Emberynus The Dragonslayer

If we agree to disagree that’s fine

Yep. 🙂

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@noah-cochran</p>
😂 You’re good!

I always thought I was saved, but when I went into a hard depression I eventually realized I wasn’t, and it scared me. I always in a way knew I wasn’t because I was always scared of dying and I always doubted, but I would just tell myself I was paranoid.

Similar thing happens to her,…[Read more]

@erynne

So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, but she isn’t actually saved. Does that sound better, Professor?

What I was referencing was the possible theological/biblical inaccuracy of the statement. I assume you’re now saying that she thought that accepting Jesus saved her (Armenian belief) but that that was fal…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

That’s sounds pretty good

Ah good, I got Professor Cochran’s approval.

I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂

Basically she thinks she’s saved because at one point she prayed a prayer and accepted Jesus into her heart 😉

So she believes she’s saved and she comes off as a “Christian” to most, b…[Read more]

@erynne

However, it is shown as a flaw.

That’s sounds pretty good.

Truth be told, she is not actually saved for about half the book, she’s just able to fool people, including herself.

I’m not sure that’s how it works, but I won’t start my theology talk again. 🙂

I did stay up incredibly late last night and wrote 3,000 words.

Great job! Keep that up!

@jared-williams

That was fantastic, where is your book and when can I buy it?

@jared-williams

Please let me know if it is hard to understand him and whether or not his intonation make sense or if anything contradicts my description of him…

I found it easy to read Hadwin’s dialogue; honestly it was fun because I don’t usually get to read phonetic speech.  I don’t think you contradicted yourself, and the scene was pretty en…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

‘proud to be single.’ I know this is a common thing people claim to be both in real life after a break up and in books, but in my opinion it is not at all a good thing.

Yep, I totally agree. It’s not a biblical perspective of things at all and a self-empowerment way to go.

However, it is shown as a flaw. Truth be told, she is not…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I had a really interesting idea for a next challenge. It’s similar to this one, except instead of facing their fears, they learn what would have happened if they never face their fears and complete their arc. If they make all the wrong choices and become the worst version of themselves, where would they be in t…

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@jared-williams

hahahaha. I have a poster in my classroom with Gandolph facing the balrog, on top it says “You Shall Not Pass”. and then on the bottom, it says “If You Do Not Have Your Name On Your Paper!”

XD I think I’ve seen posters like that before.

your riddle is a good one,

Thank you! Your last guess about personality is pretty close to the…[Read more]

Ok, I have literally no clue what’s going on…

I’m not killing anyone.

Almost as if reading his thoughts, the world shifted again, into feral darkness.

In a second it’d be over, he’d be somewhere else.

He sucked in a breath, trying not to panic when it didn’t change. Still dark, enclosed. No, this wasn’t happening, it wasn’t! Then he made co…[Read more]

@everyone

I had a really interesting idea for a next challenge. It’s similar to this one, except instead of facing their fears, they learn what would have happened if they never face their fears and complete their arc. If they make all the wrong choices and become the worst version of themselves, where would they be in ten/twenty/thirty/however…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

DENALI YOU’RE BACKKKK!!!!!! I MISSED YOU AND I MISSED NIAROK!!!!!

@inkhorn

pulled Liorah and Aydin out and put Mejt (May-eet) and her older brother, Halmar (did I get his name right?) They’re both around twenty.

Yep, accurate! Halmar is twenty, Mejt is eighteen!

and has a terrible habit of making wry comments about the w…

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@noah-cochran

I have roughly 10,000 words of this romance written so far. I thought you might like to hear what I came up with.

After a hard past, Marie got the wrong idea of what a relationship was. She got a clean slate when her best friend, Kat, opened her house up to her. Marie was happy for the first time in her adult life. She was in…[Read more]

Arsene walked downstairs with Lady Crorie, coming face to face with Sherlock and Rook.
“Hello, dearest brother of mine. Oh, I see you brought Rook with you.”
“Good evening.” Rook greeted.
Smirking, Arsene waited to see which of the three would speak first. It was Sherlock.
“Enjoying yourself?”
“Why yes,” Arsene acknowledged, “Thank you for…[Read more]

Crorie sped upstairs, checking the source of the projections. Until now, she didn’t think Arsene had resurfaced into her life. However, the person who installed these projectors was a cocky little showoff. And Arsene, was a showoff. This looked like something he’d do, if he could get away with it. If Arsene did this, he had to have access to thi…[Read more]

“War?” Pia drew closer, prepared to defend her betrothed’s people if need be.

“No, you aren’t.”

“What are you talking about?” Finn asked.

“she’s Thabian,” Ellie said with a nod.

“Oh”

“You’re not to blame for any of this,” Ellie told her, “I would just like to know what’s going on.”

“This mentions a war, but I can’t tell who or why,” Finn said still glued to the gold pieces.

“Could it be the war between our people and…[Read more]

Pia stiffened. “I am not my father, Ellie. Remember that.” She murmured fiercely.

finn sat down next to ellie who was poking the fire with a stick trying to get it going again. “so what exactly are we doing?” he asked.

“preparing some fish for breakfast,”
He laughed, “no, i mean on this adventure or whatever”

“oh. I’m not too sure, actually. we have been heading in that direction” she pointed south, “I gues we’ll see what…[Read more]