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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Leana looked up at the kitchen door, when Alessio, Crorie, and Arsene entered, and smiled the smallest bit.
The pile of supplies was all accumulating inside a single pillowcase, in a corner of the room. A few women worked on making bread around Leana. She’d passed the pan with the dough off, when no fire could be found, and they said there was a…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“We should find the others,” Alessio said, trying to change topics.
Arsene was about to object, when he heard loud clattering in the kitchen. Just… a tiny bit curious… and concerned, Arsene peeked through the kitchen door. And there was Leana, standing in the center of the chaos, ordering…needles? Thread? Where they trying to stitch a tur…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“That’s rather cryptic of you, Alessio,” Arsene said “But Nathair did explain he wanted you on the throne. At least, that’s what he said.”
That was part of the plan, he hadn’t been lying there…
Alessio relaxed slightly when Arsene opened up.
“As for me, I grew up in a world called Aesgar, just outside a city called Mithril. My father was a wood…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
*Leana starting to make bread/instructing a few kitchen staff what to do*
“The tablecloth’s a bit unwieldy.” Though it might be good for bandages. “Do you have smaller bags? Five of them, about the size of summer skirts?” *some ladies scurry to get pillowcases, thinking they’ll be fine…*
Leana looks around the room, while kneading dough. It’s…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“Why do you use cards everywhere?”
Arsene smirked, as Alessio made a face. “They’re rather important to me. Both my parents had a bit of a liking towards them.”
“He… told you already I’m not an actual prince, didn’t he?” Alessio was clearly suppressing his feelings, avoiding eye contact, “My mother hired him to make me inherit.”…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“That’s great,” Arsene said “You first, Stabby Pyromaniac.”
Alessio hadn’t expected Arsene to take him up on it. Devils. Arsene was fiddling with cards. Ok…that was the game they were playing…
“Why do you use cards everywhere?” Alessio asked, Arsene smirked up at him and he rolled his eyes. Information for information, he steeled himself to…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“Well then, explain your life and I’ll explain mine.” Alessio retorted.
“That’s great,” Arsene went on, “You first, Stabby Pyromaniac.”
Just to have something to do, Arsene started to fiddle with his playing cards. He started scrambling the cards, continuously. Until he drew a card.
A Joker.
The only card that is thrown out of the deck. I, th…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“And I asked, where is Sherlock?” Are you joking. Alessio glowered at him viciously.
“As for what he showed me, I want your side of the story first.” Arsene smirked “After all, you can’t expect me to explain my life if you won’t explain yours.”
Alessio clamped his jaw tightly, if looks could kill Arsene would’ve been incinerated. He c…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“I said, what did he show you?”
Ah, he didn’t want to play. That was too bad.
“And I asked, where is Sherlock?”
Just for the sake of being stubborn.
“As for what he showed me, I want your side of the story first.”
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“I see you’re done talking with your girlfriend.” Arsene smirked. Alessio gasped and turned completely red, any retort completely fried from his brain. Leana was…she was… He slapped Arsene into the wall harder than he otherwise would’ve.
“How did you know Nathair?” He demanded.
“After you knocked me out, I had a nice time in dreamland with Ol…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Arsene locked eyes with Alessio, who grabbed him by the arm forcefully.
“I see you’re done talking with your girlfriend.”
Alessio sent him a lovely frown, before shoving him against the wall.
“How did you know Nathair?”
Oh, it was this again. “After you knocked me out, I had a nice time in dreamland with Old Snake. He told me a nice fai…[Read more]
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Linyang Zhang replied to the topic Comic recommendations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
@scoutfinch190 I can’t guarantee anything I recc will be clean, but as I’ve been stuck in the Webtoon hole for years, I think I should have some good ones up my sleeve. If you want ones without LGBT stuff then generally look for Korean ones, not international ones, cuz, well, you know. Anyways.
- I love, love, love Ilkwon Ha’s comics. Annarasumana…
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
@this-is-not-an-alien, @ethan-leonard, @rusted-knight
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“How could I have anticipated that would happen!?!” Nathair says from the ground.
I lunge at Burn, knocking us both to the ground. “Stop! Punching! People! Without! Warning!”
He’s still howling curses though. Well. At least he recognizes me. Otherwise, things would have gone from…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
(Leana stuck her tongue out at Hades, if only a moment, when he refused the nick-name… She’ll still use it.)
As she listened to Alessio… Leana’s heart warmed and bubbled like a brook. Father loved Alessio. He knew him. He named him.
He… always seemed to make people feel valuable. Be they a senator whose carriage lost a wheel. Or a begger…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Does my world have too many details? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Well I did reply but it seems internet pacman ate that.
That was an amazing read I love how fast paced it is but I still get a good idea of the characters!!!
I still don’t know what to think of Leo he has so many mixed impressions I’d like to see more of his motives!
Can’t wait to see what happens next!!
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
They’d need to get moving, Alessio thought. But he felt relieved, lighter than he had in so many years. He kind’ve just wanted to talk about Nithel, Leana would know more about him and that was something he’d like to hear more of. What was it like, a kind loving person as a father?
They didn’t have time to talk though, the sooner they made it…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
Change it how you need it 🙂
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
So this happened fast.
I can’t write Burn in character for this. There is no way, no how he’s sitting in the air howling curses while Nathair and Sherlock hold polite conversations. I could have made it work if it weren’t for that one detail. Can I change it?
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“ARSENE!” This new person – Sherlock apparently – shouted and smashed the cave wall in the particles of dust. His scaled knuckles shimmered with fiery light as he slowly collected himself.
Nathair raised his eyebrow with a bemused smirk and the man turned to him, continuing in a much quieter, controlled voice.
“Arsene. What’s your connection…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 3 months ago
“And I’ll call him Big Softie,”
… Sigh. Why was he not surprised? Alessio vaguely reminded Hades of Venus. Granted, Venus was a lot younger and into anything that was cute and adorable. This quirk led to her bring home any and all small animals she could get her hands on (squirrels, birds, and hamsters).
Yes, there were simil…[Read more]
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