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K. A. Grey replied to the topic Brainstoming, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Thank you both so much!!
@emily-waldorf Those are great ideas! I’ve never seen Oblivion, but I’ll look it up! Yeah, I do want the MC to uncover the secret of the Mirror City, but I’m not sure yet whether I want it to be actually sinister, or just *seems* to be sinister.
You need goals for that character. What is he trying to obtain in…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Brainstoming, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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K. A. Grey replied to the topic Brainstoming, Anyone? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@inkhorn Okay, cool! I’d love to help with yours too, so do you want to trade comments?
Okay, so for anyone that’s subscribed to the SE newsletter, recently Hope Ann sent a May Long Challenge with this picture prompt:

I wrote a little scene, and my sister loved it so much, she wants to know the rest of the story. Problem is, I don’t know t…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Looking for Beta readers for a 66k Fantasy Romance in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago

https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aefflaeds-weakness.html
(pictures and descriptions in link)
Aefflaed’s Weakness: A Love Story
This touching story began as a short story and quickly evolved into an epic. (well, a short novel, but still an epic story….if I can toot my own horn a bit. )
In my previous WIP, The Adventures of the Last Aygiff,…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
that was awesome. =) I like your characters. I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p
Abirami
So bored.
I was lying on my back again, waiting for Ku to wake up. A while ago, Enydd had woken up and walked around a bit, asked me what next, but she had gone off somewhere…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
DENALI YOU’RE BACKKKK!!!!!! I MISSED YOU AND I MISSED NIAROK!!!!!
pulled Liorah and Aydin out and put Mejt (May-eet) and her older brother, Halmar (did I get his name right?) They’re both around twenty.
Yep, accurate! Halmar is twenty, Mejt is eighteen!
and has a terrible habit of making wry comments about the w…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Oh yeah, and your riddle is a good one,
Is it perspective?
some of my other guesses:
Depth
3-Dimensions
Point of View
Personality
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@inkhorn YOUR QUOTE IS LITERALLY ONE OF THE! BEST! QUOTES! BY! TOLKIEN! EVERRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!! *does crazy happy dance and spins around in circles* LOLLL Okay anyways done fangirling… XD
That is such a random quirk! I LOVE it!
I KNOW RIGHT???????????? It just happened one day. XD He was doing a thing and then he started being super…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
yes! That’s correct! heat. =) my students usually take about three weeks to get that one. lol.
Hot air rises, but the higher into the atmosphere you go, the colder it gets. Things move by kinetic energy, which is a form of heat energy, and heat is literally the molecules moving at a faster pace, meaning that heat can literally never…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
WELCOME TO THE CASTLE!!!! I disappeared a month and a half before Easter XD (Lent fast) but I’m glad to see more people have joined!!! Also your characters sound really cool and I greatly appreciate people who throw away the typical fantasy tropes (not that I can say the same for myself…XD) Excited to get to know your…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I’m going to try to revive the castle! I missed it!
Athena
Those idiots were just standing around and not doing anything. Did they want to die? If they did, I wished they’d do it where it wouldn’t be such a mess.
The white-haired man was supporting the red-haired man, t…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
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Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Just had to share… in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Wow… Another heart gripper. I’m nearing the end of my WIP, and some of the scenes are getting epic. I just have to share it… especially since I’m so close to it, so I don’t know how it will be taken by other people… but this scene is the capstone to my WIP… Please let me know if there is anything confusing in it…
here’s…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
Right?! Enough of this sad endings stuff, eesh! (Okay, okay,guilty as charged!)
I only hope I can make him a character to match her. *scrunches up face in doubt and confusion*.
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks! And YAYYAYAY. Poor Daire. he couldn’t have chosen a hero more reluctant to be worshiped.
Mmm-hmm. And a certain someone… 🙂
Well I know, but I don’t understand why people want big-brother SCs instead of MCs. Whatever *shruggs* they also don’t like adjectives or tropes, and I…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
As @inkhorn said! You can add any room, we’re just making it up as we go along. We do try to keep all the characters more or less together because otherwise the castle gets stuck much easier.
You can make up anything you like! We’ve had some wild settings already. XD The zero-gravity room, the dinosaur greenhouse, all the caves…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
“Hey, Conan the barbarian, mind putting on some clothes?” The man in the strange metallic get-up called from afar. He had been watching me from a distance, but this was the first time hearing his voice.
I looked down at my gaaban. If they were from another world, they probably knew nothing about aygiffs, meaning they knew nothing of gaabans.…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
Haha don’t worry I’ll drop little reminders here and there 😂
Yay! I’m so happy I wrote it okay. I was mentally yowalling the whole time like “Owowhow, I hope this isn’t totally wrong–I hope she likes it owbowow”). Honestly, I love Locran. Every time I think about him another piece of me melts a little bit. He’s just so–…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
Yay! I’m so happy I wrote it okay. I was mentally yowalling the whole time like “Owowhow, I hope this isn’t totally wrong–I hope she likes it owbowow”). Honestly, I love Locran. Every time I think about him another piece of me melts a little bit. He’s just so–I don’t have the words, and I shall likewise fall to…[Read more]
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