K. A. Grey

@k-a-grey As far as I know, it wasn’t a pun. If it is, I am just as lost as you. XD

@libby@h-jones @k-a-grey Those poems are all so good!!!

@k-a-grey I liked the contrast and flow of your poem.

@h-jones I LOVE THAT POEM! The narrative/free verse style was so beautiful. Please tag me when you are finished with it!

@libby That poem speaks so well… I am praying for you!

@k-a-grey

That poem is gorgeous! I love it to bits! I got goosebumps reading it. 🙂

@k-a-grey

Haha! I love that one.

By the way, don’t feel bad about your earlier one. The fact that it made me feel reluctant to eat chicken for a few days only means you’re a good poet (better than you thought, apparently). 🙂

@libby, @h-jones, @evelyn @k-a-grey

Wow! I haven’t gotten on here in way too long! Let me see if I can catch up.

Libby,

all the poems you have been posting are beautiful. I particularly “I Took a Walk Among the Forest Pine. The Rhyming was beautiful.

Heather,

I liked your poem! It was beautiful. Here are a few thoughts

an afternoon…

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@k-a-grey Hahaha, I totally understand. (: Being an introvert, I experience similar problems. My sympathy goes out to you, friend. xD

And oh! That’s awesome!! I’m glad it was inspiring to you, that completely makes my day. If you ever to end up drawing it (no worries if you don’t), I would love to see it. (:

@k-a-grey Nonono!! No, you didn’t come off strong at all! Don’t worry. (: I was very happy to read all the stuff you had to said and very much appreciate the feedback, friend.

And oh! I totally see where you’re coming from now. xD Oohhh, that makes a lot of sense. I’ll have to change that. Thank you!

@k-a-grey Thank you so much for the feedback. (: I appreciate it, genuinely. Would it make more sense to write “An afternoon outside the walls?” Implying that you’re venturing outside? (When I first wrote it, I imagined it being inside a walled courtyard, if that explains that visual. xD)

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@evelyn @k-a-grey @libby @kb-writer What do y’all think of this poem? I feel like there’s something missing from it, but I don’t know what. Perhaps a solid ending, more metaphorical connections, I don’t know.

an afternoon betwixt [outside?] the walls,
a fleeting taste of stolen flight;
the moon cascading through the falls
as i take silent t…

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@k-a-grey Okay, thank you!

Also, does anyone know the rules of punctuation for dialogue in poetry? If it’s the same person speaking, do you still add quotations at the beginning of each line?

@libby @k-a-grey @h-jones

@k-a-grey That is a beautiful picture! 😀 Love it.  And the poem that you wrote is very lovely and true.  I really like it’s simplicity and message. 🙂

@evelyn Island of the World?  Is it a good book?  Would you suggest me to read it?

And thank you both! 🙂

I keep writing poetry, tell me if it bugs you please.  Here’s another thing I thou…[Read more]

@k-a-grey Neat! 🙂

@k-a-grey *gasps*

I love your profile picture!! It’s gorgeous! 😀

@k-a-grey Wow, I really like that! It’s beautiful. 🙂

@k-a-grey Oh pfffff XDDDDDD duh, I see the ten there now. Aww, it’s so awesome! And it makes a lot more sense now! I was wondering how he graduated and became a businessman in one year, though I guess it’s not impossible. xD

@k-a-grey

Don’t feel horrible! Now I feel bad!

The Guilt Chain

The words revealed that I was squeamish and

now you feel so bad,

and I feel bad for making you sad.

It’s like a thank-you chain

where we thank each other for the “thank-you”, 

expect not so easily dispelled by “That’s enough”

for guilt doesn’t really vanish. 

@k-a-grey

Wow, that is morbid. I felt kind of bad eating chicken for dinner after reading this. 🙂

@k-a-grey This is hilarious and I would respond in emojis, but I find it hard on the computer to find more than a couple. 😛

(^ that being one of them. xD)

Anyways I was able to follow it and thought if very fun. Thanks for sharing! 🙂

@k-a-grey

Yep!

Your story was so cute!😀