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				<title>Grace Johnson posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/3-ways-to-make-unique-fantasy-worlds-less-confusing/comment-page-1/#comment-5672</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2020 19:43:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, awesome article! And yes, special terms are something that bother me as a reader. I must be able to envision what I&#8217;m reading, and it&#8217;s definitely frustrating when I can&#8217;t figure out what this mysterious animal or creature must look like.</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2020 18:52:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow, I really appreciate this article. Dead parents is one cliché I subconsciously knew was overused, but I never consciously identified it before. I&#8217;m so glad you included it here!</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson changed their profile picture</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2020 18:37:31 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Grace Johnson posted a new activity comment</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/5-reasons-you-may-want-to-write-your-novel-as-a-short-story-first/comment-page-1/#comment-5670</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2020 18:36:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is such a wonderful idea, Quinlyn! I suppose I did this on accident with my debut novel, lol. I started it when I was around thirteen, and it was very short, but now five years later it&#8217;s about 153,000 words.</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson&#039;s profile was updated</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 19 Oct 2020 18:21:43 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic The winner is... in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Nov 2018 20:00:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s my word count for the month of November: 7,240 words.</p>
<p>I know it&#8217;s a very tiny amount, but I write like a turtle and I&#8217;m in my novel&#8217;s editing stages. *Hides*</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Good or Evil? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/good-or-evil/page/4/#post-61847</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Nov 2018 19:48:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/noahlitle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@noahlitle</a><br />
Congratulations! I can&#8217;t wait to see it!</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Favorite Characters??? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 27 Nov 2018 19:36:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*Ecstatic gasp* You guys are geeking out about characters! Excellent; let me jump right in here.</p>
<p>Call me one of the masses, but I&#8217;m on a Loki craze right now, probably because he&#8217;s one of the only well-developed villains I&#8217;ve ever stumbled across. *Gazes dreamily into the distance* And&#8230;his <em>costume</em>&#8230;and his <em>sarcasm</em>&#8230;</p>
<p>And I still like Margus&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-31046"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/favorite-characters/#post-61845" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Good or Evil? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Nov 2018 00:18:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, reward yourself, @noahlittle ! Great job persevering! 🙂</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic The winner is... in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 02 Nov 2018 02:16:27 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll be trying to re-write the last couple of chapters in my novel this month. Can that count for the word war?</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Let&#039;s write /more/ in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 01 Nov 2018 00:21:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s my word count: 4,778</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Good or Evil? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 29 Oct 2018 18:59:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@noahlittle I&#8217;m praying (and rooting) for you! Don&#8217;t stop writing! 🙂</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Let&#039;s write /more/ in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 25 Oct 2018 01:06:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll be revising a few chapters of my novel this week; hopefully I&#8217;ll get some extra words out of it. 🙂</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Criminal types in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 19 Oct 2018 21:26:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> Good point. I suppose Robin Hood wasn&#8217;t the best example.<br />
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Criminal types in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 16 Oct 2018 22:56:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>How do we write highly engaging criminals without endorsing their criminal activity?</strong></p>
<p>Well, this may be cliche, but I think Robin Hood is a good example of a criminal whose criminal activity was actually good. It was only evil from the eyes of Prince John, but to the starving peasants he was a hero.</p>
<p>Another way to write an engaging criminal might&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-22701"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/criminal-types/#post-53343" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 13 Oct 2018 00:03:36 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a><br />
<a href='https://storyembers.org/members/literatureforthelight/' rel="nofollow ugc">@literatureforthelight</a></p>
<p>Both of your works were amazing and hilarious. Well done!</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson&#039;s profile was updated</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2018 23:38:24 -0400</pubDate>

				
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic That silly face in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 08 Oct 2018 23:33:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, guys, so sorry I haven&#8217;t been helping. I&#8217;ll be glad to participate in the editing stage, though.</p>
<p>Welcome, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/eden-anderson/' rel="nofollow ugc">@eden-anderson</a> ! I love your profile picture, by the way! 🙂</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Let&#039;s talk about parents in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lets-talk-about-parents/#post-50484</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 03 Oct 2018 01:08:26 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> Whoa. I&#8217;ve never heard of a sequel that picked up with the two love interests as spouses and parents. That&#8217;s awesome that you did that. 😀 What genre is your story?</p>
<p>And yes, I completely agree that parents shouldn&#8217;t just be cardboard cutouts. They deserve their own hopes, dreams, interests, personalities, goals, etc. Just because a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-20036"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lets-talk-about-parents/#post-50484" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Ideas!!!! in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2018 19:30:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sesi/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sesi</a> I like Willow a lot.</p>
<p>Here are a few S ideas.</p>
<p>Serenity</p>
<p>Sarah</p>
<p>Sandra</p>
<p>Selena</p>
