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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Ah ok, that makes sense
Very well…*laughs wickedly*
Saevus was exploding with fury. Never had ANYONE shamed him in such a way as this. Stoking the flames that enveloped him to an intense blaze, he roared and released a shock wave that blasted everyone back a even rendered the table into pieces. Drawing his sword, Saevus began ch…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I have a question for those pulling characters out of the castle.
Do you mind if I have Saevus kill them on his rampage he’s about to go on?
Also, I’m gonna drop in Saevus’s top general, General Durun Sollers, right after the rampage of Saevus.
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Saevus looked around quietly. So far, all was good. The castle seemed to be forcing everyone to reveal their greatest regret…information he needed. People like Abirami, he noted…they hated the castle. He could sense it from their thoughts. And with the information being forced out of them by the castle, he could use it…to use them.
That, combi…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok thanks lol! Yeah I was kinda confused there lol.
<p style=”text-align: center;”>!Warning!</p>
!Contains mentions of violence!Miles started opening the door. Just as it was barely opened, some force slammed back into it and shut it. Startled, Miles leaped back. Inside he heard a voice say “Take as long as you need, no h…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic No idea where else to post this, but I need help in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Will do! That is an excellent idea I’ve never really heard of.
Interesting point…I’ve never thought about it that way.
Yeah that’s what I was thinking of doing. Thanks for the tip!
Yes, I’m referring to the MC…and kinda the rest of the squad, but yeah mainly the MC. As for what he is…I was thinking really kinda along the lines of…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard started the topic No idea where else to post this, but I need help in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Hey everyone!
I’m somewhat new to the forum, and I have a few questions for this book I’m planning.
A basic synopsis of what I’ve planned so far: United States Marine Corps soldier Jackson Barrett goes on a combat patrol with his squad, on which he and his squad members capture this one enemy captain. Info that he later releases in quest…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Well…it’s Saevus. How else is he gonna respond to this? He certainly won’t sit there and act like nothing happened.
And yes, I’m gonna let everyone else go first because he…he’s Saevus.
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I will agree. Warnings or a buildup are a good idea. I’ll admit that when I was reading that I was kinda like, where on earth is this going…?Also, I’ll give a warning right now-when Saevus’ biggest regret comes in, it’ll be in the middle of a battle, and a sword battle at…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I’ll just say I’m gonna wait for someone else to make the first move lol
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
No. He stayed in his armor. I don’t even know what he looks like without it lol
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Ok cool thanks
Miles looked around. He was in a small room, lit by a single lightbulb up above him. Behind him was a low bed, with a dresser at the foot of it. Over to the left was a closet with nothing in it. The back and forth motion of the room told him that he was on a ship.
Curious as to what was going on, he…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I’m gonna let everyone else go first, because Saevus will not at all be happy about having to do this…like, expect another fight to occur unhappy
*questions dropping in the one character who can destroy him*
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago

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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
BWAHAHAHA
That is hilarious @this-is-not-an-alien
btw what is the setting kinda like around group 2?
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
A good way to sum (spellcheck says sim) up what Saevus would be doing-just an iron statue in the back lol.
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Uhh…good question. I actually have no idea if Saevus eats or not.
*tries asking him, ends up running away from his sword*
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
I concur! Though…I’ll just say this, Emperor Saevus is pretty pissed at the moment lol. Might wanna leave him alone
*dodges repeated blows from Saevus’ sword*
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
good point…. so… um… (clears throat)…. who wants to write the dance? lol. I could do it, but I probably wouldn’t do it justice. lol. Abirami, as you know, has two left feet. 😂😅 so…. ??
Yeah….not me lol
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
*Saevus stands off on the side, wondering what on earth to do*
Cause I mean, what on earth is he gonna do while waiting for this dance? 😂😂😂😂
*remembers the castle’s ultimatum*
yeah…you’re gonna live it out, sucker. *ignores Saevus’ glares through his helmet*
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂Bwahahaha that is hilarious! I don’t even know how Saevus would respond to that! 😂😂😂
I read that little bit about flies, look over at the window, and there’s a fly 😂😂😂
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