Jordyn Emma West

I’ll read and have critique by today or tomorrow.

For future reference I suggest posting a Google Drive or similar link so you can take your story down after you’ve received advice. You don’t have any ability to delete or edit an SE post after a short initial period.

@daeus-lamb

Yeah, okay. That’s kinda what I was hearing. Thanks for the help. 🙂

@selah-chelyah On the novel marketing podcast, they talked about a form of book pirating where nefarious third party companies will take your book and create their own print on demand version, price it lower than yours, and I guess that sometimes let them steal the buy now button on Amazon, meaning people are buying from them, not…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Thanks, Jenna! I found the place to purchase them and all, and learned about them, I just didn’t know what others’ experiences might recommend. 🙂

@selha-chelyah That’s so exciting that you’re publishing! 😀 I’m not published yet, but I hope some of the research I’ve done can help you… About ISBNs, you can purchase them from here (in bulk, even, which saves money). And I believe they have an option to buy barcodes as well. But if you’re publishing with Amazon, I think they generate the…[Read more]

@arindown

The team actually doesn’t have a name yet. 🙁 I’ll have to work on that!

That’s a cool name! Love it! 😆

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Basketball, yes! It’s not my very favorite sport, but it’s still a really good one. Both my parents played in college.

What’s Jordan’s team called? My high-school football team is called the Mapleton Moose.😝 Funky kinda fits the school.

@arindown

I’m glad you like them! 🙂

She meets him at school. To tell how she helps him would give away too much of the story! 😉

Yes!! Jordan LOVES basketball and he’s amazing at it!!!!! 🙂

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

Oh! I like it!

Do you know what they’re personalities are? As in, specifically, from a personality test or something.

I like the dynamics with Crystal’s cheerful outlook. If you don’t mine sharing, how does she meet him, and how does she help him?

Does Jordan do sports? (Just a random question😉 Partly because I love…[Read more]

@arindown

WOW! This took me a really long time! Sorry about that.

Okay I’ll tell you about Jordan Vickery and Crystal Meyers

Jordan Vickery: (usually goes by Vick)  He is 17 rather tall and well built with straight shoulders and strong muscles. He has very dark brown, really curly hair and dark brown eyes. His face has a sardonic, melancholy…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting Thanks! Oh, well I’ll see what I can do…😛

@arindown Awww, thank you!! In all fairness the book’s in the editing stage so I’ve had a while to develop them… which I kind of love doing with all my heart. 😝 And YES, Har is hands-down an ISTP-T. He can definitely be assertive, but yeah, he’s shy. 🙃 Plus, his PTSD contributes to that side of his personality. 😉