<p>Sapphire</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Let&#039;s talk about parents in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2018 18:30:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rosemarylouise/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rosemarylouise</a> Good points, and hooray for How to Train Your Dragon!!! 😀</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Let&#039;s talk about parents in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2018 00:33:48 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t know if this is the <em>best</em> example I&#8217;ve seen, but Darth Vader&#8217;s relationship with his son was sort of non-stereotypical, what with the hand-chopping that went on.</p>
<p>Just kidding. XD Honestly, I thought Hiccup&#8217;s mom from How to Train Your Dragon 2 really broke the mold. She and Hiccup were actually on the same side, instead of butting heads.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-19861"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lets-talk-about-parents/#post-50286" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic New Wessex Worldbuilding and History in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Sep 2018 01:30:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I watch Daeus, wondering what our leader is planning, and feeling true, genuine hope for the first time in months. Being seated at this table among so many fellow warriors has rekindled within me something that seemed to have fallen asleep.</p>
<p>Perhaps Melkor&#8217;s lies had gotten to me as well, and I never even realized.</p>
<p>But I will not longer doubt;&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18717"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/new-wessex-worldbuilding-and-history/page/3/#post-49057" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson posted a new activity comment</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 24 Sep 2018 01:22:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hiya!<br />
We had a family over to our house today and we were hanging out with them all day playing Ultimate Frisbee and Uker (if that&#8217;s how you spell it, lol) and gaga ball and stuff.<br />
How &#8217;bout you? How&#8217;s your writing going?</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic What are you writing? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Sep 2018 21:09:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-m-archer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-m-archer</a> Lol, that&#8217;s a great idea to use personality types from <em>Divergent</em>! I should try that sometime.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> I really like all of your themes&#8211;they sound like they&#8217;ll make a rich story.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/noahlitle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@noahlitle</a> I&#8217;ve began the <em>Dragons of Starlight</em> series but haven&#8217;t finished it yet. That&#8217;s true, the idea of dragons ruling humans is similar to Bryan&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18435"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/what-are-you-writing/page/2/#post-48681" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic New Wessex Worldbuilding and History in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Sep 2018 20:36:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I gather the courage to speak up. &#8220;I agree&#8211;Melkor&#8217;s days are indeed numbered. But still, it is urgent that we consult the Book for wisdom and devise a plan of action against him.&#8221; I glance around, watching the firelight dance on the faces of new my companions.</p>
<p>&#8220;I was just summoned here from Deldore, where the king has succumbed entirely to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18428"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/new-wessex-worldbuilding-and-history/page/2/#post-48674" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Odd ways of talking in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Sep 2018 20:07:37 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/rosemarylouise/' rel="nofollow ugc">@rosemarylouise</a> I&#8217;ve never read it, but that sounds extremely interesting!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> I don&#8217;t have a character who speaks funny, but I do try to give each character a different voice. I&#8217;m not sure how well it&#8217;s working, but it&#8217;s safe to say that they don&#8217;t all sound identical. I think it would be fun to try writing a character who speaks oddly,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18418"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/odd-ways-of-talking/#post-48664" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Sep 2018 01:58:31 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>*Creeeeeaaaakkkk* *Looks around* Um, hi.</p>
<p>*Stares in dumbfounded amazement at the beautifully-crafted scenery that must have taken you forever to write*</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic What are you writing? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Sep 2018 01:51:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-m-archer/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-m-archer</a> Thief/assassin characters are the best. : ) Would you mind telling me his personality type?</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a><br />
Your novel sounds extremely interesting. That&#8217;s a creative twist on a common cliche.</p>
<p>As for my novel, it&#8217;s the first in a two-book series. It&#8217;s fantasy-fiction, and basically it&#8217;s about another world where the dragons have enslaved the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18132"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/what-are-you-writing/#post-48348" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Why Are You Writing? in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 20 Sep 2018 01:24:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> Thanks for tagging me or I wouldn&#8217;t have seen this. 🙂 It&#8217;s been interesting to read everyone&#8217;s answers and see that so many people are similar to me. I also struggle with writing slowly, but I always tell myself that the slower I write, the more thought I can put into each paragraph, and the more beautiful the finished product will be.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-18124"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/why-are-you-writing/page/2/#post-48337" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Go crazy with prose in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Sep 2018 01:19:08 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Amen! The Lego movie is awesome!</p>
<p>And I want to say thank you for all the work you put into writing this story! Regardless of whether or not it wins, I still think it&#8217;s excellent! 😀</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Ideas!!!! in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 15 Sep 2018 00:46:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-j-karas/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-j-karas</a> Thank you! : )</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Ideas!!!! in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 14 Sep 2018 01:23:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/sesi/' rel="nofollow ugc">@sesi</a> She sounds lovely! Okay, I&#8217;ve got a few random ideas that may or may not fit her:</p>
<p>Orlanna</p>
<p>Jade</p>
<p>Kiara</p>
<p>Roselyn</p>
<p>Serena</p>
<p>Melody</p>
<p>Vivian</p>
