’s fun to see different sides of him. 🙂

Also I will post Yila’s part soon (when I’m not falling asleep)

@rose-colored-fancy

LOL, Yila’s reaction was adorable! Funnily enough, that’s basically how my MC reacted when she fell in love XD “Not this, dangit! Not now! *hits feelings into the corner with a broom*”

IKR I LITERALLY LOVE THOSE REACTIONS SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! Lol!

Oh, Sahar is eighteen and Acyn is seventeen, so they’re about the same age as your c…

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*blank*  I forgot what I did but you’re welcome 😈

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I landed in a spiderweb and that was the last thing I remembered until I’m stuck now, like really stuck like dry spaghetti stuck. I don’t know what your first instinct would be but mine is to scream and flop around. But all I get is a mouthful of web (yuck) and my arm twisted abov…[Read more]

Yesss!!!Let’s see…the best way for this to work would be for Quin to help Locran out of some situation. (Like Locran just did for Quin with the crutch), because that would boost Quin’s confidence enough to be friends with someone like Locran.

problem is, Locran has lots of skill/training/powers, and Quin has literally nothing (except that his…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Aww, Lorcan is finally starting to soften a little! That was so cute!

Lolll I know right! He’s super edgey but he’s so sweet at the same tim😄

@emily-waldorf

Dwaaaaa. Way to melt my heart. 🙂 Quin’ has to make a friend out of Locran before he leaves the castle (whenever that may be)…just has to!

YESSS THATS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS T…[Read more]

Acyn

There were too many unscientific things in this castle and I didn’t like any of them.

Sahar was using one of her greatest strengths to maximum capacity. Not panicking. Sahar never panicked, and never despaired. When she was confident, she was light-hearted, and she was always light-hearted.

Unlike Liorah, who usually ran through the entire…[Read more]

Wow, y’all were busy!

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Aww, Lorcan is finally starting to soften a little! That was so cute!

@this-is-not-an-alien

Lol don’t worry, they’ll live! (Probably!) *checks pillowcase*
Thanks! (I love how your princess was so annoying our resident assassin Lorcan nearly cried for joy when she disappears LOL! That was the fun…

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@joelle-stone

*coughs* Someone may have over-committed herself and may have booked all her time…

Yeah, cuz that’s totally not something I would ever do… 😉

Cool. I think I might just create my own and then go from there! Could you maybe summarize what’s happening since I was never a part of this story on the Wingfeather forum so I’ve got ab…[Read more]

@denali-christianson,

Also, you should get on more. *hint hint*

*coughs* Someone may have over-committed herself and may have booked all her time… 😉

Anyyyyways, should I make up my own character or play one that’s been abandoned (if there is one that’s been abandoned…)

Totally up to you! We only have one charrie who’s been abandoned – Jason…[Read more]

Hey everyone! I’m just going to join and if you want to kick me out then tell me and I (unlike my character) will politely leave…

Nightraven
Black hair, dark green eyes, full lips, a very seductive smile, fond of tight-fitting athletic clothes

Dawnthrush
Nightraven’s sidekick. Brown hair, black eyes, an affinity for torture. He will probably…[Read more]