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  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 5 months ago

    @calidris

    so, I believe the Shrike has finally discovered Liorah, and he may or may not be rather smitten…

    So, @everyone, yes, Liorah does have a love-interest in-story, but I decided to temporarily erase that from existence so I can figure out how Liorah reacts to having a crush, like Yila and Lorcan are doing.

    It’s going to be chaos, she’s so oblivious.

    I have no idea how flirting works irl so I’m just going to pass that one off to Liorah lol

    LOL, dude, you think I do? I’m making this up as I go along XD The fact that Liorah is stupid and oblivious makes that easier XD

    This took an incredibly long time because I’m trying out a new style with Saskia!  It took a while to get into her mindset, plus she’s not very well developed yet

    Also, I wrote random portions of this kind of late, so some of it is definitely not going to be written as well lol

    I think it was really well done! I really enjoyed it!

    He’s staring straight at us – big, inky eyes peeking out from soft curtains of black curls.

    Basil?

    And just like that, I can feel my whole chest squeeze in a knot.  He’s sitting all alone, eyes soft and forlorn, lips ever so slightly pulled to the right.  It’s a real pretty look, but I can tell he’s bored out of his mind.

    It’s like the second paragraph and I can already tell she’s smitten XD

    @irishcelticredflowercrown

    and he did indeed lose it, its so very tragic that his handsome features are now on full display, unfortunately for everyone they must now endure this, especially Yila…

    I think it’s safe to say Liorah isn’t impressed XD

     

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