E.Jo3

Greetings, more seasoned sci-fi writers! I am predominantly familiar with fantasy, and am currently writing a sci-fi, I wanted to ask about a couple ideas I had for the world:

• A material that can be used for artificial gravity?
  • I was thinking something along the lines of a material harvested from blackholes (or something along those lines…

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@emma-walker

That’s all right.

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The ship lifted off of the ground and quickly rose into the atmosphere.

Solstice watched as it left her and the others behind, trying to work through her tangle of emotions about being left behind.

“What do we do now, General?” Bo’ asked Zeinli. The remaining clones began falling back to Zeinli as the wol…[Read more]

@winter_rose
That’ll work fine. Sry for not responding, I’ve been trying to think of how to write this next bit and I’ve been busy too…

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The crew was trying desperately to get to the ship, but even the wolves could tell that the two Jedi didn’t want to harm them, and cut their way of escape.
“Zeinli!” Jaina called from the ramp.
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@emma-walker

So who do you think should get captured and who should be separated? Hmmm.

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Solstice reached the boarding ramp and turned back to look at those still running toward the ship. She spotted Cresh supporting an injured clone. The two were beginning to lag behind. Zeinli and Bo’ turned and defended the rear of the group, which c…[Read more]

@winter_rose That’s a good idea.

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Zeinli watched the padawans running toward them, but pointed to the ship, gesturing that they go. Jaina and Will were running just ahead of her, also towards the ship. Zeinli paused and made sure that every clone was on their way, becoming the caboose and following behind Bo’.
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@emma-walker

I had another idea. Maybe some characters get separated from the rest, and the main group has to leave without them. And then the separated characters rescue everyone on the battle cruiser.

If we were to do this maybe we could switch it up so the characters who haven’t seen a lot of each other are together.

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Solstice and Goane r…[Read more]

Yes. Lolol tis indeed. XD

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Zeinli watched the wolf people back down and begin to retreat.
“To the ship! Go, go, go!” She hollered.
Ivaylo and the king were already nearing it.
The clones all hurried to follow Zeinli and Will.
Jaina was looking out for the padawans as she followed.
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welp.

That’s a good idea

“Goaina” 😂 Perfect.

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“Sir, we’re holding them off for now, but it’s not long before they break through our lines,” the hologram of the wolf captain said. The wolf governor paced anxiously, stroking his chin in concentration.

“I’m calling for reinforcements,” the governor finally said.

“No,” Count Dooku’s hologram said. “You will not call fo…[Read more]

@winter_rose lol it’s okiii

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(decided to peak into the close connecting minds that is “Goaina” lol 😉 )

Jaina? What’s happening? 

Goane? You’re alive! 
Jaina’s joyful exclamation echoed through his head.
Goane smiled as he and Solstice hurried to the battle ahead. Then she added,
Just more battling. What else? 

We are on the way. 
Goane…[Read more]

@emma-walker

Sorry, I didn’t see your post until just now!!

And you’re fine, I’ve been a little busy anyways.

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Solstice and Goane quickly made their way through the smoking rubble of the droid factory. A heavy layer of ash and soot coated their clothes and skin. Twisted and deformed pieces of metal and machinery littered the groun…[Read more]

Sry for the wait, I just couldn’t think of what to write next Lolol XD

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“Set blasters to stun, all of you.” Zeinli commanded through her comm. “I’m not killing anyone today. We just need enough time to get the king to safety.” “Copy that.” Steady replied.
“Rodger, Rodger.” Reel said, then let out, “-No! I’m no droid! I meant.. Uh… Right…[Read more]

lol, you’re good.

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Ivaylo, Bo’, Gryphon, and the king charged out of the dark city streets and into the battle. Ivaylo offered cover for the others with his lightsaber while Gryphon and Bo’ fired at any droids within sight. They quickly reached Jaina and Zeinli’s sides and joined their efforts.

“What are you doing here?” Zeinli asked.

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(Sry it’s taken me a while lol…)

Zeinli glanced at the direction the padawans had gone, worry creased her brows.
They were making their way through the sea of smashed, blasted, and sliced battle droids, going through more as they came.
She sliced at more droids, dodging their blasts.
Will was doing the same beside her, and fellow clones and w…[Read more]

@rusted-knight

How does that affect an airship?

Depends – I suppose – on the genre and setting.

Fantasy – not the forum for it.

Sci-fi?  Well, most air-ships are go on the soft-side of sci-fi so you just need to be plausible and consistent enough that it doesn’t jerk the reader out of the story.

For example, if you say that ships can fly…[Read more]

@hannahrenner

Well, flying ships are quite a thing to read about or see in film. It is another matter to figure out how to make one fly. The current designs I have been working on use a combination of helium or similar material and large, high power engines. The real problem is the ones I am working on are warships. Armor is super heavy and…[Read more]

@rusted-knight

Yo.  Flying ships.

How’s your new design coming along?  And more importantly, how does it fly?

Whoa, that’d be an epic setting for a murder-mystery since it’d make it easier to explain why the sleuth is solving the crime instead of the police. Also just an epic novel setting in general, it looks so beautiful and exciting! I love the turkeys they looks like alien pilgrims.

Wow that’d be a constant…adventure. I know we’ve had to be pretty…[Read more]