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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh, goodness, I have no faith in my ability to write anything coherent because I’ve had to accept the fact that I actually am sick, but here goes.
Liorah
Lorcan raised an eyebrow. “So now you’re mocking my code? Very mature of you princess.”
I crossed my arms, tighter than needed, feeling the cold anger coursing through my veins.
“How much…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
LOL, I love how Quin’s first reaction was “noPE!! Bad idea!!” XD Liorah does that to people and it always makes me laugh.
Liorah
He was blushing and wouldn’t look at me. He reminded me of both Aydin and Faye, somehow.
Lorcan grinned at him. I was surprised that Lorcan would try to be encouraging. Maybe I had judged him too…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 4 months ago
Quin/Qatar
“You’re a terrible brother, though.”
Something beyond jest was lying in the back of Qatar’s eyes.
Quin’s shoulders sagged.
“I know.” You too. He studied the floor.
Just then, a woman appeared falling on her back on the floor and jumping up again. Like a cat.
She and Locran started ribbing each other–obviously they’ve met…
“You…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Oh gosh I would love it if she could insult Lorcan about his looks especially if she knew Yila liked him. Liorah seems like the kind of person who would insult someone because they’re great looking hehe
I have no idea if that’s canon but it absolutely could be XD That’s totally her thing XD
I think if she knew Yila ha…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
so, I believe the Shrike has finally discovered Liorah, and he may or may not be rather smitten…
So, @everyone, yes, Liorah does have a love-interest in-story, but I decided to temporarily erase that from existence so I can figure out how Liorah reacts to having a crush, like Yila and Lorcan are doing.
It’s going to be chaos, she’s so o…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Alessio had decided to leave out the part where “immune” was loosely defined as “won’t kill me” but it was a moot point now. He only caught Nithel the moment he popped some sort of nuts in his mouth. For two seconds Alessio completely panicked. But his friend grabbed another fruit and he didn’t drop dead or anything…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Hehe it seems there has! It would have been so funny to see her try to hack him to bits while he dodges out of the way smiling and saying ‘Oops you missed me’ and ‘try to work on ypur footwork darling’
LOL, that would be hilarious XD She totally would have done that last time XD
I really like Liorah! I’d love to know h…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
I am flattered that Liorah thinks so
I really wasn’t expecting her to say that XD She’s kind of surprising me by how much grace she can give people. I mean, yeah, that was her entire character arc for the second book but I’m still surprised she learned her lesson XD
It also struck me as very funny that Liorah would have…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
That was hilarious to read XD Nice to see their dynamic hasn’t changed XD
Liorah
Of course, Lorcan didn’t even consider leaving me alone, as any decent person would have done.
“Look who just arrived back into the hellhole. Our very own malicious little banshee. Can’t say I’m glad to see you.”
He was as insulti…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
@irishcelticredflowercrown Aww that makes me so happy! I haven’t seen much of your characters yet, but I love Lorcan! And I completely agree – I don’t know about you, but I feel like I’ve connected and related to the people in this little community (specifically this character castle!) more than I relate to people irl.
@emily-waldorf Oh that i…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
My Lord Castle just waits.
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When the table appeared, Nithel’s stomach flipped and his mouth watered. It had been two nights since he’d eaten the dried rusk. How long since he’d actually had food, though. Egad… He wanted to fall upon the fruit, the meat, the bread, and truthfully, the possibility of poison hadn’t even crossed…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
No waaait. *Cackles maniacally*
Alessio had gone through a lot of different scenarios. He’d tried to think through every possible consequence and contingency.
But…it was quiet…
Probably not a good sign. That usually meant whatever punishment lay in store for him was going to be a lot worse. He tried to breath slowly and not look as terri…[Read more] -
Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
STOP GIVING ME MINOR HEART ATTACKS!! Yikes, every time you scare the heck out of me XD
I’m glad Qatar is back though! I think his interaction with Liorah would be really interesting…
It will be good though I’m sure of it! I love that idea you had where Liorah goes like hey you’re that guy from a dre…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Thank you!! 🙂 BTW, I forgot whose characters I used and therefore forgot that I should tag you–you’re free to change anything if it doesn’t fit with your idea of what should happen next.
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
YASSSSS CANT WAIT FOR LORCAN TO SEE LIORAH AGAIN!!!! This is going to be glorious *evil cackle*
HAHA!! I have no clue how she’s going to react this time XD
In case anybody’s interested I’ve started a blog and portfolio showcasing some of my art here’s the link for my first post, its a college essay I did that I’m par…
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
@irishcelticredflowercrown oh I see. Of course! It’s really fun getting familiar with everyone else’s stories here!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
As the castle groaned, Nithel’s eyes widened, and he stepped back against the wall. Then as stones started to drop his lips parted in shock. He wanted to hide underneath something but there was nowhere to hide. No shelter from the rock. Nothing. And Alessio, standing right in the middle as debris fell.
Nithel wanted to order him to move, but move…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
@everyone I’m planning on writing the Basil’s reaction too, but I’m going to hold off on that until everyone finishes theirs, since the Castle’s threat is going to involve uhhh let’s just say another plot rabbit hole 😉
@irishcelticredflowercrown Is the girl the Castle mentioned Mayra?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
Haha Ikr I was like “I know Lorcan likes her and she’s sooo taking this the wrong way” I love how it worked out though!!! XD
But oh my goodness, I love how dramatic she is LOLLLL this line is great!!!
I love this! I’m just now realizing how overly dramatic she is about basically everything lol!
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy @irishcelticredflowercrown
Just wanted to clarify for y’all that Niarok hasn’t been challenged yet. 🙂
Yila
Yila glared at the pool of blood which had once been a man.
This castle was just cruel.
The blood wasn’t the part that bothered her. Blood and guts she could handle. Evil and heartless killing she was done…[Read more]
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