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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Ok so I have a rather unusual question for @everyone in here:
How would you guys feel if someone were to drop in an LGBT character?
I ask because I do have a bisexual character who I happen to be quite fond of, but the last thing I would want to do is make people uncomfortable! I ask because his sexuality is actually really, REALLY important…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@irishcelticredflowercrown would you like to try an interaction between Lorcan and Valencia?
@emily-waldorf Avin has some of the same insecurities as Kit – although in his case…they’re far beyond justifiable (I mean an orphaned commoner/outcast/ alleged criminal marrying a princess – no wonder Avin feels insecure about it!)
I’m really…[Read more]
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Miller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Yoooo! So um not sure if this should be here but gonna put this here anyway. Thank you in advance for your help.
So first I want to figure out how much a 16 or 17-year-old would be affected by murder and stuff. And I also want to figure out how brainwashing works. And I want to be brainwashing a six or seven-year-old. So how does murder affect…[Read more]
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Isaiah replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@scoutfinch190 There’s actually a fairly short answer here: no. Not really, no.
Our bodies really like to be around 98.6 degrees in Fahrenheit. Water freezes below 32F and melts at temperatures above that. If you were to be in an absolutely frozen wasteland and got a massive bloody gash, some of the blood outside your body could freeze. The blood…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Also, does anyone know what would happen if a character breathed in fine ice particles? would it cause them to almost drown?
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Nithel didn’t like Sherlock. Something about him grained on his chest. The lack of deference or respect for everyone else, but himself. But he knew the Star Breather loved him, so he chose love him as well, to wonder why he was what he was, even if Nithel didn’t like him. But, does the Star Breather really love this Sherlock? Does He really love…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey, does anyone know if an environment was sufficiently cold, could a wound freeze over and prevent the victim from bleeding out?
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Aw thank you!!! He’s one of my favorites to write he’s really cutee
Oh for the bow you need something light enough to work with your hair’s weight, stiff enough to pop and long enough to have the whispies, you might have to experiment with your own hair length and thickness you can get these on amazon for ten dollars and t…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy that second picture is Cal to perfection! Her facial expression is just *chef’s kiss*
I think I can get us out of this one. When the dance is over I have an idea for a challenge, though. Everybody gets into a situation where they have to help a) their favorite person in the castle and b) their least favorite.
Anika
“Do you…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
“As for where we met…” Kit’s gesture took in Avin’s well-cut clothes. “Well, looks like you’ve got some money…”
Sure–now.
“…So you probably know how rich families are – lineage becomes dynasty, marriage becomes power, kids become pawns…I’ll just say Val and I’ve been on opposite sides of that chess board since day 1.” He looked at…[Read more]
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ScoutFinch190 started the topic Advice on a Ghost? in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey everyone!
I was wondering if anyone had any tips on introducing sort of off-the-wall characters that haven’t been well-foreshadowed.
Here’s my situation:
The setting is a fantasy world that uses portals for space travel by the traveler briefly going through a dimension that is similar to the spiritual realm. People are trying to experiment…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
😂 Jade works at a fish farm and absolutely hates it, so a lot of negative fish sayings make their way into her vocabulary.
@rose-colored-fancy Nice drawings of Cal! The hair is really cool.
Jade paused in her dance to evaluate it just as Ophelia came near.
”Don’t make it too complicated. You can improvise; I’ll follow your lead. It’s ha…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
*creeps in with a cup of soda and glitter*
*peeks around*
Hi ya’ll I is late…XDDD
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Same bro same… *pats on the shoulder*
Aw thank you!!! He’s one of my favorites to write he’s really cutee
Oh for the bow you need something light enough to work with your hair’s weight, stiff enough to pop and long enough to have the whispies, you mig…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Bored out of his mind. That was eXaCtLy how Alessio was feeling…
He couldn’t afford to slow down.
Get somewhere marginally safe. Find Arsene. Where was that idiot now? Alessio wasn’t sure whether he was more miffed that Arsene wasn’t there, or that he was really scared for him. Because it was a stupid idea to catch feelings for a bankrob…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Calliope
Anika slipped on my boots and laced them up. Thankfully, I had rather big feet for my height, so they’d fit her alright.
I loved those boots. I’d had them for years, and they were well worn and scuffed by now.
Without the thick soles, I felt even smaller than usual. I crossed my arms and drew myself up to what my height would…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
And another one!

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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
I KNOW! When I get done with a story I’m usually sad. (okay, I finish things so seldom I can’t say ‘usually’). I feel like I’m saying goodbye to old friends. I mean, it’s not goodbye goodbye, but I’ve been intimately aquainted with them for months (or years) and now our relationship has to change. 🙁 sniff.
Exactly 😭 The GB trilog…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Haha, I knew it! XD You see, I’m used to writing in omniscient, so to try and write in the character castle gets me into trouble when I try to use others’ characters without knowing them, lol. Do you write in first person all the time, or just here?
That’s a great story for Kit and Valencia! I’m really glad they work it out. It seems…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
I never thought of it like that, but that is honestly such a perfect way of describing Kit XD
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Oh trust me you definitely are, but idk which tree either? Because there’s a LOT XD
Oh well, looks like we’ll find out soon enough
Kit:
“Only a brother-in-law.”
“So you’re married?”
It’s just another reminder that Avin’s an adult, unlike me.
I mean I guess I technically am as well, but I don’t really feel like it and besides, this guy is …[Read more]
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