<p>Rithia</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Ideas!!!! in the forum New Wessex Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Sep 2018 01:13:12 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Hi. *Handshake* You don&#8217;t know me at all, but names are something that I love brainstorming, so I&#8217;ll just jump in here. : ) First, though, a question: what does she look like?</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Go crazy with prose in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Sep 2018 01:04:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-j-karas/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-j-karas</a> I did pick up on the secret that they&#8217;re fish. I thought that was creative! : )</p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Sep 2018 01:30:43 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> You have just helped me to understand good prose infinitely better.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/samuel/' rel="nofollow ugc">@samuel</a> Great idea. Or alternatively if the narrator is unreliable, but takes himself way too seriously and tells everything through a lens of him being the biggest, toughest fishy out there. : )</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Go crazy with prose in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Sep 2018 02:15:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/noahlitle/' rel="nofollow ugc">@noahlitle</a> Nice to meet you! : ) I&#8217;m gonna try to be on here more often.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/r-j-karas/' rel="nofollow ugc">@r-j-karas</a> brought up a lot of good points, especially the one about going for a unique character. How about a protagonist with a brain disease like dementia? If it was from their POV, that could be very creative. Just a thought.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/literatureforthelight/' rel="nofollow ugc">@literatureforthelight</a> Same here. I would&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-16243"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/go-crazy-with-prose/page/3/#post-46440" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Go crazy with prose in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 04 Sep 2018 01:56:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, guys!</p>
<p>I always sorta lean toward fantasy since that&#8217;s the only genre I&#8217;ve written in, but I&#8217;m totally open to new things. 🙂</p>
<p>Besides genre, another thing that will drastically affect the prose (I think) is who&#8217;s telling the story. For example, if the protagonist is telling it in first person, or if the narrator speaks like his own character&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-15996"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/go-crazy-with-prose/#post-46193" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Jun 2018 18:41:12 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> This. Is. AMAZING! Great job!</p>
<p>Sorry I didn&#8217;t see this sooner&#8230;this is awesome. *High fives*</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 11 Jun 2018 21:59:33 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/literatureforthelight/' rel="nofollow ugc">@literatureforthelight</a> I love that idea! Sorry it took me so long to see it&#8211;I&#8217;ve been on a trip.</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/lady-iliara/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lady-iliara</a> Hey, that&#8217;s great! 😀</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tragedy-ahoy/page/2/#post-38230</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 07 Jun 2018 17:11:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/lady-iliara/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lady-iliara</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> Okay! 🙂 I&#8217;ll get to work on an outline.</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:49:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a></p>
<p>Along the lines of the hero giving himself away piece by piece, I have an idea, but it&#8217;s kind of fantasy-ish. Not sure if we&#8217;re going for that genre? Anyway, what if the MC has the power to heal others, but each time he does he gives away part of his own life force? So as his comrades are repeatedly injured in battles, he keeps&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-8172"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tragedy-ahoy/page/2/#post-38130" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Perfect Prose? in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 06 Jun 2018 21:36:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/elizabeth/' rel="nofollow ugc">@elizabeth</a> I&#8217;m still working on my prose, so I&#8217;m not sure how much help I can be, but I would echo what <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/hope-ann/' rel="nofollow ugc">@hope-ann</a> said&#8211;definitely read things aloud. It helps to figure out what sounds awkward and what doesn&#8217;t.</p>
<p>Also, I don&#8217;t know if this is cheating or not, but it could really help if you chose one of your favorite authors (someone whose words&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-8170"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/perfect-prose/#post-38128" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jun 2018 19:06:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/lady-iliara/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lady-iliara</a> Good idea!</p>
<p>We would also need a way to make the father easy for readers to relate to, in that he is still a flawed human being. I&#8217;m not sure how we could pull that off, though.</p>
<p>Does anyone know the word limit?</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Tragedy, ahoy! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 23:33:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/kate/' rel="nofollow ugc">@kate</a> Okay, I see. Thank you! 😀</p>
<p>I have a suggestion: <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/m_corinnemusic/' rel="nofollow ugc">@m_corinnemusic</a> said that we need to get the reader attached to the character as quickly as possible, and that the character should impact others. I totally agree. What if the father (if we use him as our dying character) gives his life for a rebellious son? That scene could be packed full of&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-7885"><a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/tragedy-ahoy/#post-37834" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 19:04:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> So, how does this work? Do we all brainstorm/plot together and then elect a writer? I&#8217;ve never done this before&#8211;it sounds like lots of fun! 😀</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Welcome to New Wessex! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 19:00:00 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/daeus-lamb/' rel="nofollow ugc">@daeus-lamb</a> Awesome, thanks!</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic *Barges in with pizza* in the forum Introduce Yourself</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 18:58:29 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@jane-maree</a> Awesome! *Fistbump*</p>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 01:24:07 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/allison-grace/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Allison-grace</a> Yes, you do indeed. I thought you might want pizza though. Lol 😛 : )</p>
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				<title>Grace Johnson replied to the topic Welcome to New Wessex! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2018 00:25:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello! I just figured out how to access my guild, lol!</p>
<p>So, I have a question for anyone who knows about these things: Will I get notified when there are new New Wessex events going on (like, for instance, writing prompt competitions and stuff)? If not, should I just be on the lookout for new threads?</p>
<p>Thanks! 😀</p>
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