Donna Darling

Okay, I’m not sure who is on here right now. Are you still wanting to write this @kjames0813. I don’t think we need fantasy at all for someone to burn a town. Though a good question is why does the villain burn down the town. I’m not entirely sure if the whole birthday present thing works with the story we have come up with. Does he do it cause…[Read more]

So we need to think about the time era and the size of the town. I’m guessing its pretty small. Are we thinking like a western town? What culture do these people come from… The villain could possibly come from somewhere outside the culture of this said town and the protagonist. Should the Villian be the same age, gender… etc

Is our town…[Read more]

I say do it. This is only our first war, so it’s ok if it’s not perfect. I know who the judge is. She’s lovely. It’s going to be fine.

I think we can definitely take this whole final conversation with the city burning and run with it. A few sentences with the right emotion are going to be enough to set the stage showing these two charact…[Read more]

So with what you all are saying the city burning in the end idea could still kind of fit!!! Like if the hero knows the villain is going to burn down the city and can’t stop him and in the end, the city burns down and everyone has to leave. So the last scene would kinda physically represent the burning of his old life and choosing something b…[Read more]

I also clap and cheer and whoop for @duskflower‘s third idea for the ending, and @duskflower‘s second idea for the story itself. Such as, what if the villain has kind of taken the protag under his wing and mentored him, intending to make the protag his successor? But when the villain starts asking the MC to do terrible things, the protagonist…[Read more]

Hey, everyone, shall we take a tally and begin writing?? I can’t wait to see what we come up with!!!

I thought another aspect that might help us narrow down the story would be to think about the character we want to write about and who they are.

Do you all have any new ideas or…[Read more]

Excellent, @donna-darling! I haven’t gotten anything written for two days XP

What if the story was third person somehow and the town is destroyed but somehow the would be hero has a reason to think he has begun to get through to the villain and in the end the town burns down and its really sad but it is about somehow the way they changed the villain or maybe the  vilian does have a major change of heart and nobody knows…[Read more]

@donna-darling

Thank you so much! That’s great to hear.

@donna-darling

I love your poem to bits! The idea of standing unafraid at the end of the world… I love it!!!

@donna-darling

sounds great! You go girl!

@donna-darling

i love that!

Looking forward to it, @donna-darling!

The prologue, because I’m stupid and forgot to post it at the beginning…

“Dedicated to the person this is based upon, who kindly let me write a story about them.

You know who you are, and hopefully you know what you need to do.”

…and the finale. The drive home… which I feel may leave many people unsatisfied. I guess we’ll…[Read more]

@donna-darling

Just to clarify I thought it was spectacular too. I was just legitimately freaked out. XD

@donna-darling I just finished Part 1, and my word, what an exciting and excellently written story. I greatly look forward to reading Part 2.